istana, castle [xy xx] Runaway while anda can

I decided to make my first peminat fiction about istana, castle and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." istana, castle berkata looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" istana, castle stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." istana, castle whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." istana, castle berkata turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't anda sleep with...