FanFiction.net Article: The Host Chapter 15 The Setup (9/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

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The Host Chapter 15 The Setup (9/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Elena and Bonnie were sitting outside the Grill, both having a lemonade, when both their phones rang.
“Bonnie” Bonnie said.
“Hello, Elena speaking” Elena said, trying not to give away anything and hoping Bonnie would be too caught up in her own conversation.
“It’s time” Damon said. “Meet me at the Boarding House. I’ll be in the car” He ended the conversation.
And so did Bonnie. “Elena, I’m so sorry, but I have to go” she apologized.
“Oh?” Elena berkata sheepish.
“Yeah, I’m having a tarikh tonight” Bonnie blushed.
“Really? That’s great! Who’s the lucky one?” Elena fired her curiosity.
“Ehm, I rather not say. At least not until it’s official” Bonnie said.
“Of course, I get it” Elena said. Bonnie put some money on the table. “See anda tomorrow?”
“Yeah, tell me all that happened” Elena waved as Bonnie walked away. The moment she was gone Elena jumped up and ran away as if she was being chased.

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Three's a Crowd chapter 8 The Ferris Wheel (1/10)(SPN)

posted by HaleyDewit

Cas opened his eyes and rolled them to left. Meg was sitting seterusnya to his bed. He looked down and noticed he was holding something in his hand. He rolled his eyes to the right and saw the machines and the perfusion leading some kind of fluid medication into his veins. He frowned and tried to pull all threads out of his body.
“No, Cas, don’t do that” Meg tried to stop him. “You have to get better”
Meg didn’t understand. Medication atau drugs was what triggered it. He wasn’t himself when he took them.
Cas opened his mouth to explain, but something entirely different was said.
“Get...

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Toxic Fanfic Reviews! Episode 4, Sonic, Tails, And Knuckles Go Fishing.

posted by deathding

Is it THAT HARD TO WRITE A STORY ABOUT A FAST HEDGEHOG!??!?!?!?!?!

The actual tajuk is called, "Sonic and Tails and Knuckles go fishing." which is just horrible grammar to ignore commas.

You know a peminat fiction is going to be AMAZING when there is even an error IN THE GODDAMN TITLE! >.<

Please, just shoot me now! I quit! I give up on my life, now please let me go!

......Fine, I'll review this....

Besides, it's not like me to do that anyways. BUT, I am warning you. People like this exist, people that write such horrid stories and call it a peminat fiction.... It blows my mind! And today, I crush one of the worst ones out there.

It's time to look at, "Sonic, Tails,...

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Clementine from "Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost"

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The Host Chapter 21 Light in the Dark (4/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

“We’re home, Damon” Elena said. She and Stefan were helping Damon reach the porch, something he’d rather do alone, thinking he’d recovered enough.
“I’m going to open the door” Stefan said. He let go of Damon and ran to the door and opened it. Then he walked back at Damon and Elena. When he wanted to help Damon enter Damon pushed his arm away.
“I don’t need your help” he berkata pissed, avoiding to look at him.
Stefan looked helplessly at his ex, but she gave him a ‘what did anda expect’ kind of look back. She helped Damon enter the house and Stefan walked behind them like...

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The Host Chapter 21 Light in the Dark (2/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Damon almost let go and fell back, but Stefan tightened his grip on him and pulled him up. They were outside, standing in the wreckage that used to be Bonnies house. Damon jerked his hand and walked away from his brother.
“Damon, wait…” but Damon walked to Katherine, who came his way. She lay her hands on his upper arms.
“Are anda alright? How do anda feel?” she asked worried.
“Like someone who’s been tortured” he berkata with a faint smile.
“I’m sorry I wasn’t there to help you” Katherine said. “I had to keep an eye on Stefan”
“It’s okay” Damon reassured her. “Elena...

