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What did anda think of my story so far, if anda liked it tell me and if anda didnt like it tell me and if anda think i should continue to keep Penulisan it up here for anda to read tell me that too, its always good to hear from others.

Melrose Bennet is a 16 tahun old girl who lives in Florence, Oregon. She is the best runner on the school track team and while she isnt as good at paying attention in school she makes up for it sejak passing never the less. She lives with her parents and one brother who is the all bintang at everything in school, Tyler. The summer approaches and Melrose is one of those girls who dont really think that much about guys and romance she actually dispises the PDA community.
She decides to get a job over the summer at an ice cream kedai just down the jalan from a photoshop where she meets Kent. Kent is 3 years older than Melrose and not really someone she see's herself liking in any way. She hates him immediately and the lebih she does the lebih Kent finds it hard to ignore her atau stay away from her, though he shouldnt be with her in the first place he finds himself compelled with her soul and Melrose may just find true Cinta but she's not sure she wants it, not over the summer, not ever. Deep secrets are unraveled and the Paper kisses really do cut deep.
 What did anda think of my story so far, if anda liked it tell me and if anda didnt like it tell me and if anda think i should continue to keep Penulisan it up here for anda to read tell me that too, its always good to hear from others.
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ii Cinta that name... Melrose.... very pretty.
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kuykendall said:
I liked the what I seen as a summary, but it does seem familiar, I'm not exactly familiar with Twilight so I'm not making that sort of simlilarity. If anda wanna make a book that anda think people will read then that might be a good choice if anda think that anda sounded a bit like anda were repeating something, then it did sort of seem like it. I do however think you'd be a very good writer just pull your ideas from lebih than one genre then put them together because if anda pull it from just one then it could get boring. That is all! I hope I helped. :)
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Night-Sky said:
Hmm...I'm not entierly sure...
It seems kind of...familliar...
What genre is it?
"Paper kisses really do cut deep." oh, I like that line!
But, to be entierly honest, I'm very sorry but it sounds a little bit like Twilight.
I think maybe anda have ripped the idea off a little bit without meaning to. Very sorry! Please don't hate me!!!
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MadamOcta13 said:
I don't really get the whole "compelled with her soul" thing. It sounds kind of cheesy. Does it have any conflict? Because it doesn't sound too interesting at the moment.
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edward-lover456 said:
Yes... awesome story I want the pautan to them please!!!
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Heya said:
It goes too fast...sorry. So anda won't feel bad, I am a peminat of you!
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cloudcastle said:

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Hello fire_ice . . .

Maybe the following could help . . .

1 fair.

2 like.

3 love.

4 lust.

5 hate.

Perhaps to guide from number 5 to 1.

Story could have a happy ending.

Hope anda have a happy Thursday.

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