Percy Jackson and The Olympians

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Thoughts on my made up prophecy? ^__^

My horrible attempt at a Prophecy for my fanfic. :D Be honest please... I need to know if it sounds catching and makes anda want to read lebih about it...

Four halfbloods shall embark on a quest
to the land of the rising sun
where what they seek shall rest.
Taken sejak the one slain sejak twins
'Tis the one seeking revenge, changing skins.
Three shall be of the eldest gods
while one shall be of the goddess of thoughts.
Succeed they might, fail they may
for one shall meet the end of their days
in that lurks Death.

So...what do anda think? Mysterious enough to keep the reader's attention? Gives away too much? FEEDBACK APPRECIATED! xx
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In the land that reeks Death* Sorry :P
cuteypuffgirl posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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I like it but who goes on the quest?
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wats the tajuk of the fanfic
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Percy Jackson and The Olympians Jawapan

Nicolicious said:
Great it's really mistifiying it's better than the one i suggested
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anda kidding? anda inspired me! :D
cuteypuffgirl posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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Really I inspired someone :O
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sideshowbobbart said:
I like it although I think it reveals a bit too much as we can immediatly guess who the four halfbloods shall be and it maybe should be a bit lebih mysterious ...
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Actually Zeus's kid will not be Thalia, she'll be an OC of mine.
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Nikita15 said:
It sounds awesome!!! Love, love, Cinta it!!
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Thanks :)
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silver93 said:
Um, I don't think Athena would appreciate being referred to as the Goddess of thoughts. It sounds like they're going to Japan, are anda incorporating Japanese Gods?
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percabethandchb said:
Its perfect 4 percy jackson!
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greeksrule11 said:
soory it's good but its to obvious and the four poeple on the quest so easy its percy Thalia and nico which are the "three shall be of the eldest gods" everyone one knows that the eldest gods which are male are zeus poseidon and hades.and the last is annabeth i mean serouisly "while one shall be of the goddess of thoughts." everyone knows athena is the only smart goddess with a child.
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Technically the eldest god who would have children is Demeter.
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mslone90 said:
It reveals too much information regarding what they are to do, and all letters must be capitalized in the beginning of each line.
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nixiedover said:
Most prophecies atau four atau six lines long, so there's that.
And no offense, but it wasn't that great a prophecy...
But that's just the prophecy itself, the plot and suspense of this book is just like, " What's gonna happen? tell me. TELL ME atau I EAT YOU."
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Minus the obviousness of who's going on the prophecy...
nixiedover posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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And some other stuff, but that's it
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ShortPerson said:
YES YES I WANT TO READ THIS! LINK?
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