Harry Potter <3

Well,here's my first attempt to a short story :)

“Hey! Stop him! He’s stealing!!!!” the owner shouted. Ron ran as fast as he could, but he didn’t get far. Only a few yards from the kedai he collapsed to a large person and fell on the ground. The ring fell seterusnya to him and the man understood what was going on. He picked Ron and the ring off the floor and dragged him back to the jewelry shop. “I think this boy has something that’s yours” the man berkata looking at the kedai owner and he gave back the ring. “Thanks” the owner accepted in relief.
“What’s going on?” a familiar...

ok pple tell me REALLY what u think
i'm a MAJOR harry potter peminat and i read all the booksmore than 5 times in english and in french and watched all the movies... i swear like lebih than a HUNDRED times... exept one book ....
i was in Cinta with HP 4 really long and the idea of it to end and the fact that Fred and lebih characters that i Cinta will die KILLED ME!!! i Cinta sirius SOOOOOOO much.. and Fred 2 and when dumbledore and sirius died i was DEVISTADED!!! i couldn't stop crying for a bulan for both of them!!!!
and when the last book was published i bought it in both languages the first hari (btw...