The Heroes of Olympus
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Copyright-R.R Character: The seven The gods The camps The monsters Summary: The seven unite to save the gods and some boundaries are pushed Gaea is rising and the seven need to stop her.
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The Mark Of Athena
chapter 1
Percy
I couldn't wait to see Annabeth as the ship descended
I could picture Annabeths blond hair down to her
shoulders and her gray eyes. A few more minutes I
thought as a ladder was thrown off the side of the boat
a boy with blond hair and bright blue eyes floated off
the side. "Jason!" Renya yelled "so I'm taking a good
guess thats Jason" I whispered to Renya "yes you idiot"
she whispered harshley. Then an guy that looked like an
elf came down the ladder, a girl with choppy brown hair
by his side. Renya and I walked over to the three "hello
I'm--" I started but was interrupted "don't feed me to
the loins!" "shut up Leo"the girl said "what lions?" I
asked Leo. Renya was just standing there and staring at
Jason "Renya, Renya" I whispered and finally nudged her
"wha" she almost yelled "its not nice to stare" I said.
I was tackled as a course of electric ran through my
body "Percy where have you been" "here of course and
Thalia" "yeah" " get off of me" I said as I struggled
to get up and finally got her off. "Wait where is
Annabeth?" I grabbed Leo and Jason as they tried to run
"she is at camp?" Leo said slowley "yeah she was sick
with the flu when we left"Jason said. "Okay so can we
take a tour of the ship?" asked "sure"they all said
together "oh and i'm piper"said the girl. All eight of
us climbed up the ladder and I was tackled with a lot
more hugs then I expected even Clarisse gave me a hug
but I couldn't breath but I don't think she was wanting
to I think it was a dare from someone. Finally we got to
the rooms people were sleeping in some
"lebmepgotsapyhittopseaweepbwain" I herd a girl say
"Annabeth?" "no!" Leo, Jason, and Piper yelled as I ran
through the door and I saw five guards and Annabeth tied
up in the corner wth a gag "I told you guys to just keep
her down here until she calmed down" "well she tried to
jump off the boat and kill us and someone told us you
said to tie her up." "Seaweeybranwheyhesouybean"as I
made way to Annabeth a tired voice said "stop right
there Perseus Jackson f you don't want to die leave
right now" "Gaea" I grumbled and everyone was looking at
me and then Gaea said "attack Perseus guards" then they
attacked.
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chapter 1
Percy
I couldn't wait to see Annabeth as the ship descended
I could picture Annabeths blond hair down to her
shoulders and her gray eyes. A few more minutes I
thought as a ladder was thrown off the side of the boat
a boy with blond hair and bright blue eyes floated off
the side. "Jason!" Renya yelled "so I'm taking a good
guess thats Jason" I whispered to Renya "yes you idiot"
she whispered harshley. Then an guy that looked like an
elf came down the ladder, a girl with choppy brown hair
by his side. Renya and I walked over to the three "hello
I'm--" I started but was interrupted "don't feed me to
the loins!" "shut up Leo"the girl said "what lions?" I
asked Leo. Renya was just standing there and staring at
Jason "Renya, Renya" I whispered and finally nudged her
"wha" she almost yelled "its not nice to stare" I said.
I was tackled as a course of electric ran through my
body "Percy where have you been" "here of course and
Thalia" "yeah" " get off of me" I said as I struggled
to get up and finally got her off. "Wait where is
Annabeth?" I grabbed Leo and Jason as they tried to run
"she is at camp?" Leo said slowley "yeah she was sick
with the flu when we left"Jason said. "Okay so can we
take a tour of the ship?" asked "sure"they all said
together "oh and i'm piper"said the girl. All eight of
us climbed up the ladder and I was tackled with a lot
more hugs then I expected even Clarisse gave me a hug
but I couldn't breath but I don't think she was wanting
to I think it was a dare from someone. Finally we got to
the rooms people were sleeping in some
"lebmepgotsapyhittopseaweepbwain&quo
"Annabeth?" "no!" Leo, Jason, and Piper yelled as I ran
through the door and I saw five guards and Annabeth tied
up in the corner wth a gag "I told you guys to just keep
her down here until she calmed down" "well she tried to
jump off the boat and kill us and someone told us you
said to tie her up." "Seaweeybranwheyhesouybean"as I
made way to Annabeth a tired voice said "stop right
there Perseus Jackson f you don't want to die leave
right now" "Gaea" I grumbled and everyone was looking at
me and then Gaea said "attack Perseus guards" then they
attacked.
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At least one comment then I will write the second
chapter
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Percy
Just as they charged he had just enough time to pull out the riptde
and dodged the first slice and blocked the second hit with his own
sword. The others were just staring at me and the guards "you can
help you know" the word seemed to put them to action and all of them
pulled out their weapons just as it looked like we were winning some
earth born popped out of the ground. "I got the earth born Percy you
get Annabeth" then two earth born popped out of the ground by
Annabeth and two of the campers stood blocking me from Annabeth.
The campers were shaking from head to toe so I just hit them both on
their helmets and knocked them out the earth born charged I felt the
water in the pipes and concentrated. He felt a his gut tighten and the
pipes exploded drenching everyone and making a distraction for the
earth born and making the earth born disappear with his sword. He ran
to Annabeth and untying her when he was finished she tackled him and
kissed him and he heard giggling and laughing behind him but he
didn't care he was with Annabeth and hats all that mattered. When she
finally pulled away she asked "where have you been seaweed brain?"
"well why do you ask that because I've been here" "well as much as I
like to see couples reunited we've all been called to the deck" Piper
said. So we all rushed up to deck and there was fights breaking out
all over deck and the ground "whats going on?!" I yelled at the top
of my lungs. But that didn't seem to get their attention and they
started to pull out their weapons so he made a huge wave and crashed
it on both land and water and drenched all of them. They all turned
their heads slowly to him "now someone tell me whats going on" he
calmly said.
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Tell me what you think.
Percy
Just as they charged he had just enough time to pull out the riptde
and dodged the first slice and blocked the second hit with his own
sword. The others were just staring at me and the guards "you can
help you know" the word seemed to put them to action and all of them
pulled out their weapons just as it looked like we were winning some
earth born popped out of the ground. "I got the earth born Percy you
get Annabeth" then two earth born popped out of the ground by
Annabeth and two of the campers stood blocking me from Annabeth.
The campers were shaking from head to toe so I just hit them both on
their helmets and knocked them out the earth born charged I felt the
water in the pipes and concentrated. He felt a his gut tighten and the
pipes exploded drenching everyone and making a distraction for the
earth born and making the earth born disappear with his sword. He ran
to Annabeth and untying her when he was finished she tackled him and
kissed him and he heard giggling and laughing behind him but he
didn't care he was with Annabeth and hats all that mattered. When she
finally pulled away she asked "where have you been seaweed brain?"
"well why do you ask that because I've been here" "well as much as I
like to see couples reunited we've all been called to the deck" Piper
said. So we all rushed up to deck and there was fights breaking out
all over deck and the ground "whats going on?!" I yelled at the top
of my lungs. But that didn't seem to get their attention and they
started to pull out their weapons so he made a huge wave and crashed
it on both land and water and drenched all of them. They all turned
their heads slowly to him "now someone tell me whats going on" he
calmly said.
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Tell me what you think.
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Annabeth
Finally someone spoke up from the greek side "well octopus tried to
attack me" "its octivan" said a freaky looking dude with sandy hair
and that was so thin he looked like a pine needle but he reminded her
of luke.She pushed herself into Percys chest she couldn't look at the
guy so called octivan "its okay" percy whispered in her ear "we will
discuss this later" Percy shouted into the crowd "but romans show the
greeks around and do not fight." "I'll show Leo and Piper around"
Jason exclaimed "I want you to tell me what happend when you were
gone" she exclaimed to Percy "so in other words you want me to show
you around" Percy said. Then she raised her lips to his and kissed him.
