i thought it was quite good and i was happy for Peyton
but then things ended up bad and i didn't see the point in it as poor Peyton had lost 2 mums then!!

I thought it was a tad boring.

I liked it. I think Peyton needed some sort of mother figure, and it was needed for her to grow up a bit.

ritergrl I agree with you. The only bad thing was that Ellie had to die.

Just another whiney-reason for Peyton.

nothing can go good in her life, it was kind of annoying

^^ Peyton has never whined!! she didn't whine when she got shot, she was upset when Ellie died but even then she didn't whine, and when Derek attacked her twice she found it hard to cope with but she DIDNT go on about it, she never said "oh poor me why does this always happen" she just tried to cope!

I'd like to see you handle any of these things better -

AND UNLIKE Peyton i think if this did happen to me i would whine you would think after all that a person would be entitled to abit of whining!!!

It was an amazing storyline!