I need somebody's opinion....

make a web comic where there is a serial killer in town and an investigator gathers 6 possible suspects but overtime they die one sejak one until the last suspect is revealed as the final murder victim of the real suspect who framed all of them in the first place, later revealed to be the writer and producer of the web comic

They're a whole lot better than my attempted drawings.

Broooo, that looks pretty good.

Looks good, Aqua

anda have potential. Just a LITTLE BIT of lebih practice and you're ready for your own Manga series !!!!

You've improved a lot in a short time- that's great!
If anda want to make your own web comic, I say go on ahead. I'm sure anda could manage.

if anda really want it nothing will stop you
i don't see much difference between the two drawings
but they are pretty and nicely done

Oh, these are great drawings, and anda seem to have improved quite a lot, considering the first one is only one bulan old.
As for the webcomic, I say go for it, but here's a warning: they take an EXTREME amount of time, and some pages are very likely to torture you. Take it from someone who's attempted doing this before. ^^;

Well they're a lot better than anything I can draw. And ya I think you've improved enough.

Wow, anda improved a lot over the course of one friggin month. I think anda should go ahead and try for an amateur webcomic :)

One tip - shade the hair in the direction the hair is going with a ton of individual pencil atau pen atau whatever strokes, and make the bahagian, atas of the hair a little lighter than everything else. And make the bottom of the hair more... freely drawn? (Can't explain myself very well, can I?)

But anyway, good luck!!!

I'm no artist in fact i'm poop at drawing and anda have some serious skill. You're latest drawing is much better then your earlier work but as a life-long Anime peminat anda need to implement lebih detail and movement into your art-work/ Make it seem like its' 3d without being 3d (if anda get my meaning) Your bunny of april 19th is very falt and obviously 2d something i would see in a background as a poster etc, anda may 27h is a lot better, fuller figure lebih detail but lacking that umph i see in Manga novels. Yes it is worthy of being an amateur web comic (believe me i've seen worse!) and i can't wait to hear the story behind your character but try to fill her out more, lebih details, lebih movement. You'll be a brilliant Manga artist one day, hone your skills to the full!

Cinta your art, I can tell anda have really improved and it looks awesome!