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so what do you think
Sneak peek
Annabeth
Finally someone spoke up from the greek side "well octopus tried to
attack me" "its octivan" said a freaky looking dude with sandy hair
and that was so thin he looked like a pine needle but he reminded her
of luke.She pushed herself into Percys chest she couldn't look at the
guy so called octivan "its okay" percy whispered in her ear "we will
discuss this later" Percy shouted into the crowd "but romans show the
greeks around and do not fight." "I'll show Leo and Piper around"
Jason exclaimed "I want you to tell me what happend when you were
gone" she exclaimed to Percy "so in other words you want me to show
you around" Percy said. Then she raised her lips to his and kissed him.
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so what do you think
Sneak peek
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Annabeth
Finally someone spoke up from the greek side "well octopus tried to
attack me" "its octivan" said a freaky looking dude with sandy hair
and that was so thin he looked like a pine needle but he reminded her
of Luke.She pushed herself into Percys chest she couldn't look at the
guy so called octivan "its okay" percy whispered in her ear "we will
discuss this later" Percy shouted into the crowd "but romans show the
greeks around and do not fight." "I'll show Leo and Piper around"
Jason exclaimed "I want you to tell me what happened when you were
gone" she told Percy "so in other words you want me to show
you around" Percy said as he smiled. Then she raised her lips to his
and kissed him. We walked around the camp and then we walked to the
city but right before we entered a statue said "weapons please" and
this little girl that was about six held out an tray full of
weapons "are you sure this is safe" she asked Percy "because thats a
little girl." Percy just grinned and put the riptide in the bin "its
safe she is an trained professional" said the statue "oh this is
terminus he protects the city borders and just put your dagger in the
bin"Percy said. So she took out her dagger and put it in the bin. As
they walked into the city someone ran up to Percy and said "praetor
Jackson a fight broke out by the collesuem." Percy glanced at me and
asked "between who?" "the oracle and augury" "okay lets go." When
they got there Octavian had a dagger in one hand and all the romans
shouting "kill her, kill her" but when they saw Percy they shut
up. "Who started it?" Percy shouted and even I was sacred for a
second then Rachel spoke up "he did" and pointed to Octavian.
Annabeth
Finally someone spoke up from the greek side "well octopus tried to
attack me" "its octivan" said a freaky looking dude with sandy hair
and that was so thin he looked like a pine needle but he reminded her
of Luke.She pushed herself into Percys chest she couldn't look at the
guy so called octivan "its okay" percy whispered in her ear "we will
discuss this later" Percy shouted into the crowd "but romans show the
greeks around and do not fight." "I'll show Leo and Piper around"
Jason exclaimed "I want you to tell me what happened when you were
gone" she told Percy "so in other words you want me to show
you around" Percy said as he smiled. Then she raised her lips to his
and kissed him. We walked around the camp and then we walked to the
city but right before we entered a statue said "weapons please" and
this little girl that was about six held out an tray full of
weapons "are you sure this is safe" she asked Percy "because thats a
little girl." Percy just grinned and put the riptide in the bin "its
safe she is an trained professional" said the statue "oh this is
terminus he protects the city borders and just put your dagger in the
bin"Percy said. So she took out her dagger and put it in the bin. As
they walked into the city someone ran up to Percy and said "praetor
Jackson a fight broke out by the collesuem." Percy glanced at me and
asked "between who?" "the oracle and augury" "okay lets go." When
they got there Octavian had a dagger in one hand and all the romans
shouting "kill her, kill her" but when they saw Percy they shut
up. "Who started it?" Percy shouted and even I was sacred for a
second then Rachel spoke up "he did" and pointed to Octavian.
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Annabeth
"Why and how do you have a dagger Octavian?" Percy asked with an
annoyed look on his face "well its a cute story actually I snuck
it past the borders when you two were talking to terminus" and you
could tell this guy was wanting to kill Percy and all of the greeks
the way his voice sounded and the way he looked at us. "Well cute
story here to your going to give me the dagger now" Percy said
getting impatient and held out his hand his eyes glaring at
Octavian. Octavian sighed and it looked like he was giving it up one
second then tried to slice Percys hand and Percy was to quick and
dodged the attempted attack. Somehow the the ground erupted with
water hitting only Octavian in the face and Percy had enough time
to grab the dagger and walk ten paces away when the water stopped all
the romans were staring at Percy than Octavian. "That was so cool"
someone shouted from the roman crowd whispers expolded from both
crowds when she looked where Percy was supposed to be he was already
down the hill talking to a girl that was wearing a bed sheet. She
looked at the ground beneath and feet started to sink "Percy!" she
said urgently he looked up and saw her sinking. He ran as fast as he
could and the whispers stopped the ground beneath her was already up
to her shoulders and it covered her head just as Percy made it to
her. "Your here for special keeping" someone it was Gaea.
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So what do you think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Annabeth
"Why and how do you have a dagger Octavian?" Percy asked with an
annoyed look on his face "well its a cute story actually I snuck
it past the borders when you two were talking to terminus" and you
could tell this guy was wanting to kill Percy and all of the greeks
the way his voice sounded and the way he looked at us. "Well cute
story here to your going to give me the dagger now" Percy said
getting impatient and held out his hand his eyes glaring at
Octavian. Octavian sighed and it looked like he was giving it up one
second then tried to slice Percys hand and Percy was to quick and
dodged the attempted attack. Somehow the the ground erupted with
water hitting only Octavian in the face and Percy had enough time
to grab the dagger and walk ten paces away when the water stopped all
the romans were staring at Percy than Octavian. "That was so cool"
someone shouted from the roman crowd whispers expolded from both
crowds when she looked where Percy was supposed to be he was already
down the hill talking to a girl that was wearing a bed sheet. She
looked at the ground beneath and feet started to sink "Percy!" she
said urgently he looked up and saw her sinking. He ran as fast as he
could and the whispers stopped the ground beneath her was already up
to her shoulders and it covered her head just as Percy made it to
her. "Your here for special keeping" someone it was Gaea.
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So what do you think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Piper
She watched as Percy ran up the hill and Annabeth sink into the
ground as Annabeths head sank under the ground. "Hazel can you find
Annabeth?" Percy sounded so worried "sorry can't find her" "Percy
come on" Renya said as she put an hand on his back Percy was just
staring where his girlfriend disappeared his face looked lost Hazel
and Frank walked by Percys sides and trying to cheer him up ugg how
she wished Jason would be like Percy Annabeth was so lucky she
thought. Later that day they Reyna called an senate meeting when she
walked into the senate house she saw Percy in his chair in the front
of the room head in his hands crying so hard and Reyna, Hazel, and
Frank was by his side whispering to him about how their going to find
her. She walked up to them and said "Percy I'm so sorry about
Annabeth" I just couldn't see him like this even though I just met
the guy. When everyone was here they had got Percy to stop crying
"okay all we know is that there are seven demigods who have to stop
Gaea's forces does anyone know who those seven are. "I know three of
the seven they are me,Hazel, and Frank" Percy said " and me, Piper,
and Leo" Jason said "but who is the seventh" asked Renya "its easy
Athena's daughter, Annabeth" Percy said hanging his head and his
voice cracking. "Can you tell us the prophecy, Rachel?" she asked
"Wisdom's Daughter walks alone,
the mark of Athena burns through Rome
the son of Poseidon shall have a choice
to make mother earth sleep or awake
the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way
and friends shall decide his fate"
At the end Rachel slumped in her chair Percy looked shocked at the
end of the son of Poseidon shall have a choice and the
the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way part then
Reyna said "this meeting is
over."
