Back with the story......
Pixel: So what u- Ow!
Score: What happen?
Pixel: A stupid TW scratched me...
Score: *gasp* Are anda okay?
Pixel: Yea....but it's bleeding..
Score: Don't worry, I know somepony who can help
Pixel: Really? Who?
Score: AZURA!!!
Azura: yes?
Score: Do anda have any bandages?
Azura: yes, I do. Do anda need some?
Score: Yep
After Azura put some bandages on Pixel, Score explained everything that was happening, and asked him if he wanted to join, he berkata he was. Later, Score introduced her Friends to Pixel.
Brawny: Welcome to the herd brother
Pixel: *laughs*
Stormy: okay, now what?
Cotton Swirls: I want somepony else to join.
Nikki: Who?
Cotton Swirls: Well, just follow me.
The ponies followed Cotton Swirls, It was an jam of torture for the ponies except Cotton Swirls. She kept on talking and talking about how great blueberry Swirls is. Until Score and Nikki did something terrible......
Cotton Swirls: He is just so nice, once he did blah blah blah
Score: *whispers* hei Nikki
Nikki: *whispers* What?
Score: *whispers* Cotton Swirls and blueberry Swirls, sitting on a tree...
Nikki:....*whispers* K-I-SS-I-N-G...
Nikki&Score: *whispers* First comes love, then come marriage-
Stormy: what are u two ponies whispering about?
Score: Oh, nothing....hehe
Nikki: HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Score: Dude quiet!
Nikki: Ah can't handle it! It's too funny! Imagine them together?!?
AHAHAHAHAHA!
The 2 ponies fell on the floor rolling around laughing. Stormy, CS, Azura, Pixel, and Brawny thought they were CRAZY!!!
Azura: Are anda guys okay?
Stormy: Do anda need a ambulance?
Cotton Swirls: Why are anda guys laughing...
Pixel: ....like mainiacts?
Brawny: I think their pranking us..
Nikki: N-Nope hehe
Score: okay..hehe...okay
Brawny: anda guys done yet?
Nikki: Yeah..hehe....we're done
Score UhHuh
Cotton Swirls: Okay where was I? Oh- (bumps into a tree) Ow!
Azura: Ooo That's gotta hurt
Cotton Swirls: Hey! We're here!
All: YAY!!!
Cotton Swirls: (knocks on door)
*silence*
The door suddenly opens. And a brown male kuda, kuda kecil comes out of the house. He stares at Cotton Swirl for a huge moment.
BS: Can I help anda in something?
CS: BS! It's me! Cotton Swirls!
BS: Cotton Swirls?
CS: YEAH!
BS: Wait, were anda the kuda, kuda kecil in 3rd grade who got bit sejak a lizard?
CS: *rolls eyes* yes that was me.
Azura: *giggles*
BS:COTTON SWIRLS!!!! (Hugs her)
CS: (hugs him back) these are my friends.
BS: nice to meet anda all
CS: Look, we need your help to defeat Discord.
BS: Sure! I'll help!
All: Great!
Stormy: Okay, now, I want all of anda to meet somepony
All: Okay!
To be continued......
Pixel: So what u- Ow!
Score: What happen?
Pixel: A stupid TW scratched me...
Score: *gasp* Are anda okay?
Pixel: Yea....but it's bleeding..
Score: Don't worry, I know somepony who can help
Pixel: Really? Who?
Score: AZURA!!!
Azura: yes?
Score: Do anda have any bandages?
Azura: yes, I do. Do anda need some?
Score: Yep
After Azura put some bandages on Pixel, Score explained everything that was happening, and asked him if he wanted to join, he berkata he was. Later, Score introduced her Friends to Pixel.
Brawny: Welcome to the herd brother
Pixel: *laughs*
Stormy: okay, now what?
Cotton Swirls: I want somepony else to join.
Nikki: Who?
Cotton Swirls: Well, just follow me.
The ponies followed Cotton Swirls, It was an jam of torture for the ponies except Cotton Swirls. She kept on talking and talking about how great blueberry Swirls is. Until Score and Nikki did something terrible......
Cotton Swirls: He is just so nice, once he did blah blah blah
Score: *whispers* hei Nikki
Nikki: *whispers* What?
Score: *whispers* Cotton Swirls and blueberry Swirls, sitting on a tree...
Nikki:....*whispers* K-I-SS-I-N-G...
