I know my sebelumnya fanfictions are terrible, so I'm going to try and make this good. Sorry if I don't portray them right.
《Ed's P.O.V.》
Alphonse and I got off of the train. We entered a small town called Odankaji. I groaned, "I'm huuuungryyyyyy!!!" Al chuckled. "Let's go find a place to eat, then." We began walking and soon got to a small outdoor resteraunt. Not long after we had sat down, a girl came over and said, "Tatsumaki!" An old man approached her. He smiled. "Hello, Kutsuu. Would anda like something to drink?" "Water... I'm going to borrow some lebih books." "As many as anda need." She ran into a small room and soon came out with some books. She sat down and looked through the pages. I looked at her. She had brown hair with an aqua green ponytail. Her eyes were midnight blue with kapur, limau nipis green tints. She was wearing a dark gray tanktop and black jeans, with brown boots, light gray gloves, and a light gray coat. She murmered, "So that's what he meant..." She grabbed the glass of water and took a long, slow sip. Her eyes turned to me once she set the glass down. She growled, "It's rude to stare, anda know!" I said, "I didn't mean anything sejak it, sorry." Al nodded. "We didn't mean to be rude." She scowled and grabbed the buku and walked off. The old man sighed. "I'm sorry about that. I'm Tatsumaki Yamato. Her name is Kutsuu Himura. She doesn't mean to be rude like that, she's been through hell, is why." Al said, "I-I don't mean to pry, but... What do anda mean that she's been through hell?"
Sorry if it was short. I hope anda like it. I'll post lebih chapters soon.
《Ed's P.O.V.》
Alphonse and I got off of the train. We entered a small town called Odankaji. I groaned, "I'm huuuungryyyyyy!!!" Al chuckled. "Let's go find a place to eat, then." We began walking and soon got to a small outdoor resteraunt. Not long after we had sat down, a girl came over and said, "Tatsumaki!" An old man approached her. He smiled. "Hello, Kutsuu. Would anda like something to drink?" "Water... I'm going to borrow some lebih books." "As many as anda need." She ran into a small room and soon came out with some books. She sat down and looked through the pages. I looked at her. She had brown hair with an aqua green ponytail. Her eyes were midnight blue with kapur, limau nipis green tints. She was wearing a dark gray tanktop and black jeans, with brown boots, light gray gloves, and a light gray coat. She murmered, "So that's what he meant..." She grabbed the glass of water and took a long, slow sip. Her eyes turned to me once she set the glass down. She growled, "It's rude to stare, anda know!" I said, "I didn't mean anything sejak it, sorry." Al nodded. "We didn't mean to be rude." She scowled and grabbed the buku and walked off. The old man sighed. "I'm sorry about that. I'm Tatsumaki Yamato. Her name is Kutsuu Himura. She doesn't mean to be rude like that, she's been through hell, is why." Al said, "I-I don't mean to pry, but... What do anda mean that she's been through hell?"
Sorry if it was short. I hope anda like it. I'll post lebih chapters soon.