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Piper
At dinner that night Reyna was running around asking "where is
Percy?" but when she came up to us I said "no but do you want me to
go find him?" "Yes please." "Were going to" Leo said "wait what are
We doing?" Leo asked "finding Percy" Reyna said "okay so were finding
Percy ya know some people call him" Reyna glared at him and he shut up
"I know what they call him and once someone says one o those names I
Will kill them" Leo was already against the wall "sorry, sorry" "okay
Well any idea where he could be?" Jason asked trying to get Reyna to
Look away from Leo. "Try the ocean or the sword arena" "okay."
When we were heading towards the ocean and a huge wave climbed into
the air at the sword arena "I'm thinking hes over there" Leo said "no
hes over there at the cafe" I said sarcastically. "Lets go look" Leo
said hopefully when we finally reached Percy he was fighting with
Medusa "stop fighting it Percy you know you want join Gaea" "I killed
you once I can kill you again" then Medusa spotted them at the same
time Percy did. "Close your eyes" Percy yelled but just as Medusa's
Snakes flew up and eyes turned gray a huge wave followed Percys
command and blocked their eyes but then she realized Jason and Leos
eyes were closed and the wave was only blocking her eyes. She closed
her eyes as soon as the wave went down "come on kids open your eyes
and let us see your precious eyes."
Piper
At dinner that night Reyna was running around asking "where is
Percy?" but when she came up to us I said "no but do you want me to
go find him?" "Yes please." "Were going to" Leo said "wait what are
We doing?" Leo asked "finding Percy" Reyna said "okay so were finding
Percy ya know some people call him" Reyna glared at him and he shut up
"I know what they call him and once someone says one o those names I
Will kill them" Leo was already against the wall "sorry, sorry" "okay
Well any idea where he could be?" Jason asked trying to get Reyna to
Look away from Leo. "Try the ocean or the sword arena" "okay."
When we were heading towards the ocean and a huge wave climbed into
the air at the sword arena "I'm thinking hes over there" Leo said "no
hes over there at the cafe" I said sarcastically. "Lets go look" Leo
said hopefully when we finally reached Percy he was fighting with
Medusa "stop fighting it Percy you know you want join Gaea" "I killed
you once I can kill you again" then Medusa spotted them at the same
time Percy did. "Close your eyes" Percy yelled but just as Medusa's
Snakes flew up and eyes turned gray a huge wave followed Percys
command and blocked their eyes but then she realized Jason and Leos
eyes were closed and the wave was only blocking her eyes. She closed
her eyes as soon as the wave went down "come on kids open your eyes
and let us see your precious eyes."
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^ umm... hey horse? u know thats MY prophecy i wrote.... so plz write ur own.....or tell them it was mine (it says so on my mark of athena :D)
i dont mean to be rude, but i wrote that prophecy and the only two lines i didn't write were the first two; "Wisdom's Daughter walks alone, the Mark of Athena burns through Rome" - Rick Riordan
the other lines were mine so at the top u have to write "Adapted by Universal's Mark of Athena" becuz then its a copyright issue..sorry
so yeah... otherwise it was good.. :)
i dont mean to be rude, but i wrote that prophecy and the only two lines i didn't write were the first two; "Wisdom's Daughter walks alone, the Mark of Athena burns through Rome" - Rick Riordan
the other lines were mine so at the top u have to write "Adapted by Universal's Mark of Athena" becuz then its a copyright issue..sorry
so yeah... otherwise it was good.. :)
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Frank
This Leo guy was really starting to tick him off first he makes Hazel
flirt then he goes and find Percy so hes ether trying to be stupid
are hes trying to take the two other people except for dad. But Hazel
said after ten seconds that he was gone "lets go look for them"but
when I try to argue she just stands and walks away. When we find them
Leo, Jason, and Piper were standing there eyes were closed and Leo
was shaking like an earthquake "close your eyes frank" Percy shouted
"w-ahh" but then he didn't argue there was Medusa standing in front
of Piper and shut his eyes. "Open your eyes I just want to see your"
then dust flew over him and Percy standing there grinning "so whats
the party for?" "are you crazy" "I'm just a having a normal day"
"hey Percy" Leo said walking over Percy must of seen him scrunch up
his fists because he got a hit in the stomach "offff" "why did you
say and I quote 'I killed you once and I can kill you again'" "well I
killed her once what did you not get." Leos eyes Widened at that
thought and Percy just walked away like it was no big deal.
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Frank
Leo was asking Percy a lot of questions "how many monsters have you
fought?" and then Percy answered "millions of them and I fought two
titans and a god" "whoa did you lose any fight?" Jason asked joining
in "I'm still alive aren't I" "what god did you fight?" Piper asked
"Ares" Percy answered happily. That gained him an surprised look on
all their faces including him "did you hurt him as much as I want to?"
he himself asked Percy "yes I defeated your dad by hitting him in the
ankle" Percy grinned "why do you want to hurt your dad?" Leo asked.
"I don't like him" he told Frank "hey where is Hazel?" Percy asked
"well she is right ther-" he scanned the group she was gone "the sea"
Percy said quickly "what?" the rest asked in usion but Percy was
jotting down the center to the ocean. When they reached the ocean
line Percy was yelling at an Iris message "well you could have told
Annabeth!" Hazel was trying to separate Percy from the message and
he knew who was on the other side of the message. He was trying to
help Hazel but when he turned into an elephant sea water pushed
him back "Percy come on take a step away from the message" Piper said
sweetly everyone took a step back from the message except for Piper
and Percy. "Stay out of this charm speaker" Percys voice sounded
harsh "Percy I swore on river Styx not to tell anyone" "wait is that
a dress in the background aww Nico found his fit" "haha its not for
me its for you" a door creaked open in the background and someone was
thrown in. "Annabeth" Percy said letting an air of relief out "Percy
Nico?" Annabeth asked "tell slime head to shut up" Nico said "tell
bonehead to shut up and smack him for me" Percy said " Hazel you hit
Percy" Annabeth said as she smacked Nico "and Percy you know where
this is where Grover" "almost got married" Percy finished for
Annabeth. "Oh and don't forget to give a big hug to your husband"
Percy said to Nico a smile played across his lips "okay I'll see you
down the aisle in a few months Percy don't forget the dress for
Annabeth" "haha very funny bye" Percy said as a smile sild across his
lips "bye" Nico said as Percy waved a hand over the Iris Message.
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Jason
All the girls at camp seemed to like this Percy he could understand
why this guy defeated a god, and two titans. "Percy!" Reyna yelled as
she reached him she kissed him on the cheek and turned bright red "how
did this happen" Piper said sweetly "well hes just so h-annoying
that he makes me worried." Darn. "Piper you were so close" Leo said
"you how you take my spot and you get admired by all the girls and
you get a kiss from Reyna" all the anger pulled up inside of him he
pulled out his sword and charged.
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Jason
All the girls at camp seemed to like this Percy he could understand
why this guy defeated a god, and two titans. "Percy!" Reyna yelled as
she reached him she kissed him and turned bright red "how did this
happen" Piper said sweetly "well hes just so h-annoying
that he makes me worried." Darn. "Piper you were so close" Leo said
"you how you take my spot and you get admired by all the girls and
you get a kiss from Reyna" all the anger pulled up inside of him he
pulled out his sword and charged. He was hopping to get the guy off
his guard but that didn't happen Percy blocked his first hit with the
Riptide "what are you doing your acting like a kid" "I'm not a kid"
I yelled in his face "then stop acting like one." "I don't think you
will win Percy" he heard Octavian yell from the crowd then Octavian
started to chant his name and the greek started to chant "Percy,
Percy" now Leo, Piper, Hazel, and Frank began to shout "Percy, Percy."
