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Can i get someone's opinion PLEASE

Okay I've written a story but can someone tell em if they like the story line.
A girl is telah diberi a kalung sejak a gypsy while travelling with her family, and they find a stray dog. While driving her family has a car crash. She and the dog survive. She is taken to the hospital and while there she dicovers she can read minds and travel to a differnt world in her sleep. She figures out the kalung is helping her with this....jeez that was a long explanation. If anda want a better idea, some of it is telah diposkan on here under the name Alyria. Okay I'm going to stop talking now =)
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IF anda want to read it just type in Alyria in the cari box and it should come up
Free_Spirit posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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It's not something I'm particularly interested in, however, anda have a good story on your hands. Work on your grammar, and anda may have lebih potential than anda could imagine. Add some lebih detail, it's very vaguely described in your intro, and the story's a bit hard to grasp the concept without rereading.
j1edwardcullen7 posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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cool thanks for the critism, alot of people don't give critism afraid of hurting people. And we might run into a few grammar problems =)
Free_Spirit posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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oh and I'll also desrcibe it lebih for people. Thanks
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lilred96 said:
yeah sure i would Cinta too read lebih but can anda send me a link to the first chap?
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sweet_n_silly said:
i think it sounds pretty good
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Aisuanime said:
Sounds good, and unique.
Post the soalan on the Penulisan club and a lot of people would view and answer X)
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j1edwardcullen7 said:
My answer's a komen ^.
Mine's similar. It's about a girl who died twice and is now like the grim reaper, where she claims lives in her sleep, sejak becoming the person - and doesn't know how to control it. :D
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cool can i have a link to your story?
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