School Project! I have to make a Dystopian Movie, and this is my plot. Please tell me how good it is.

Haha XD that's cute

This reminds me a lot of Dewsparkle's RP--you might want to change it a little bit. But over all sounds good.

Often, dystopian Filem involve government. I would suggest trying to find a way to tie in a corrupt totalitarian government in with this, like have the government doing this in order to create super soldiers to help in a war that they are waging to take land from a neighboring democratic country.

Don't think I don't know what anda doing! >:)

the plot is flat and not interesting
as stated beforehand, dystopian Filem are set around the government restricting the rights atau oppressing the masses in a certain manner. dystopian Filem can also revolve around there being no government; an anarchy if anda will.
the idea of the plot is thoroughly flawed since it fails to provide necessary detail. "half human half animal" can be replaced w/ "mutants" atau "genetically altered beings". the soalan as to "why" all of this is happening fails to be addressed, lebih importantly why nick has to save the mutants. who is he saving them from, anyway?

anda seriously need to address the faults in your keseluruhan idea if anda want to get anywhere with it. everything must be accounted for atau the script goes nowhere