But when Leo saw him Leo started to say "Jason" and Piper did to and
both attacked Hazel and Frank now he had to just get this guy out of
the water that Percy was backing up to so he shot lightning at Percy
to make him go away from the water but Percy was already in the
water. Percy shot high pressure water at him the water hit him in
the face something whispered in his ear "hes invincible in the water"
and a dome rose above us that was made of sand and water. Percy had
him on the ground and his sword point at his chin "I don't play when
it comes to swords" he said calmly to him "that was fun lets do it
again sometime" he finished smiling like nothing happened. Reyna ran
up to Jason and was about to smack him when Percy said "he was just
playing let him try he won't win" all the greeks were cheering and Leo
and Piper were on the ground with Frank and hazel on them. The rest
of the day all the greeks were trying to win against Percy Hazel
walked up to him at the end of the day and asked "what were you
thinking?" "I was thinking I could defeat the famous Percy Jackson" I
reminded her I looked back down the hill when the stoll brothers were
running up to us and they both asked "do you want to try to take down
Percy in the ultimate battle?" "Yes" I said with enthusiasm "come on
Hazel it will be fun" "you mean pay back for you" I shook my head
"fine."
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Jason
As all the Greeks walked off to go to wait in the bushes with Hazel
and him as Clarisse was getting soaked when he finished her off he
walked away to get a drink of water. I watched him start to drink
of his water bottle and pour it on himself even tough it didn't get
him wet "charge" Clarisse yelled at the top of her lungs we all ran
out of the bushes into mud and we all were caught on it trying to
free ourselves and one by one we all got free of the mud and Percy was
in the middle of the ring cracking up. "What the heck happened?" I
asked him "thanks guys but it doesn't work that way here because of
the water" then they all turned to the supplies all the water bottles
were empty and the big water filler was still pouring out water. A
ocean light brightened the evening and a god appeared "Neptune" Percy
said bowing "hey Percy" Neptune turned around to see campers sinking
in mud "what happened here?" Neptune asked "oh ask mister smart guy"
Clarisse grumbled "uh there so clumsy they tried to sneak attack me
but I got curios because they only took their swords" Percy answered.
"Ah" all the Greeks said at once "well we got more serious matters
then that we are going to have a spy on our hands" Neptune exclaimed
"again!how this is ridiculous at first its sel-" Percy stopped
because Clarisse was glaring at him. Thunder boomed in the sky "well
I got to go" Neptune finished.
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Hazel
"Leo looks and acts like Sammy" she said to Percy once she got out of
his trap "well you never know Hazel he could be Sammy's grandson"
"well hes funny like Sammy and has those elf ears like Sammy" "watch
out Frank" "what whoa" Frank yelled as he sank in the mud. "Why is
everyone except you have mud on them" "mud bath" Percy said "my
specialty then Clarisse said "Jackson you are dead" while a guy about
her age was helping her out. "What she means to say is Percy can you
help me get her out?" the guy said covered in mud from trying to help
Clarisse "sure" Percy said as he got a glob of mud in the face from
Jason. "Mud fight!" Leo yelled as he got a glob of mud to throw at
Percy all the mud rose up and copied Percys every move "okay" "run!"
everyone yelled as they tried to run but Percy clapped and the mud
flew inwards. People started to rise and she started to look for
Jason and Leo "Percy wins" she heard Leos voice beside her Percy was
over helping Clarisse out of the mud. "Whoa that was awesome but scary
how did you do that?" "water is in the dirt so I took the water and
made it come up" at the last word he flew back and hit a tree. "That
was for making me muddy" as she walked up to Percy about to punch him
a girls voice yelled "stop" and Reyna walked over to Clarisse and
Percy and shoved Clarisse. Then helped Percy up "who in the gods name
do you think you are pushing me around?" Clarisse yelled at Reyna "I
am-" Reyna started "going to go help the Greeks get out of the mud"
Percy finished then turned Reyna around and started to whisper to her.
Once they got all the campers out of the mud all of the six who were
to go on the quest Percy was leading went to go get cleaned up, to
go pack and get ready for dinner. Once she was all ready she headed
down to the dinner pavilion with Percy and Frank a yell erupted from
behind them "Praetors, Praetors" "what is going on?" Percy asked from
her side "monster spotted from the tunnel following two kids" with
that said Percy followed the guy down through the tunnel. When they
were at the entrance a minotaur was charging to two kids.
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Hazel
When she looked closer the minotaur only had one horn "no, no, not
you again "stay here he said to the tunnel guys and her he jumped
into the river and swam across the minotaur smelt him and turned his
way. "Is he crazy? I've got to go help him" "he is crazy thats what
helps him live but your not going Hazel he said to stay here" the
other tunnel watcher said when she looked he had a buff body an a baby
like face "frank?" he shook his head. She didn't care what Frank said
she was going to help Percy she ran to the river and jumped in and
was immediately pushed out by the river. Percy yelled at the kids "go
across the river now!" the kids tried to run but the minotaur blocked
them "go help the kids Hazel" Frank said and sighed "Percy let me
help the kids" she yelled over the river. She saw Percy nod so she
jumped in and the water pushed her over to Percy "I'll get the
minotaur you get Geric, and Will" "okay what if the thing charges me?"
"when it gets close side step" and with that he ran up the hill and
stabbed its meaty back with the Riptide "moooo?" it mooed in question
and turned to Percy. The minotaur now must of smelt her because it
turned towards her and charged "side step now Hazel" as she did the
minotaur held out his arms and she was suddenly pulled back by
someone no she was pushed but by who. Then she noticed Percy wasn't
there she looked in the river and saw Percy fighting the minotaur in
the water but the minotaur was tearing at Percys shirt and as the
minotaur finally got Percy pinned down he must have forgot that Percy
had a sword and the Riptide went through his head. Percy laid there
for a few minutes then she walked in the river and notced he was
smiling "well it been a while since I saw that guy" Percy said. "Percy
Jackson how dare you do that!" Reyna yelled walking into the river
"and a while since I've seen that one to" he whispered low enough for
only her to hear.
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Leo
When he heard the news about how Percy was defeating a minotaur he
ran to the gate to see Percy just stabbing his sword through the
minotaurs head and then Reyna pushed through him and start yelling
at Percy. "Well you could have told me" "well I was saving these
two Percy said as he put his hands on two kids shoulders. "You
don't even know who these two are" "yes I do this is Geric and this
is Will" Percy said and got smacked by Reyna. "Lupa said that we
needed to go here" Will said "Leo come here" Reyna gestured him
over. He walked over to her and she said "light up" he opened his hand
and light it on fire they both jumped back "whoa how does your hand do
that?" Geric asked. "Do what?" Reyna asked and then she looked at his
hand and jumped back "Percy!" she said urgently and Percy gestured
his hand and water drenched him. "You said light up!" he yelled at
Reyna "I meant in your head." "Welcome to camp kids I'm Percy and
I'll be your guide and I want dinner" Percy said "can I talk to you
Percy" I asked Percy and he stopped "what?" "you seem bothered Percy
and I wanted to know if it was the same reason I am" "you know whats
bothering me" "that can't be bothering you." "Well whats bothering
you?" "Dreams are bothering me Percy I go to take a nap and there they
are Gaea dreams its bothering both of us" "it is not" Percy smiled.
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Leo
After dinner I found Geric and Will "hey guys will you help me with
something?" "only if there's something for us in return" "yeah"
he held out packs of chocolate golden coins. "I just need you to meet
me in the city by the big tree in the middle of the park" "got it"
they said together and snatched the chocolate from my hands. I
gathered Piper and Jason and pulled them to the park "what?" they
both yelled at me "somethings troubling Percy and I need your help
to find it out" "why do you need me?" Jason asked "to circle him and I
need you" he pointed to Piper "to charm speak him" "it dosen't work
on him I've tried even Drew tried" "he was mad and I'm guessing she
wanted to date him." "Well how do you two know your way around so
quickly?" they all three heard Percy asked "Reyna gave us a map and
said you might get lost" Will said winking his way "we want to play
for a while you sit down" said Geric "okay" Percy said. When they
were just coming out Percy spotted Thalia and waved her over "what was
the dream about now?" Thalia asked Percy before he could answer Jason,
Piper, and I came out of our spots to ask Percy the same thing.
