Kanade - My Soul Your Beats

Ok, so here are 2 of my sketches. The one with the merah jambu hair and green eyes is mistymaydawngo 's OC for Angel Beats! : Kiley!
The saat one is Zack Fair from FINAL Fantasi VII: CRISIS CORE copyright SQUAR ENIX. Tell me what anda think in the comments.

If anda want anda can ask me to draw your OC too but please provide a good huraian atau just some crappy picture to give me a idea. See my other sketch in the artikel about Katsune Iyo.

Yes, Kiley and Katsune look alike because I used the same model character Tifa Lockhart as their pose thing and so they look similar but I hope its not that vast of a similarity. Oh yeah and heres a fun thing anda can include in your comment:

Rate each pic (#1-Kiley atau #2-Zack) from this scale::
1-Terrible
2- anda could do better
3- Its a OK pic
4- Its awesome
5- Masterpiece

And be sure to point out anything I can work on. DO NOT WORRY ABOUT MY FEELINGS!!