Okay. So in class the other hari we learned about this structure that a lot of the old myths and classics that involved "heroes" would use, and as we were learning about it, IT FIT PJO PERFECTLY. So I was thinking I'd copy it onto here so if any of anda are thinking about Penulisan a fanfic and needed somee guidance.. I put examples from PJO in parentheses, but this model can be seen in LOTS of other stories as well (HP, the Matrix...) well, here it is!:D
PHASE ONE: Separation
-The Call: An opportunity to face the unknown, the hero chooses it atau is dragged into it unwillingly. (e.g. When Percy is at the museum, on vacation, fighting the minotaur... basically the beginning of TLT)
-The Herald: Encourages the hero to respond to the call. (Chiron as Mr. Brunner telling Percy he would need to answer his question, preparing Percy for the quest..)
The Threshold: The springboard for adventure (When Percy enters CHB, atau when he is granted a quest)
Guardians: Protect the hero from things he is not ready for and point the way. (Chiron, maybe Annabeth. Both protect Percy from the knowledge of the Titans possibly resurrecting, also protect him from hearing the prophecy)
Helpers: Provide the hero with direction. (Obviously, Grover and Annabeth, but in later buku could also be other quest-mates)
Mentors: Keep the hero focused on his goal. (Annabeth keeping Percy focused while he's on quests, Chrion keeping him focued when he is at CHB)
PHASE TWO: Initiation
Rite of Passage (When Percy fights the minotaur, atau when he fights the Furies on the bus)
Challenges: journey outward atau inward, face temptations, discover who is a helper and who is a tempter. (Basically, the entire quest up until they reach LA, they are journeying [duh], temptation at Lotus Casino, Ares is a tempter, Annabeth and Grover are true friends)
The Abyss: Greatest challenge of the journe, facing a fear, hero may want to give up. (When Percy meets Hades- Fear that it was never Hades to begin with, Hades has his mom, he can't save her. Possibly when Luke betrays him)
PHASE THREE: Transformation
Death and Rebirth: Hero may literally die, atau experience a reversal of attitude, fear to courage, ignorance to enlightenment (Percy becomes braver, willing to let his mom fight her own battles, lebih confident in himself, though of course, he never actually dies)
The Revelation: New Insight atau enlightenment (Percy discovers Luke is a traitor.. though this one is not as clear)
The Atonement: The imbalance which sent the hero into the journey has been harmonized (Percy returns Zeus's master bolt, comes to terms with his dad)
PHASE FOUR: Return
The Gift: New level of skill atau knowledge, share with community, willing to suffer atau die for it, new confdence, perception, rights and responsibilities. (Percy has a greater connection to camp, lebih accepted, willing to protect his riends with his life, lebih mature)
OKAY. phew. that was long. Anyways, as anda probably noticed, the examples are not in chronological order, so its not like this is a set-in-stone model. In fact, there is no need to follow this at all... whatsoever.. Just an example of the model used often sejak authors to describe the Hero's Journey
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PHASE ONE: Separation
-The Call: An opportunity to face the unknown, the hero chooses it atau is dragged into it unwillingly. (e.g. When Percy is at the museum, on vacation, fighting the minotaur... basically the beginning of TLT)
-The Herald: Encourages the hero to respond to the call. (Chiron as Mr. Brunner telling Percy he would need to answer his question, preparing Percy for the quest..)