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Percy
The three buccaneers came out from behind his out from behind the
tree he was sitting by "not you again" "what?" Thalia asked "the elf
keeps asking me what my problem is" I told Thalia. "Just go away I
have enough to deal with" he told Leo "so you do have a problem" Leo
said in his face "its between me and Thalia" I said into his face.
"Well Percy you can tell us you can trust us" he scrunched his fists
at Pipers voice "its working keep going" Leo whispered to Piper "come
on Percy you can trust us we won't tell anyone please Percy" she said
sounding so trustworthy like Drew did that one time by the lake.
"Stop your just like Drew trying to get into my business just shut
up!" I yelled at all three then sat back down and curled up covering
my ears. I felt Thalia put her around my shoulders "Percy I didn't
mean to it was Leos idea.""what you can't blame it on me"
"what on earth is going on over here?" Reyna approached
seeing me in a curled position "what did you do?" she
yelled at the three "well" Leo started "Geric and Will
were throwing pine cones at me so these three came to
help me" I finished for them "oh sorry I heard yelling
and had to check" she said lastly and walked off. Leo had
an confused look on his face and Piper and Jason were
surprised "what? its ether your in a good mood or your
just crazy standing up to Reyna" Leo said "hes crazy"
Thalia said smiling.
Percy
The three buccaneers came out from behind his out from behind the
tree he was sitting by "not you again" "what?" Thalia asked "the elf
keeps asking me what my problem is" I told Thalia. "Just go away I
have enough to deal with" he told Leo "so you do have a problem" Leo
said in his face "its between me and Thalia" I said into his face.
"Well Percy you can tell us you can trust us" he scrunched his fists
at Pipers voice "its working keep going" Leo whispered to Piper "come
on Percy you can trust us we won't tell anyone please Percy" she said
sounding so trustworthy like Drew did that one time by the lake.
"Stop your just like Drew trying to get into my business just shut
up!" I yelled at all three then sat back down and curled up covering
my ears. I felt Thalia put her around my shoulders "Percy I didn't
mean to it was Leos idea.""what you can't blame it on me"
"what on earth is going on over here?" Reyna approached
seeing me in a curled position "what did you do?" she
yelled at the three "well" Leo started "Geric and Will
were throwing pine cones at me so these three came to
help me" I finished for them "oh sorry I heard yelling
and had to check" she said lastly and walked off. Leo had
an confused look on his face and Piper and Jason were
surprised "what? its ether your in a good mood or your
just crazy standing up to Reyna" Leo said "hes crazy"
Thalia said smiling.
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Percy
"Ahh!" he heard Reyna scream from where Will and Geric were he ran
over to see Reyna soaked with dirt covering her head to toe "Percy"
Leo and Jason said "what?!" I yelled at them "why you do that to
Reyna?" Leo asked "I didn't do this" I said "it is the work of a son
of Poseidon's work but Percy was over there" Thalia said pointing
toward the tree "who did this?" Percy said noticing the harshness in
his voice and pointed to Reyna and all the water fell off of her "he
did!" Will and Geric said pointing to each other. "Percy long time no
see" a bearded guy said in a chariot coming out of the sky "Neptune!"
Reyna said out of breath "I came to announce your other half brother"
"Tyson's gonna flip when he hears about this" I said smiling "Will
you are a son of Neptune" "welcome to the family Will" "and Percy you
have to come to a decision sooner or later" Neptune said as his smile
faded "to trust someone or be killed" "have I mentioned I don't like
decisions! last time a decision killed someone" I said. Thalia
patted my back "I got to go oh I almost forgot Geric the son of Gaea"
everyone was looking at Geric like he was going to kill them all in
on hit. Gerics face paled so he went over to him and patted his back
"welcome to the horrible world of demigods" I said patting him on the
back. A hour till we set off to go find Annabeth and he was eagerly
watching the clock in the dinner pavilion and sudenly everything went
blank and he didn't know which way was witch. "Join me Percy and your
life will go back to normal you won't need to decide anything" came a
sleepy voice "never I've never had a normal life" I said back to it
"and why don't you go back to sleep so I won't have to decide" "that
would be easier but I want to rule." "So what" I said "I can defeat a
you your just a wimp because you can't show yourself" "I need you to
cooperate so just say I'll join you Gaea and then I'll show you my
true self."
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Piper
They all were sitting there and Percy was staring at the clock and
said nothing but all the sudden gasped for air and fainted "someone
get a stretcher" Reyna yelled and everyone went to action. Reyna,
Hazel, Frank, Leo, Geric, Will, Jason, and her were trying to wake
Percy up once the stretcher was here they loaded Percy on it and
the infirmary people were already running down the street with him.
After dinner and some of Leos jokes everyone went down to the
infirmary where Percy was sitting up in bed playing cards with
Grover and Thalia "hi guys" Percy said sounding casual. After they
were all in the cramped room Percy got up and shut the door "why did
you faint?" Hazel asked "I need to know something and be honest do any
have dreams from Gaea?" Almost everyone did raise their hands except
for Grover "how many of you are tempted to join her side?" everyone
put their hands down "good, good" Percy muttered to himself "well I
didn't faint Gaea just pulled my conciseness from me and we had a fun
little chat" Percy walked up to Geric "when I meet your mom shes
going to be dead meat" "you and me both Percy" Geric said drawling two
fingers over his neck. Percy grinned "so thats whats troubling you oh
I feel stupid now" Leo said "you are" she said Percy walked up to her
and said "you are getting better than Drew at charm speaking" and that
made her blush. "Wait what time is it?" Percy asked checking his watch
"its time to go now" Percy said "wait Percy me and Geric want to go"
Will whined "my mom won't attack us and I can track people
underground" Geric said "have you met your mother" Percy said "no."
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Piper
"No your not going the both of you and thats that" Percy said as he
climbed the ladder to the Argo three "Piper make him let us go" Will
pleaded. She turned around to see Percy glaring at the two boys
"Percy this-" he glared at her like a wolf "gryphons Percy watch out"
Geric yelled at Percy a huge figure swooped down to Percy and picked
him up and Percy had a happy look on his face "I haven't done
this in a while where have you guys been" Percy then yelled at frank
"can you help" "no clear aim" Frank yelled back. The gryphon was
trying to get situated with Percy than it stopped struggling and
Percy had his eyes closed and the gryphon was flying to the deck and
set him down "cages?" Percy asked with his eyes still closed they
rushed on deck and Percy said "cages now!" A drip of sweat ran down
Percys face he was gripping so hard on the railing his knuckles were
turning white Leo ran up to the control room and a cage dropped down
on the deck and the gryphon flew directly into the cage. "Thats
strange" "close it!" Percy shrieked and the cage closed
immediately Percys eyes opened and he was sweating an ocean "what
did you just do?" Jason asked backing away.
Piper
"No your not going the both of you and thats that" Percy said as he
climbed the ladder to the Argo three "Piper make him let us go" Will
pleaded. She turned around to see Percy glaring at the two boys
"Percy this-" he glared at her like a wolf "gryphons Percy watch out"
Geric yelled at Percy a huge figure swooped down to Percy and picked
him up and Percy had a happy look on his face "I haven't done
this in a while where have you guys been" Percy then yelled at frank
"can you help" "no clear aim" Frank yelled back. The gryphon was
trying to get situated with Percy than it stopped struggling and
Percy had his eyes closed and the gryphon was flying to the deck and
set him down "cages?" Percy asked with his eyes still closed they
rushed on deck and Percy said "cages now!" A drip of sweat ran down
Percys face he was gripping so hard on the railing his knuckles were
turning white Leo ran up to the control room and a cage dropped down
on the deck and the gryphon flew directly into the cage. "Thats
strange" "close it!" Percy shrieked and the cage closed
immediately Percys eyes opened and he was sweating an ocean "what
did you just do?" Jason asked backing away.