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The Host Chapter 7 The Hunt (8/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

When the door slowly opened Stefan raced to the door and as soon as Elena got in he slammed it. Elena started breathing fast when she saw the fury in his eyes. He’d been drinking human blood again. “Where the hell have anda been?” Despite her fear Elena felt some anger too. “You have no right to act like a jealous boyfriend! anda don’t own me!” she yelled. Stefan gripped her shoulders and shook her. “Where anda with Damon? Answer me!” Tears rolled over Elena’s face. “Stop it, Stefan, you’re hurting me!” she sobbed. He let go of her and went with his fingers through his...

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The Host Chapter 4 Behind the Surface (3/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

A large bag of chips, a two liter bottle of cola and a television. lebih did one not need to get over a heartbreak, right? He let himself fall in the sofa, kerusi panjang and grabbed the remote controller. He pushed a button and the Simpsons came on. Homer Simpson was strangling Bart Simpson. “Ha, don’t anda just Cinta a classic?” Jeremy looked aside and saw Anna lying seterusnya to him, her feet comfortably on the coffee table. She put her hand in the bag and took some chips. “I hope anda don’t mind. Paprika are my favorite” she berkata and she put the chips in her mouth. “Is this your new strategy? Acting...

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The Horrible Truth cpt 2 The Time Travel part 2

posted by HaleyDewit

2009, San Francisco.
Piper was baking her famous cookies, biskut when Phoebe walked in in the kitchen. She stopped right in front of Piper. “Do I look like an idiot?”, she asked, expecting to hear no. Piper kept continuing her baking, when she said: “Is that a trick question?” She put the plate with baked cookies, biskut on the meja, jadual and looked at her younger sister, who seemed to be upset sejak her answer.
“Hey, Phoebes, I was just kidding”, she berkata in laughter. “You’re not an idiot and anda know it well damn too” “Good, ‘cause apparently Jason Dean thinks I clearly am”, Phoebe berkata really...

My True Cinta Chapter 16. Nessies point of veiw

posted by Twilightsauce

hei this is the l;atest chapter to the story, it is set when Nessie isfive months pregnant...x Hope anda enjoy and keep your eys peeled for the seterusnya chapter...x
Amber/Twilightsauce

I slipped mums wedding dress over my head, it fitted perfectly. Mum smiled and sighed as she wiped a joyous tear from my eye.
“Don’t cry baby, Alice will kill us if anda ruin your makeup she has spent all morning getting anda ready.” She laughed looking at me with a delighted expression on her face,
“Oh mum! I am so happy; Jake is waiting down there for me isn’t he?” I asked nervously. I had felt a little queasy...

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Toxic Fanfic Reviews! Episode 3, The Pokemon Story.

posted by deathding

Might as well throw in a joke to cheer anda up. But this won't prepare anda for the HELL that awaits you.

Might as well throw in a joke to cheer you up. But this won't prepare you for the HELL that awaits you.

Wow, didn't even give it a title. Bastard. And this is just a warning right here, read it carefully. I will not be responsible for your 3DS if anda threw up on it. I am not responsible for your suicide, atau anything. SO,

DANGERDANGERDANGER!
WARNING, EVERYONE WILL FIND THIS AS THE WORST GODDAMN PIECE OF SCRAP METAL THAT HAS EVER EXISTED, VIEWER DISCRETION SO F**KING ADVISED anda HAVE NO IDEA!!!!!!!!!

You can read my kegemaran fanfiction reviewer reviewing it here! ^___^

link

This fanfiction, and I CANNOT believe I am going to say this, but it is even WORSE than Creation Of A Dry Bones AND Faker.

QUADRUPLED...

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M.C. High School chapter 1

posted by Rosy_Posey

My alarm rang at 6 pm for high school of mistical creatures/students (a private and secret school). School starts at 8:30 pm for those who need to be shaded from the sun. the school is located in sunny californina near san diego.

i dragged my feet from my katil and headed down the hall to my sister's room to wake her up for our "breakfast" but to others it would be dinner. my mother had made pork chops with mash potatoes and peas. After the meal me and my sister went to go get ready. as we were about to leave we berkata good night to our mother.

