Sonic peminat Characters Article: Chris the Mechahog, the Failed Project (Chapter 1) Project: Ultimate Life Form

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Chris the Mechahog, the Failed Project (Chapter 1) Project: Ultimate Life Form

posted by ripperoo1

An early interpratation of Chris.

Shadow was walking through the ruins of Ark. He coughed in the debree. He had a flashback of Maria. He sniffed. He looked at a broken panel. It had a picture of a blob with a head and tiny writing. He remembered that from when the Ark was invaded with the Artifical Chaos. Then he looked at something not that familiar. It was a giant capsule with a few cracks in it and a body. It had a green liquid inside. "What's this?" Shadow said. He punched the capsule open. The liquid poured out. Shadow picked up a stick and poked the body. "Ha. Squishy." He continued poking at him. "SQUISHY SQUISHY SQUISHY!" He said, obviously amused. One of the body's eyes slightly opened. Shadow stopped poking and took a step back. The eye opened slightly more. A little bit more... till it was compeletely open. The other quickly opened. Shadow took 10 steps back. The body slowly stood up. He shook to get some of the liquid off and he blinked. "I... smell... WAFFLES!" The body said. Shadow got a confused look on his face. "I stared in amezement at THIS?!" He berkata angrily. "OH HAI!" the body said. "MY NAME'S CHRIS WHAT'S YOUR NAME OH COOL WE HAZ SO MUCH IN COMMON anda LIKE pizza OH I DO TOO DON'T anda JUST LOVE-" Shadow interuppted with "SHUT UP." "Mmkay!" Chris said. "So, what's your name?" Chris asked. "I'm Shadow, the Ultimate Life Form. And you?" Shadow said. "I'm Chris the Mechahog. But don't tell anyone that I'm a mechahog! And anda do sound familiar. Weren't anda created sejak Dr. Gerald Robotnik?" Chris said. "Yes. And how do anda know?" Shadow asked. "I dunno..." Chris said, in unusion. Shadow picked up a panel. At the top, It said, "Project: Ultimate Life Form". Shadow read it aloud.
End of chapter one
Chapter two coming soon!

Another early interpratation of Chris.

Giz_4ever, Rennerocks and 2 others like this

lili11p Awsome story so far! When is part 2 coming?

ripperoo1 Tomorrow.

MephilesTheDark LOL'D AT CAN YOU FEEL THE SUNSHINE. Whyyyy do I get the idea Shadow does not approve of his new companion? xD

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The Descendent - (Chapter 2) Help, I'm Starved and on the Run!

posted by ripperoo1

Sorry about the delay on chapter two.... Well anyways, here is the link to chapter one if anda missed it.
link
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Where we left off....
"Hey, what are anda doing?!" A prisoner shouted. lebih heads of prisoners turned to him. They ran to him, but it was too late. He placed the bottle in the middle of the pentagram and started murmuring strange sounds under his breath. The bottle started glowing and shaking. Finally, the deep scarlet turned into a deep green. He picked up the bottle and started drinking.
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The Adventures of Spike and Windy Chapter 8- A Darker Spike

posted by Shadmaria1

THE EGGMAN MECH whatched as the train passed by; then he threw a sticky bomb on it and set the timer for 3:00. The bot flew off.

Trance let Windy go.
"Were are anda guys going?" he asked Windy.
"Wherever the train takes us."
Trance laughed.
"Same as always eh? I'm glad to see that anda brought along your boyfreind Spike."
Windy turned a little red in the face.
"He is NOT my boyfreind!"
"Is too"
"Is not!"
"Too!"
"NOT!"
"To!"
They argued for some time.
"NOT!!!!!" Windy yelled while covering her face trying not to giggle a bit.
Trance looked at Spike.
"Just joking around a little!"
Spike didn't answer. He thought...

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The Adventures of Spike and Windy Chapter 7 - Enter Trance Techno

posted by Shadmaria1

THEY STOOD WAITING for the train. They were at an opening far into the wood.
Spike bent over to dig out something golden. He found it was a power ring, but it felt different.
It had a different aura.
Spike slipped it into his pocket.
"We're just gonna JUMP on a moving train?!" yelled out Windy, unaware that she was trembeling like an aspen leaf.
Storm looked at her.
"Do anda wanna take antoher chance of flying?"
Windy froze. Then she found herself inching twoard Spike almost in a gesture of protection.
In the distance a train whistle cried. This made Kitty a bit lebih alert.
The train sped by. They all...

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The hunger games chapter 3, the lake

posted by aly001

"This is were I found the blanket Emily." AJ berkata to Emily. "Ok thank anda AJ."Emily berkata to AJ only to find out that she was gone."She left me! But why?" Emily was mad now, she then heard something."Foot steps, must be Jisseca!""EMILY HELP!" Jisseca berkata yelling out.""It is Jisseca! I need to save her!" Emily almost yelled out, but did it some thing was blocking her mouth."Shhh.... Don't make a sound." Some one berkata in a whisper voice. Then she was sleeping, but thinking:"Who was it? Was it AJ? No. Was it Sonic? No but it was some thing blue! Sonic, AJ who else? Star, no she's yellow. But who...

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Phoenix's Opinion on Gary-Stus/Mary-Sues (Includes a FAQ)

posted by PhoenixRoyale

First off...This is just an opinion. >:/ Don't bash me just because your character is a Gary-Stu atau Mary-Sue. That is YOUR fault for designing your character that way.

Now, there are many Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues EVERYWHERE. If anda don't know the whole issue, here's some soalan I will answer;

What is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?
A Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu is a character that has many abilities, has no flaws, AND everybody loves them. The real name for these types of characters are a godmodder. A Mary-Sue is a female godmodder, and a Gary-Stu is a male.

Why are they bad?
They are unoriginal, overdone, and...

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The Phoęnix's Ash part one

posted by sierradawn9

As the fox noisily sloshed through the muck and rain,he thought of where he was going.The Science Centre,which was almost abandoned,except for the mad scientist he worked for.It had been closed down not even a bulan ago,still in good shape,which is why Dr. finch inhabits it.Dr. finch was claimed to be the most insane man in the world, but the fox wouldn't believe it.Never.
He knew he was close.He could already see the very bahagian, atas of the centre,a dark,metallic dome.The young fox knew his mentor was working on a secret project,because even he wasn't allowed to see it.He had only caught glimpses...

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Ningizzida the Hedgehog character chart.

posted by MephilesTheDark

Character Chart
Character's full name: Ningizzida the Hedgehog.
Reason atau meaning of name: Named after the Assirian god of snakes and serpents, unknown why.
Character's nickname: Giz.
Reason for nickname: One of his alleys started calling him that for awhile, but it never
really stuck. Ningizzida prefers his whole name.
Birth date: Unknown.

Physical appearance
Age: Ancient.
How old does he/she appear: 18-22.
Weight: Around 85 lbs.
Height: 3"8
Body build: Slender, sleek, and built for speed and agility over power. Has well develouped
calf muscles.
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: Blood red, with...

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How to Write a Sonic peminat Fiction in Five Easy Steps

posted by Milesprowerfan

Shadow & Rouge; Night and hari Difference.

Shadow & Rouge; Night and Day Difference.

“… There might have been a time when anda actually thought about others, but now it’s just become, ‘Get the villain out of the way and be proclaimed as a hero once more!’ I just don’t want anda to become something that anda don’t want to be.” – Lil the Cat from “The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul.”

Do anda remember the first time anda ever drew your peminat character? When anda created him/her, anda had thought everything out; who they dated, what they wore, and if they had any powers. Believe me when I say that peminat characters are the best characters in the world. Their stories...