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Jason
Percy was freaking him out why did the gryphon do that Percy leaned
over the railing oh no hes gonna barf then some sea water sprayed up
and hit Percy in the face. "Percy what did you just do?" he asked
his voice shaking "I was trying to get water but then I noticed I was
not getting water but was controlling the gryphon through its blood
and I was in control so it was trying the opposite of that and is the
world spinning or is that just me?" Percy asked gripping onto the
railings "can we come now Percy?" Will asked Percy "Percy let them
come" Piper said really sweetly "sure come on up" Percy said as
though Piper convinced him. Then Percy glared at her the two climbed
up. They set off to where Grover almost got married everyone who
tried to touch the gryphon was almost bitten then Percy pulled up a
chair and closed his eyes and the gryphon was asleep so it should
have been easier and Will was trying to learn how to do it to. When
the gryphon woke up Percy put his hand through the bars and petted
the gryphon "Jason come on over and meet Tusk" "what?" I asked "Tusk
my pet gryphon" Percy smiled and opened his eyes. "He won't bite he
was just scared" Percy waved his hand for him to hurry Jason
finally had the courage to pet the gryphon. "Now all I have to do
is learn how to ride him" Percy said "your gonna what?!"
"Wisdom's Daughter walks alone,
the mark of Athena burns through Rome
the son of Poseidon shall have a choice
to make mother earth sleep or awake
the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way
and friends shall decide his fate"
At the end Rachel slumped in her chair Percy looked shocked at the
end of the son of Poseidon shall have a choice and the
the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way part then
Reyna said "this meeting is
over."
I made a new prophecy and didn't want you to go and have to search for it again and I changed a few lines so go ahead and read it
the mark of Athena burns through Rome
the son of Poseidon shall have a choice
to make mother earth sleep or awake
the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way
and friends shall decide his fate"
At the end Rachel slumped in her chair Percy looked shocked at the
end of the son of Poseidon shall have a choice and the
the son of Neptune shall choose the wrong way part then
Reyna said "this meeting is
over."
I made a new prophecy and didn't want you to go and have to search for it again and I changed a few lines so go ahead and read it
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Jason
"You are crazy" Jason said to Percy "any other comments?" Percy asked
"Percy, Jason watch out!" Geric yelled Percy pulled him down just as
an knife flew over his head. They looked where the arrow came from
there was a guy that had sandy hair "Octivian" he yelled to the guy as
he jumped on their boat "no Percy knows though" the guy stepped out of
the shadows he had a big scar down his face "its nice to see you Percy
its been a while don't you think" Percy face was ghostly and he nodded
"but your not supposed to be alive" Percy said his voice scared. "So
why are you alive?" Percy asked "oh you know I'm the only one who
knows where Annabeth is and there going to kill her if you don't come
with me" the guy said Percys face was lost then furious "what did you
do Luke gave me poisonous food or did you summon a pit scorpion?"
Percy asked "uh duh summon a pit scorpion any more questions?" Luke
asked "what did you ask Annabeth before your last breath?" "uhhh do
you think I will make?" "wrong" Percy tried to stab Luke but Luke
blocked with his sword. Piper made it on board and sweetly said "put
your weapons down" Luke did but Percy didn't and sliced Luke's head
but instead it turned into a venti "what the heck a venti" Percy said
like he wanted a bigger challenge "Dillon!" Piper yelled "its just a
stupid venti" Percy said "whats the big deal?" "venti's are a cool
monster" Dillon complained to Percy "since when?" Percy asked putting
the cap on the Riptide "why are they so boring that you have to put
your sword away?" "yeah" "why are they so boring "well cause I can do
this" a wave of water flew onto Dillon. "Oh" was the last word Dillon
said "so you guys no that venti" Percy asked walking over to them
he just shook his head.
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Frank
The next few days were the same it felt like with Percy, Hazel ,and
himself but the day after those few days Percy wanted to have a
meeting on what to do when they get to the island. "So first of all we
have to find the meat eating sheep than folllow me cause I think they
know I'm coming so I'll tell you all what to do and don't do anything
stupid" Percy said "like follow you?" Thalia asked "ohhh yeah just do
that stupid thing" Percy said giving Thalia a soft punch n the
shoulder. "There is meat eating sheep?" Leo asked looking scared
"well yeah but there nice sheep" Percy said "this meeting is over"
as everyone set off he and Hazel still sat there and all the sudden
they weren't n the room any more and Mars was sitting in front of
them. "Mars" Hazel said as she got on her knee "oh get up daughter of
Pluto I didn't come here to get worshiped I came cause I wanted to
tell ya something" Mars said "I came to tell you to watch out for that
Percy Jackson kid hes got powers waiting to be discovered and Gaea
knows all of the powers that she will need to rise out of that guy.
So you both need to watch his back okay?" "Okay" me and Hazel said at
the same time. "Oh and I got something for you both" he pulled out a
bow and quivers and gave them to Frank "the middle one has a dragon
tooth so you can summon who did you call him 'Gray'" and then he
pulled out a bracelet for Hazel "and when you slap it once its a
shield" he told her. Hazel took the bracelet and put it on her wrist
"thanks" she told him "bye" he said as he waved good bye when the
room reappeared Percy was fighting three hell hounds and two gorgons.
"Well glad you could join us" Percy said as he smiled he was throwing
furniture at the monsters he was about to ask why Percy didn't use
his sword but then he saw somehow one of the gorgons took Percys
sword the Riptide. Then Percy had an Yankees baseball hat on and
disappeared and the Riptide floated out of the gorgons hand and cut
her in half and then the other four monsters.
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Frank
When Percy took off the hat he said" you guys just fainted are you
okay?" "Percy why was there monsters down here?" I asked him "I don't
know" just then another Percy walked into the room and started "who ya
-" then he saw himself. The Percys stared at each other "why are you
here I pointed to the Percy who just came in "I was up in the fight
and I wanted to check in on you" "who is the correct Percy?" Hazel
whispered to me "I don't know" I whispered back "wait what fight?" I
asked both of the Percys. I pushed them out of the way to see the real
Percy hacking away at monsters that were surrounding them and he was
the only one fighting everyone else was on the ground tied up up eyes
popping out of their head at the Percys behind up us "thats the real
one" Piper nodded her head to the Percy fighting. The Percys behind
us turned into venti and grabbed us Percy saw us and started to kill
the monsters coming our way his eyes looked like they were turning
red. "Let them go if you know whats good for you" his voice sounded
like a million Percys at once he felt his venti shake and say "I'll
kill him." Percy strangely had all the monsters fighting each other
and the venti felt like he was frozen and so did frank Percy was
going behind the venti and unwrapping him then once he was done he
did Hazel.
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Hazel
Percy helped her out and nodded to the others the only one who she
did not see tied up was Will so once she was over by Piper untying her
she would have untied Leo first but he just burnt his way out and was
helping Percy. "So can I ask you question what happened?" she asked
Piper "well I was talking to Percy when two gorgons Percy called them
I think came over on the other side of the ship and brought an army"
she said. By the time she finally had Piper undone she could not help
but think about the curse now there is different chances Percy, Frank
, or Will she felt that something was wrong with Will. She started to
help Geric when Will came up on board his face was plain when he saw
Geric tied up and Percy finishing off the last monster. "So you knew
about this?" she asked Will as she untied the last knot on Geric "uh
yeah I was going to look for you two" he said "somethings wrong with
Will he hasn't talked to much around me he said he had a weird dream"
Geric whispered to her. "Hey! Will you didn't help ya ran" Percy
yelled "and to know what else is weird is that you whispered
something to the gorgon" Percy said "what did not" Will protested
"whats wrong Will?" Percy asked his voice dipping with sadness. "Uh
dreams" Will said in defeat "don't believe any of them" Percy
encouraged him "what like the one where you and me fight with swords
and I kill you" Percy stepped back in surprise and walked off. "Percy
I didn't mean it-" Will said "save it if I had to kill one of us it
would be me" Percy said over his shoulder.
