I'm not going to put the whole thing on here. Instead, in a few days (hardly lebih than four days, as long as I don't forget XP), I'll put a link in the komen-komen below to the fanfiction on Fanfiction.net. Anyway, this won't be much to see; just a look at what might come on here. But I hope anda enjoy this rather small exerpt.
A saat Chance
Prologue
During the Fall
Here she was, in the middle of falling into insanity, yet it didn’t even feel like it. She felt like she was only venting out her anger and sorrow of her defeat, entangled in chains connected to the ground with no chance to escape on her own. api, kebakaran exploded from her mouth as she screamed and fell on her side. Yes, this wasn’t insane at all…
Yet the terrified faces of her two worst enemies stood before her, just watching her. Was it so hard to at least get her out of her restraints? She was a api, kebakaran Lord; she shouldn’t be beaten like this! It wasn’t fair!
Tears splattered from her face as she fell into hysterical crying. The recognition hit. She had lost. She was not api, kebakaran Lord, nor would she ever be. She had failed-failed her father, failed her nation, failed herself.
Finally, her brother and the Water Tribe girl left together, with her brother walking lebih carefully with his wounds slowing him down. Wounds she caused. However, she didn’t even feel triumphant over that small victory she gained. No one was listening to her cries and screams and insanity. Did anyone even care? It was a long time before she even heard footsteps come her way. sejak that time, she had calmed somewhat, and the skies were darkened, no longer red from the comet. She was breathing heavily but had stopped the tears from coming, and her voice was almost gone from all her yelling. api, kebakaran puffed from her mouth every other breath, but she simply ignored it.
She pulled her head up to see it wasn’t her brother atau even her father. If her father is here, she would have hope; she could be api, kebakaran Lord again, everything would be what they wanted, and the world would be theirs…
A saat Chance
Prologue
During the Fall
Here she was, in the middle of falling into insanity, yet it didn’t even feel like it. She felt like she was only venting out her anger and sorrow of her defeat, entangled in chains connected to the ground with no chance to escape on her own. api, kebakaran exploded from her mouth as she screamed and fell on her side. Yes, this wasn’t insane at all…
Yet the terrified faces of her two worst enemies stood before her, just watching her. Was it so hard to at least get her out of her restraints? She was a api, kebakaran Lord; she shouldn’t be beaten like this! It wasn’t fair!
Tears splattered from her face as she fell into hysterical crying. The recognition hit. She had lost. She was not api, kebakaran Lord, nor would she ever be. She had failed-failed her father, failed her nation, failed herself.
Finally, her brother and the Water Tribe girl left together, with her brother walking lebih carefully with his wounds slowing him down. Wounds she caused. However, she didn’t even feel triumphant over that small victory she gained. No one was listening to her cries and screams and insanity. Did anyone even care? It was a long time before she even heard footsteps come her way. sejak that time, she had calmed somewhat, and the skies were darkened, no longer red from the comet. She was breathing heavily but had stopped the tears from coming, and her voice was almost gone from all her yelling. api, kebakaran puffed from her mouth every other breath, but she simply ignored it.
She pulled her head up to see it wasn’t her brother atau even her father. If her father is here, she would have hope; she could be api, kebakaran Lord again, everything would be what they wanted, and the world would be theirs…
everyone is so pro zuko. and even though he helps aang lots of times and saves many lives. i Lost most of my respect wen he Ciuman katara. and to tell the truth i was scared they would end up together because katara once told she would end up with a powerfull bender and zuko is pretty powerful.he even tried suducing katara sejak telling her sad stories about his life and getting in the way of a lighting attack from azula to save katara. what a chop... he already has a girl back utama who throws needles at people.
the only thing i feel sorry for zuko is that his fathers a bastard and im sorry his mother disappeared.
its a good thing zuko stop being so angry all the time. he was really pising me off. i never knew what he wanted. so welcome to the light zuko.
even though aang is younge and kitara is obviously lebih mature, im glad they ended up together. like wow.
the only thing i feel sorry for zuko is that his fathers a bastard and im sorry his mother disappeared.
its a good thing zuko stop being so angry all the time. he was really pising me off. i never knew what he wanted. so welcome to the light zuko.
even though aang is younge and kitara is obviously lebih mature, im glad they ended up together. like wow.