The time was 7:15 and i got in my car to warm it up...

omg where is embers body!?

posted by cynder1

chapter 4
spyro and cynder were flying with sparx to where the 'incedent' took place ,suddendly sparx berkata 'there there!, thats where she commited suicide!' they all landed at the high cliff and saw how steep it was 'yep embers definately dead.' berkata spyro they then flew to the bottom of the cliff where they got a shock. embers body wasnt there 's-spyro? wheres embers body?' 'i dont know' 'its like she turned into dust' 'hey spyro we've got company!' a mass of grublins were heading right towards them and to be leading them happened to be ember in adult form 'e-ember?' spyro berkata 'the ember u...

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Three's a Crowd chapter 6 Death Wish (3/10)

posted by HaleyDewit

Meg took a bite from the waffle and frowned. “Did anda put Chocolate in it?” she asked, looking up at Cas.
“Yeah, Anna told me anda liked it as a human and since you’re human again…” Cas explained. “I wanted to do something nice for you”
“Hmm” Meg said, taking another bite from her waffle. “Seems to me that you’re trying to make up for something”
Cas bit his lip and sat down. He took Meg’s hand. “Yeah, I’ve been…quite a jerk to anda yesterday. But…the pain…it was really bad” he tried to explain.
Meg pulled her hand away. “Yeah, I get it” she answered a...

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Doppel Crossed chapter 16 The Traitor (6/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Rachel looked around her before she pressed the loceng of Ric’s loft.
“Rachel” Stefan berkata a little surprised, when he opened the door. “Come in”
“Are anda alone?” Rachel checked. Stefan nodded and she followed him inside. “I need to know something” she cut to the chase. “How do anda know I’m a werewolf?”
“It’s a full moon tonight and anda were Berlakon strange earlier” Stefan explained. “Plus I’m a vampire, I have learned to recognize them, even if they’re in human shape”
“Veronica will kill me if she finds out I’ve been talking to you” Rachel berkata scared...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 9 Complications (3/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Caroline was waiting in the doorway while Bonnie put on her shoes. They were going out for a walk in the garden.
“How’s life in here?” Caroline asked casual.
“ ‘s Okay, I guess” Bonnie said. “Little boring though”
Caroline scoffed. “I wish I could say the same” she mumbled.
“What do anda mean?” Bonnie asked concerned.
Caroline shook her head. “Come on, let’s go”
Five minit later they were walking through the garden. Caroline whistled. “This place really is beautiful”
“Caroline” Bonnie berkata a little harsh. “I know anda didn’t just come over. There’s something...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 8 The Autopsy (4/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Stefan and Rebekah were driving. They had stopped to get their selves a late night snack and now they were on their way home.
“Can anda try and call Damon for me, please?” Stefan asked, his eyes on the road. Rebekah conjured her phone and dialed Damon’s number, which Stefan had telah diberi her.
“Goes straight to voicemail” Rebekah said. She turned to Stefan. “I’m sure he’ll be okay. He’s got that boy looking out for him”
Stefan shook his head. “Derek’s just a teenager. Damon was in no good shape when I last saw him. I think he might be really sick”
“Then let’s go check on...

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What Happened in Colorado chapter 10 Prime Suspect (10/10)(Supernatural)

posted by HaleyDewit

Daphne was sitting on her bed, staring at the front page of the newspaper. She had wanted to give Meg the benefit of the doubt, since she knew Cas had a thing for her. But if she was a murderer Daphne had to keep her away from him. And in order to do that…
But how was she going to accomplish that? The security system was very…secure. She looked down. Maybe her bandage could be of use. No, that would be crazy. Although.
She took of her hospital baju and pinched her fingers underneath the bandage. Then she unrolled the bandage and cringed when she pulled off the last bit.
She heard a weird...