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Hazel
"Hey Percy" she said s she walked up to Percy "hey"
Percy said plainly as he looked up "somethings wrong we
should-" he was interrupted by a loud thump "no more
monsters" he pleaded when he looked over the side he
sighed with relief "were here" he said. Everyone started
to gather and Percy said "we are at the cyclopes land."
"Can we not go to the met eating sheep?" Leo asked and
you could tell this kid was scared "fine but I was
trying to make this fun" Percy said Leo sighed with
relief. A they made their way following Percy Hazel
could not help but think there are three people who
could reverse my curse Percy, Frank, or Will. She looked
at all three and thought that she could not trust Will
"uh" she said as she bumped into Percys broad shoulders
"shh" Percy whispered. Percy looked over the cliff and
smiled "whatcha do in Grover?" Percy whispered trying to
contain his laughter "oh just hanging" she heard
Grover's strained voice come from the cliff.
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Hazel
"Hey Percy" she said s she walked up to Percy "hey"
Percy said plainly as he looked up "somethings wrong we
should-" he was interrupted by a loud thump "no more
monsters" he pleaded when he looked over the side he
sighed with relief "were here" he said. Everyone started
to gather and Percy said "we are at the cyclopes land."
"Can we not go to the met eating sheep?" Leo asked and
you could tell this kid was scared "fine but I was
trying to make this fun" Percy said Leo sighed with
relief. A they made their way following Percy Hazel
could not help but think there are three people who
could reverse my curse Percy, Frank, or Will. She looked
at all three and thought that she could not trust Will
"uh" she said as she bumped into Percys broad shoulders
"shh" Percy whispered. Percy looked over the cliff and
smiled "whatcha do in Grover?" Percy whispered trying to
contain his laughter "oh just hanging" she heard
Grover's strained voice come from the cliff.
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I like your story! It's slightly confusing though because it's not in paragraphs. Would it be possible for you to do it in this format:
Percy said jwecnouwcbiuwdfcbiuhdwcbwuhcbuwfdbcuhdewcb.
Then reyna said iced ciudad chided NIH chic
Then Percy fought jwdfbcouwhbcuwohcbufwjnjnjnjmjkjhhefbchchhd hdhhhhh huywfewbcuedcobuwedhucbewuhcbweohcbuhefwbcuwehcbboweucbuhcbhidfcbidecbiefcbiefhcbfhbcrehbchidnchideqcnidenciedjcniedncijdenciejnciejjnciedjcniejdnciejnjcdeicnijdenceinc
Then piper said kwcniwncidc
If you could do that it would be really nice! Thanks!
Percy said jwecnouwcbiuwdfcbiuhdwcbwuhcbuwfdbcuhdewcb
Then reyna said iced ciudad chided NIH chic
Then Percy fought jwdfbcouwhbcuwohcbufwjnjnjnjmjkjhhefbchchh
Then piper said kwcniwncidc
If you could do that it would be really nice! Thanks!
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Hazel
"Hey Percy" she said s she walked up to Percy "hey"
Percy said plainly as he looked up "somethings wrong we
should-" he was interrupted by a loud thump "no more
monsters" he pleaded when he looked over the side he
sighed with relief "were here" he said. Everyone started
to gather and Percy said "we are at the cyclopes land."
"Can we not go to the met eating sheep?" Leo asked and
you could tell this kid was scared "fine but I was
trying to make this fun" Percy said Leo sighed with
relief. A they made their way following Percy Hazel
could not help but think there are three people who
could reverse my curse Percy, Frank, or Will. She looked
at all three and thought that she could not trust Will
"uh" she said as she bumped into Percys broad shoulders
"shh" Percy whispered. Percy looked over the cliff and
smiled "whatcha do in Grover?" Percy whispered trying to
contain his laughter "oh just hanging" she heard
Grover's strained voice come from the cliff. "Don't just stand there
help a common satyr out!" Grover yelped at Percy "so this is your
secret mission you had to do instead of helping us?" Percy said
helping Grover up. "I thought you were going to Greece" Grover said
as he got up "and leave Annabeth and Nico no way!" Percy said "oh
right" Grover said as he grinned "oh shut up satyr" Percy grumbled.
They finally reached the cave Percy started to whisper "ok here we
are so Frank, Hazel, and Grover you come with me the rest of you
watch out here" "oh I'm not going in there" Grover said "fine" Percy said as he slid inside and blocked the doorway for a second "dragon
watch out" Percy whispered to them both. As they reached the back
Percy slid the door open just enough to fit them going one by one she
slid in after Percy and was tackled by Annabeth and Nico with hugs
and a brotherly kiss on the cheek and Percy got a kiss with Annabeth
when they were all done with the reunion and were standing Annabeth
gave Frank a hug ad then went back to Percy. "Well done my pawn but
will you be able to handle whats next?" a sleepy voice grumbled
"Gaea" Percy and her said at the same time and then a voice came that
shocked her "Percy this was a dream" and a figure stepped out of
the shadows.
Hazel
"Hey Percy" she said s she walked up to Percy "hey"
Percy said plainly as he looked up "somethings wrong we
should-" he was interrupted by a loud thump "no more
monsters" he pleaded when he looked over the side he
sighed with relief "were here" he said. Everyone started
to gather and Percy said "we are at the cyclopes land."
"Can we not go to the met eating sheep?" Leo asked and
you could tell this kid was scared "fine but I was
trying to make this fun" Percy said Leo sighed with
relief. A they made their way following Percy Hazel
could not help but think there are three people who
could reverse my curse Percy, Frank, or Will. She looked
at all three and thought that she could not trust Will
"uh" she said as she bumped into Percys broad shoulders
"shh" Percy whispered. Percy looked over the cliff and
smiled "whatcha do in Grover?" Percy whispered trying to
contain his laughter "oh just hanging" she heard
Grover's strained voice come from the cliff. "Don't just stand there
help a common satyr out!" Grover yelped at Percy "so this is your
secret mission you had to do instead of helping us?" Percy said
helping Grover up. "I thought you were going to Greece" Grover said
as he got up "and leave Annabeth and Nico no way!" Percy said "oh
right" Grover said as he grinned "oh shut up satyr" Percy grumbled.
They finally reached the cave Percy started to whisper "ok here we
are so Frank, Hazel, and Grover you come with me the rest of you
watch out here" "oh I'm not going in there" Grover said "fine" Percy said as he slid inside and blocked the doorway for a second "dragon
watch out" Percy whispered to them both. As they reached the back
Percy slid the door open just enough to fit them going one by one she
slid in after Percy and was tackled by Annabeth and Nico with hugs
and a brotherly kiss on the cheek and Percy got a kiss with Annabeth
when they were all done with the reunion and were standing Annabeth
gave Frank a hug ad then went back to Percy. "Well done my pawn but
will you be able to handle whats next?" a sleepy voice grumbled
"Gaea" Percy and her said at the same time and then a voice came that
shocked her "Percy this was a dream" and a figure stepped out of
the shadows.
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Annabeth
"Will?" Percy questioned the figure "sorry Percy" the
guy said "oh and this is the famous Annabeth that Percy
talks about hi I'm Will I'm a son of Neptune" she
blushed when he said that Percy said "Will why?" "well
she wouldn't stay out of my dreams and she said if I did
I would become a god" "typical Roman but you won't be a
god you will be a titan." "Oh no she said god" "well she
is lying" "Annabeth who do you think is right" "don't
bring her into this!" Percy yelled sounding like Zeus.