The Threshold: The springboard for adventure (When Percy enters CHB, atau when he is granted a quest)
Guardians: Protect the hero from things he is not ready for and point the way. (Chiron, maybe Annabeth. Both protect Percy from the knowledge of the Titans possibly resurrecting, also protect him from hearing the prophecy)
Helpers: Provide the hero with direction. (Obviously, Grover and Annabeth, but in later buku could also be other quest-mates)
Mentors: Keep the hero focused on his goal. (Annabeth keeping Percy focused while he's on quests, Chrion keeping him focued when he is at CHB)
PHASE TWO: Initiation
Rite of Passage (When Percy fights the minotaur, atau when he fights the Furies on the bus)
Challenges: journey outward atau inward, face temptations, discover who is a helper and who is a tempter. (Basically, the entire quest up until they reach LA, they are journeying [duh], temptation at Lotus Casino, Ares is a tempter, Annabeth and Grover are true friends)
The Abyss: Greatest challenge of the journe, facing a fear, hero may want to give up. (When Percy meets Hades- Fear that it was never Hades to begin with, Hades has his mom, he can't save her. Possibly when Luke betrays him)
PHASE THREE: Transformation
Death and Rebirth: Hero may literally die, atau experience a reversal of attitude, fear to courage, ignorance to enlightenment (Percy becomes braver, willing to let his mom fight her own battles, lebih confident in himself, though of course, he never actually dies)
The Revelation: New Insight atau enlightenment (Percy discovers Luke is a traitor.. though this one is not as clear)
The Atonement: The imbalance which sent the hero into the journey has been harmonized (Percy returns Zeus's master bolt, comes to terms with his dad)
PHASE FOUR: Return
The Gift: New level of skill atau knowledge, share with community, willing to suffer atau die for it, new confdence, perception, rights and responsibilities. (Percy has a greater connection to camp, lebih accepted, willing to protect his riends with his life, lebih mature)
OKAY. phew. that was long. Anyways, as anda probably noticed, the examples are not in chronological order, so its not like this is a set-in-stone model. In fact, there is no need to follow this at all... whatsoever.. Just an example of the model used often sejak authors to describe the Hero's Journey
Love, SeaweedBrain:3
Hello this is my first fanfic so go easy on me LOL okay well here it goes komen please for feedback
Chapter 1
The Eternal City
I felt cold, it was dark, and i was underwater i
thought wait how can i be underwater for so long then i saw something above the water it look like some kinda dog thing i didn't know what to expect so i went up to the water and saw a serigala, wolf then the serigala, wolf spoke to me but didn't open her mouth she berkata "Who are you" i was about to respond normally but i couldn't honestly remember i berkata to the serigala, wolf "i don't know where and i" "your in the eternal city but i don't see how anda got in here this city has great defensive dinding around it and guards all around" then out of know where an Arrow shot straight for my face and i dodged it at the last saat and berkata to the serigala, wolf "tell the guards to stop" "No anda prove your worth here" then out of nowhere i hear a loud growling sound
Chapter 1
The Eternal City
I felt cold, it was dark, and i was underwater i
thought wait how can i be underwater for so long then i saw something above the water it look like some kinda dog thing i didn't know what to expect so i went up to the water and saw a serigala, wolf then the serigala, wolf spoke to me but didn't open her mouth she berkata "Who are you" i was about to respond normally but i couldn't honestly remember i berkata to the serigala, wolf "i don't know where and i" "your in the eternal city but i don't see how anda got in here this city has great defensive dinding around it and guards all around" then out of know where an Arrow shot straight for my face and i dodged it at the last saat and berkata to the serigala, wolf "tell the guards to stop" "No anda prove your worth here" then out of nowhere i hear a loud growling sound
Hellllllllooooooo!
JosephineSilver here. As some of anda may know, at the moment I have 3 forum going - and they are awesome. Anyway, here are some things that anda can expect from me in 2012:
The Final War Trilogy
Okay, this will be the sequel series to my version of the Heroes of Olympus, called Camp Half-Blood's Blogs. It will be out sometime in November.
The Olympian Challenge!
Big brother meets HoO. Can read the first chapter now on my forum of Epic Randomness.
12 things we mmost definitely shouldn't have done.
This will be a forum, based on Ten things I shouldn't have done, a hilarious book I'm reading.
That's all for now.
See ya, wouldn't wanna be ya!
JosephineSilver here. As some of anda may know, at the moment I have 3 forum going - and they are awesome. Anyway, here are some things that anda can expect from me in 2012:
The Final War Trilogy
Okay, this will be the sequel series to my version of the Heroes of Olympus, called Camp Half-Blood's Blogs. It will be out sometime in November.
The Olympian Challenge!
Big brother meets HoO. Can read the first chapter now on my forum of Epic Randomness.
12 things we mmost definitely shouldn't have done.
This will be a forum, based on Ten things I shouldn't have done, a hilarious book I'm reading.
That's all for now.
See ya, wouldn't wanna be ya!
i have done too many as olympia. so this isnt in her view
Percy
Percy knew something wasn't right when Olympia dashed up to him .She threw herself at him, screaming ''Percy listen to me! Tartarus is starting a revolution and he has god killing bombs and-''she faltered,overwhelmed sejak the sudden shock of it.Percy watched as she stumbled, and tore into the lake, past Zeus's Fist ( Aka Poop Pile) and climbed up a pokok , Percy knew he should probably tell Chiron, but not now, now he had to tell Annabeth,it was kinda tradition. So, he ran in to the Athena cabin, pulled her aside and told it all.
Percy
Percy knew something wasn't right when Olympia dashed up to him .She threw herself at him, screaming ''Percy listen to me! Tartarus is starting a revolution and he has god killing bombs and-''she faltered,overwhelmed sejak the sudden shock of it.Percy watched as she stumbled, and tore into the lake, past Zeus's Fist ( Aka Poop Pile) and climbed up a pokok , Percy knew he should probably tell Chiron, but not now, now he had to tell Annabeth,it was kinda tradition. So, he ran in to the Athena cabin, pulled her aside and told it all.