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My Earth hari poem.. i wrote it in feburary and i had Mr.Thriller in mind when i wrote it. Do anda like it. No negative komen-komen unless its creative critisism:)

What is this we've done.
Don't anda realize what I, Me, You, Us, We have done to THEE.
Our utama for ever with no where else to go, the end of the road.
Go ahead drink the water, its' tates comes from you.
Fine as wine the air has Just the right amount of smoke and here I will choke with your factories blowing steam and your money making machines.
WE are destroying OUR selves, but it's okay.
someone will fix it right? They'll figure out something?
They'll figure out....
oh they....
NO! they who?
WE are they, and They created this disater so they shall help fix it.
Green is the color of our world no going back with it's filthy sources going black.
How about anda over there, Mr.Millionaire.
help us re-love the planet and re-build the world.
Peoples' success up there nose, Money is the answer to it all i suppose.
No?
Then what is?
there's other children that want toys and clothes, plants and Haiwan also have a need for their population to grow.
We must have forgotten about love.
L.O.V.E
anda hate me.
I hate you.
Unexceptable.
I shall not take, I shall not take atau let the world recieve hate.
Go ahead burn down another forest, but when anda chop down that pokok I hope you're thinking of me when there's no lebih air to breathe and anda all will wonder, how could this be?
I'll tell anda how.
Never mind, I already did.
Open up your hearts and realize the life we live.

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i have lebih on www.allpoetry.com/RobynnIvory
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Michael Jackson Jawapan

peterslover said:
This is beautifully written. Well done. People don't realize that they are; we, us, I, me. WE are all responsible for the planet. And anda shared that thought very well in your poem. anda should send your poem to the "Readers Digest" magazine. I think they would like to print it! I'm posting this most beautiful foto of a patch of green that is untouched sejak man, except for the dirt road.
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 This is beautifully written. Well done. People don't realize that they are; we, us, I, me. WE are all responsible for the planet. And anda shared that thought very well in your poem. anda should send your poem to the "Readers Digest" magazine. I think they would like to print it! I'm posting this most beautiful foto of a patch of green that is untouched sejak man, except for the dirt road.
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K5-HOWL said:
This poem was totally awesome like wicked! Wuv it :3
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 This poem was totally awesome like wicked! Wuv it :3
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Beautiful pic!!!!!!!! <3
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caligurl16 said:
I Cinta it! Beautiful!
I feel the same way...
<3
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liberiangirl_mj said:
I Cinta your poem!! anda write it in a beautiful way.. and is so true...
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 I Cinta your poem!! anda write it in a beautiful way.. and is so true...
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2468244 said:
*clap clap clap clap* AWESOME!!!!!! i Cinta it!!! Mr. Thriller would too!!!!! Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta IT!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox to u <3
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reneemonique said:
hehe i like your jalan name for michael,Mr.Thriller good one:)
Absalutly gob-smaked,its very well written,      ilovetheWORLD. I liked how anda added simple things like Cinta and Hate,children,forests,life and Hearts. Most of the things that Michael sang about,he'd be very proud and yes we all are kind of responsible for our world,earth and many of us dont,it teaches a great lesson:)<3 xx
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 hehe i like your jalan name for michael,Mr.Thriller good one:) Absalutly gob-smaked,its very well written, ilovetheWORLD. I liked how anda added simple things like Cinta and Hate,children,forests,life and Hearts. Most of the things that Michael sang about,he'd be very proud and yes we all are kind of responsible for our world,earth and many of us dont,it teaches a great lesson:)<3 xx
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wow Cinta the pic!
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