do u like my story?

Since anda are Penulisan a story, anda should probably use proper grammar, no?

But I'm not too sure whether your book revolves around the romance between this main character atau whether it's lebih about her trying to survive. Either way, I don't really like romance and this story is quite overdone. Sorry, I'm not trying to be mean here, it's just my opinion. Please don't take it personally.

It does sound interesting. Hopefully if anda plan on posting it here anda won't use that type of grammar, because although some (like me) make an effort to try to understand as we read it, others will simply jalang, perempuan jalang about it (No offense to those who will). So just a suggestion: Type it in great grammar for all to read and enjoy. :)

And again, it sounds interesting. Don't know enough to like atau dislike, but it grasped my attention. Good job for doing that because I don't like romance that much xD