Chapter:1: The Teen With The Scar: part 1
"oh no" I Emma, a fourteen tahun old girl, a firebender in a town of water benders, a member of the southern water tribe, a hidden enime of my Friends and family. berkata as I made a twenty foot flame of fire. As I did so I saw it , the api, kebakaran navy. "I Must tell the others" I berkata as I ran out of my hiding spot.
I got there just in time. " the api, kebakaran nation is coming into postitions" I yelled. I gatherd up all the children and went to check out if I missed anyone.
Sokka my boyfriend, the only warrior left in town ran upbyo me" Emma I Cinta anda if anything happens.."
"Sokka I Cinta you" then we kissed it was romantic but short
" I have to leave" he berkata as he went to get ready. He is the only warrior left because all the men left to fight in the war.
His sister katara went to round up all the elderly. Katara and my mom Kaki are the only water benders left in the southern water tribe. They have to keep it a secret because if the api, kebakaran nation found out they would die on the spot.
Then I heard it, the sound of metal breaking ice. I felt the rumble of the metal monster coming noisly towards us. I ran outside to see Sokka standing on the weak snow barrier and hearing katara screaming at him to get out of the way of the fast moving ship.
Then it broke through the barriar that was protecting us. It almost hit Sokka but the patch if snow he was standing on slid back. Finaly the earth shaking I mean snow shaking stoped. There was a noise of metal rubing metal as the point of the ship opened and in the door way was the api, kebakaran navy.
"oh no" I Emma, a fourteen tahun old girl, a firebender in a town of water benders, a member of the southern water tribe, a hidden enime of my Friends and family. berkata as I made a twenty foot flame of fire. As I did so I saw it , the api, kebakaran navy. "I Must tell the others" I berkata as I ran out of my hiding spot.
I got there just in time. " the api, kebakaran nation is coming into postitions" I yelled. I gatherd up all the children and went to check out if I missed anyone.
Sokka my boyfriend, the only warrior left in town ran upbyo me" Emma I Cinta anda if anything happens.."
"Sokka I Cinta you" then we kissed it was romantic but short
" I have to leave" he berkata as he went to get ready. He is the only warrior left because all the men left to fight in the war.
His sister katara went to round up all the elderly. Katara and my mom Kaki are the only water benders left in the southern water tribe. They have to keep it a secret because if the api, kebakaran nation found out they would die on the spot.
Then I heard it, the sound of metal breaking ice. I felt the rumble of the metal monster coming noisly towards us. I ran outside to see Sokka standing on the weak snow barrier and hearing katara screaming at him to get out of the way of the fast moving ship.
Then it broke through the barriar that was protecting us. It almost hit Sokka but the patch if snow he was standing on slid back. Finaly the earth shaking I mean snow shaking stoped. There was a noise of metal rubing metal as the point of the ship opened and in the door way was the api, kebakaran navy.
I know I did, and it's not just because of the Kataang like some people might assume of me, although that was just as if not lebih awkward and annoying as i imagined, but what made me mad was how they just ruined the characters!
None of them acted themsevles if anda ask me. Especially Zuko but not just him, Katara too and Sokka and Suki and Mai. The only characters that didn't change completly were Aang and Toph.
I'm sorry guys I will always Cinta the Gaang and the original series, but if this what the new series would be like if they did a continutation instead then thank god they didn't because I literally can't stand this.
So, I'm just going to pretend this was just a dumbass fanfiction but some *insert various insults here preferably curses* who doesn't know atau respect any of the characters, and then I will just make up my own story about how Zuko and Aang built Republic City and be happy.
None of them acted themsevles if anda ask me. Especially Zuko but not just him, Katara too and Sokka and Suki and Mai. The only characters that didn't change completly were Aang and Toph.
I'm sorry guys I will always Cinta the Gaang and the original series, but if this what the new series would be like if they did a continutation instead then thank god they didn't because I literally can't stand this.
So, I'm just going to pretend this was just a dumbass fanfiction but some *insert various insults here preferably curses* who doesn't know atau respect any of the characters, and then I will just make up my own story about how Zuko and Aang built Republic City and be happy.