pratonton for my Fanfic

Sara-light Is it on Fanfiction.net?

PepperPenguin @Sara-light I started it, but I've only got two chapters up on fanfiction and have to redo them because I now realize that back when I started it, about a year ago or something, my characters were quite..... mary-sue...... ish.............

BirdG This pic is COOL! What is the story about? I'm curious. Is it an OC story?

PepperPenguin @BirdG Of course its one about two new female penguins at the zoo. *hears groans of exasperation* But before you cast it off, know that my characters are, in my opinion, no longer mary-sueish. I had to change a lot and now I already have the plot all figured out for this story and the sequel. All that's left to do is to get around to actually writing it all down... I'm probably going to make two versions. One will follow the storyline I chose from all my ideas. The other will be a 'you choose what happens' type of story, so I'll have to upload all the chapters at once. Summary: The new girls are different, and not necessarily in a good way. One seems a little... off. She never speaks, and very rarely looks people in the eye. The other is very secretive. When asked about her past she avoids the question altogether and smoothly guides the conversation toward a different topic. A disfunctional family. But when their lives and the lives of the boys are in danger, will their pasts be forcibly brought to light? Are they just two innocent females? Are they... dangerous? Hope that sounds interesting enough :)