Nikki&Score: *whispers* First comes love, then come marriage-
Stormy: what are u two ponies whispering about?
Score: Oh, nothing....hehe
Nikki: HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Score: Dude quiet!
Nikki: Ah can't handle it! It's too funny! Imagine them together?!?
AHAHAHAHAHA!
The 2 ponies fell on the floor rolling around laughing. Stormy, CS, Azura, Pixel, and Brawny thought they were CRAZY!!!
Azura: Are anda guys okay?
Stormy: Do anda need a ambulance?
Cotton Swirls: Why are anda guys laughing...
Pixel: ....like mainiacts?
Brawny: I think their pranking us..
Nikki: N-Nope hehe
Score: okay..hehe...okay
Brawny: anda guys done yet?
Nikki: Yeah..hehe....we're done
Score UhHuh
Cotton Swirls: Okay where was I? Oh- (bumps into a tree) Ow!
Azura: Ooo That's gotta hurt
Cotton Swirls: Hey! We're here!
All: YAY!!!
Cotton Swirls: (knocks on door)
*silence*
The door suddenly opens. And a brown male kuda, kuda kecil comes out of the house. He stares at Cotton Swirl for a huge moment.
BS: Can I help anda in something?
CS: BS! It's me! Cotton Swirls!
BS: Cotton Swirls?
CS: YEAH!
BS: Wait, were anda the kuda, kuda kecil in 3rd grade who got bit sejak a lizard?
CS: *rolls eyes* yes that was me.
Azura: *giggles*
BS:COTTON SWIRLS!!!! (Hugs her)
CS: (hugs him back) these are my friends.
BS: nice to meet anda all
CS: Look, we need your help to defeat Discord.
BS: Sure! I'll help!
All: Great!
Stormy: Okay, now, I want all of anda to meet somepony
All: Okay!
To be continued......
one of the most infamous and hated episodes of the show.... and for good reason, too.
where to even start with this thing? it gets EVERYTHING wrong! literally everything! from the lame premise, to the horrible execution, the brutal butchering of the characters, the pathetic "comedy", the Student 6 being pushed to the sidelines, the mean-spirited tone.... i literally can't think of anything they got right in this episode.
people say this one would've been better if it happened during the earlier seasons (like from S1-S3), but for me personally: i think it would've been better if Non-Compete Clause NEVER happened at all. like seriously, anda could padam the episode from the keseluruhan canon, and nothing would change. no value would be lost.
this episode is nothing lebih than a waste of time and space.
where to even start with this thing? it gets EVERYTHING wrong! literally everything! from the lame premise, to the horrible execution, the brutal butchering of the characters, the pathetic "comedy", the Student 6 being pushed to the sidelines, the mean-spirited tone.... i literally can't think of anything they got right in this episode.
people say this one would've been better if it happened during the earlier seasons (like from S1-S3), but for me personally: i think it would've been better if Non-Compete Clause NEVER happened at all. like seriously, anda could padam the episode from the keseluruhan canon, and nothing would change. no value would be lost.
this episode is nothing lebih than a waste of time and space.
THE seterusnya DAY:
CRYSYAL EMPIRE:
Saten: Me?
Twilight: Yes.. Starlight really seems to like you, so anda can be the one to help Starlight find her old friend, Sunburst.
Saten: ... Can I bring Derpy?
Twilight: (giggles) of coarse anda can.. But Spike is going two, I don't have any jobs for him.
Saten: Fine, fine.
Twilight: Then it's settled! Shining Armor and I will head straight to the castle, and anda two can head straight to Sunburst's!
Spike: Aye-aye, Princess!
Starlight: [nervously] Uh-huh.
Twilight: (to Shining) Alright, big brother, let's go see this amazing baby pony!
Shining Armor: [snoring] Ahhh... the baby...
CRYSYAL EMPIRE:
Saten: Me?
Twilight: Yes.. Starlight really seems to like you, so anda can be the one to help Starlight find her old friend, Sunburst.
Saten: ... Can I bring Derpy?
Twilight: (giggles) of coarse anda can.. But Spike is going two, I don't have any jobs for him.
Saten: Fine, fine.
Twilight: Then it's settled! Shining Armor and I will head straight to the castle, and anda two can head straight to Sunburst's!
Spike: Aye-aye, Princess!
Starlight: [nervously] Uh-huh.
Twilight: (to Shining) Alright, big brother, let's go see this amazing baby pony!
Shining Armor: [snoring] Ahhh... the baby...