my first Fanfic!~ummm...i suck at this stuff if u want to know how badly then read it
"Alice are anda sure Jack's gonna show" Greg asked
" YES of course why wouldnt he" I berkata quickly in excitment...
" Well i dont why he wouldnt but it's pourin outside and he if dont tunjuk you'll have to walk utama in the freezing rain because i'll be gone and i dont want that " he berkata sounding quite mad u could hear it in his voice..
" Ok ok" I berkata " Why dont anda leave me here with the car and anda walk home"
I giggled and he looked at and me then & said
" Yea sure so i can freeze my butt off on the way home! forget it! " playful now not angry any more..
" OK! I got it u go utama now cause he just pulled up and no worries "
I gave Greg a hug and berkata goodbye then he left. He's my brother sejak the way...I ran up to Jack the guy that just so happened to steel my hati, tengah-tengah jumped up and hugged him i nearly died the last time we had to part from eachother finally jack put me down and looked me all over saving my eyes for last as ushual and when he looks into my eyes I loose my breath and I swear my hati, tengah-tengah skips a beat I was deadly in Cinta with him and just his eyes made me long to see him lebih and lebih and lebih and yet he was here finally I snapped out of thought and realized that we'd been standin there for like 5minutes staring into eachother's eyes he chuckled grabed my legs and swept me off my feet then pulled my face to his and kissed me, doing so carfully and trying not to draw attention but oh I could've died right there it wouldn't of mattered cuz he would be with me and I wouldn't notice it..the passion of the Ciuman could set the streets on api, kebakaran but I wouldn't of noticed it either though.....
"Okay We're finally Here" he berkata taking the blindfold off of my eyes i looked around me in amazement it was raining hard but we were under a little roof on a balcony with a perfect view of the city, London stretched out before us beutiful and it set the mood right for the soalan i wanted to ask him but distracted i totally forgot about the soalan and had a nice makan malam, majlis makan malam and fun with Jack after we ate he blindfolded me again then he whispered into my ear softly
"You dont know where we are and i want to keep it like that if u dont mind"then he kissed my cheek grabbed my elbow & lead me away... we had a few words on the way but i kept silent and he must of been having fun with the blindfold cause every few minit atau so he'd chuckle atau giggle over something...when the blindfold was finally tooken off Jack had me in one of the parks under a little canopy then he berkata it was his turn for the questioning and I had to answer atleast five before he really shot them at me and the funny thing is he seemed interested in every answer I gave him One soalan was "If anda Cinta me tell me u do and then we will continue" I answered in the most romantic way I could without over doing it atau embarrising myself "I Cinta anda Jack Ward and i always will u mencuri my hati, tengah-tengah first glance and still u have it an-" at that Jack got up grabbed my waist & carfully pulled me off the little stone bench and onto his lap then he put his hand on my shoulder and pulled it down carfully he kissed from my cheek to the my jawbone and suddenly he stopped right there drew back to look into my eyes and after a moment finally he kissed me this time since we were alone he wasnt so carful with the way he kissed me I liked it best like that and after a few lebih moments we drew back and stared at eachother breathless it was just the smell of his breath and taste of his lips that dizzied me and i Lost my breathe completely when he grabbed my waist and threw me over his shoulders I smacked his back with a playful swap then berkata in a pleeding voice"Put me down plz Jack 'o Jack plz put me down"
at that he chuckled and put me down he put his hand out and I took it then we begin to walk and Jack started on the soalan again.
After the walk was done he took two cloaks from his bag because it was starting poor down rain he didnt want me sick and i wouldnt wear one unless he did so he put his on first it was very black it was leather and it seemed to smell of somthing good Freezia & Ros he gave me mind and i slid it on it smelled of fresh silk on the inside it was silk and leather on the outside it was also a black but sort of purple...finally he stopped in front of a door and Jack berkata that this was the end of our trail and that we still had three hours till i needed to return to the refuge of a utama and he was about to say something else when finally i stood my ground pulled the jubah, berjubah hud, hood down & asked jack the couple of soalan that had been bothering me all day"Am i Pretty" I asked him and to my dismay Jack berkata "No" without hesitation ok so i moved to the seterusnya question" Would u want to be with me forever" again without hesitation Jack answered "No" and my hati, tengah-tengah sank but i had to continue..then i asked the last question..." If i walked away right now would anda cry" and he gave me his answer quick without hesitation again but this time softly"No" at that i fell apart and started to walk away Tears streaming down my face but just as i took my saat step Jack grabbed my arm pulled me around to face him looked at me in awe then he reached up wiped away the tears with his hand and berkata *********
"You're not pretty Alice you're Beutiful, I dont want to be with anda forever, I NEED to be with anda forever....And i won't cry if you'd walk away I'd Die" with that berkata he grabbed me & kissed me I Tangled my fingers in his hair and I couldnt let go of him nor did he the will-power to let go of his firm grip around my waist....~~THE*END~~
Alice's Love Jack
Alice's Brother Gregory or Greg