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Well, some of anda lovely people berkata you'd like to read some of my stuff, I thought I'd post this thing on here, since I have no idea where i might be going with this when/if it's ever finished.
So, this is the first chapter of Dreamplanet, something I've wanted to write for a long time now, but only started on about two weeks ago. So far, I've got a plot for sixteen chapters, but the story I've planned is nowhere near finished sejak then..
One lebih important thing about this is, that, well, every chapter is (more atau less loosely) based on a dream I've had & that's why later on there may be...