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what do anda think about this?!!!?

 MJangellover posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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ScottishChic said:
Your poem was amazing, I wish I could write puisi like that!
Good job!!!
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thanks Much!!!,god bless anda !!!!
MJangellover posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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You're welcome! :D
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MrOrange16 said:
Well, your rhyming scheme seems to lack consistency.
As well as the rythm on each line; too many syllables here, then too little there. It doesn't flow well.
But the words and thought process of the poem was fine.
Overall, though, I thought it was adequate. Could be better, could be worse. I apologize if I'm being too critical.
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