"She has a right" Will said enjoying Percys anger "Will
I don't want to hurt you" Percy said his voice dipping
"then don't Percy you could join our side and we could
fight together" "I-" "won't do it" she finished for
Percy "Annabeth let Percy decide" "I won't do it Will
you were tricked I will-" "kill yourself before you kill
me" she let Percy go and walked over to Hazel and Frank
"we need to get Percy out of here" she said. "Yeah I
think thats a good idea" Frank said she walked back over
to Percy "we need to go now" she said "yes we do need to
go now out the door" Percy said raising his voice. Five
heads peeked out by the door and Percy nodded and
started to the door and Will stepped in front of him and
said "now you can fight charm speaker but not a
daughter of Minerva sad Percy just sad but you won't be
going anywhere" and before he could say anything else
Percy had Will in a head lock and sword out. "Will let
them go and you could keep me" Percy calmly said "or we
are going to walk out and there will be one less Will in
the world" Will shook his head and Percy moved Will and
him to the side of the door monsters were starting to
come into the cave and saw Will with a sword to his head
in a headlock "let em go" his raspy voice said. Frank,
Hazel, and herself walked out of the cave no monster
attacked afraid Will would die she looked back at Percy
and his wind blown black hair and his sea green eyes
"take care sea weed brain" was the last words she said
before she walked off with the others she heard a sword
cling against the ground and a whole lot of yelling for
monsters. When they made it to the ship they climbed
aboard and sailed for Greece as they sailed there was
alot of nice to see you again and hey guys. Finally they
stopped and Hazel and Piper walked up to her "I heard
what happened and your lucky Annabeth you have such a
depending boyfriend while I can't get a guy to choose me
over Reyna" Piper said "Percy is different he chooses to
go through harder times and protect his friends that
takes alot of gut sometimes he can do more than normal
he pleases everyone around him" Hazel said. "I know its
just you should see him on a regular basis he does crazy
thing that people don't usually do to please people then
some other people" she said cause she saw Leo peeking
"hey" all of the boys peeked out with an extra he had
brown eyes like Gaea and brown hair. All of the girls
laughed until they cried and their stomachs hurt while
they were getting lectured by the boys. A few days
passed and her, Piper, and Hazel were becoming really
good friends and the day they reached Greece she saw a
ballpoint pen laying on the ground she went go pick it
up and uncapped it and it turned into the riptide.
Annabeth
"Will?" Percy questioned the figure "sorry Percy" the
guy said "oh and this is the famous Annabeth that Percy
talks about hi I'm Will I'm a son of Neptune" she
blushed when he said that Percy said "Will why?" "well
she wouldn't stay out of my dreams and she said if I did
I would become a god" "typical Roman but you won't be a
god you will be a titan." "Oh no she said god" "well she
is lying" "Annabeth who do you think is right" "don't
bring her into this!" Percy yelled sounding like Zeus.
"She has a right" Will said enjoying Percys anger "Will
I don't want to hurt you" Percy said his voice dipping
"then don't Percy you could join our side and we could
fight together" "I-" "won't do it" she finished for
Percy "Annabeth let Percy decide" "I won't do it Will
you were tricked I will-" "kill yourself before you kill
me" she let Percy go and walked over to Hazel and Frank
"we need to get Percy out of here" she said. "Yeah I
think thats a good idea" Frank said she walked back over
to Percy "we need to go now" she said "yes we do need to
go now out the door" Percy said raising his voice. Five
heads peeked out by the door and Percy nodded and
started to the door and Will stepped in front of him and
said "now you can fight charm speaker but not a
daughter of Minerva sad Percy just sad but you won't be
going anywhere" and before he could say anything else
Percy had Will in a head lock and sword out. "Will let
them go and you could keep me" Percy calmly said "or we
are going to walk out and there will be one less Will in
the world" Will shook his head and Percy moved Will and
him to the side of the door monsters were starting to
come into the cave and saw Will with a sword to his head
in a headlock "let em go" his raspy voice said. Frank,
Hazel, and herself walked out of the cave no monster
attacked afraid Will would die she looked back at Percy
and his wind blown black hair and his sea green eyes
"take care sea weed brain" was the last words she said
before she walked off with the others she heard a sword
cling against the ground and a whole lot of yelling for
monsters. When they made it to the ship they climbed
aboard and sailed for Greece as they sailed there was
alot of nice to see you again and hey guys. Finally they
stopped and Hazel and Piper walked up to her "I heard
what happened and your lucky Annabeth you have such a
depending boyfriend while I can't get a guy to choose me
over Reyna" Piper said "Percy is different he chooses to
go through harder times and protect his friends that
takes alot of gut sometimes he can do more than normal
he pleases everyone around him" Hazel said. "I know its
just you should see him on a regular basis he does crazy
thing that people don't usually do to please people then
some other people" she said cause she saw Leo peeking
"hey" all of the boys peeked out with an extra he had
brown eyes like Gaea and brown hair. All of the girls
laughed until they cried and their stomachs hurt while
they were getting lectured by the boys. A few days
passed and her, Piper, and Hazel were becoming really
good friends and the day they reached Greece she saw a
ballpoint pen laying on the ground she went go pick it
up and uncapped it and it turned into the riptide.
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Annabeth
"Percys here guys look what I found" all of them came
onto the ground and were shocked to see the Riptide
Percy left this so we could find him and he must have
left trail "Geric has Percy been here?" she asked the
son of Gaea. He closed his eyes for a moment and pointed
diagonally and said"yes they went that way" "hi I'm
Calypso and Percy sent me to find you guys" a girlish
voice said behind her. "Hi I'm Annabeth I'm Percys
girlfriend" "oh oops don't worry hes all yours" she said
looking warily at the sword in her hand. After they were
done with introductions Calypso said "their camp is
around my place and Percy was all tied up but don't
worry hes fine and told me to bring you guys to the camp
so if you all join hands I can bring you close to my
house and you could get Percy." We all joined hands and
we all were transported to the back of a house as I
peeked around the corner I saw Percy tied up against a
tree with two guards that were empusas and the three
gorgons Medusa, Euryale, and Stheno a boy that had black
hair and green eyes like Percy, Will stood talking to
the empusa. She pulled back and Calypso pulled them
inside and dressed them like waitresses and waiters and
the girls did their hair in a braid down their backs and
they put hats on and flower in their faces and they all
went out serving people and her and Calypso went over to
where Percy was and Calypso said to Will "can my
assistant and me help you with Percy by feeding him"
"sure but only if your assistant isn't Annabeth and she
can speak Greek" she spoke in greek with an accent to
Will and he cocked his head it was working thanks to
Greek class. "Is that Greek?" Will asked Calypso "yes it
is she said 'hi my name is Bella and what is yours'"
"fine go ahead and feed him for all I care he hasn't had
a meal for at lest a week" she could tell now how Percy
wasn't as strong because he barely spoke anything to her
or Calypso all he did was look up. She gave him water
singing something like "don't worry Percy we will get
you out of here" he must have understood because he was
smiling. The next few hours was a blur and then when she
could finally sleep she passed out right as she hit the
pillows. She woke up early to find Calypso shaking her
and saying "we need to make breakfast for them I have to
or they will kill Percy" "why do we have to go with
them?" I asked her "yeah" she replied after they were
done making breakfast she went over to the tree Percy
was tied up at to find all the boys tied with him except
for Geric who was hanging down from the tree. I walked
up to Percy and gave him a drink of water "oh and while
your at it can you give all them water and untie them"
she heard Will say from behind her and she said yes in
greek she finished untying everyone and putting them in
a forest truck that must have been rented today she went
to go and untie Percy. She sat be him untying him from
the tree "fine Calypso you and that girl can guard the
guys today and tonight" she herd Will say she helped
Percy up and supported him over to the group of boys and
helped him into the truck.
Annabeth
"Percys here guys look what I found" all of them came
onto the ground and were shocked to see the Riptide
Percy left this so we could find him and he must have
left trail "Geric has Percy been here?" she asked the
son of Gaea. He closed his eyes for a moment and pointed
diagonally and said"yes they went that way" "hi I'm
Calypso and Percy sent me to find you guys" a girlish
voice said behind her. "Hi I'm Annabeth I'm Percys
girlfriend" "oh oops don't worry hes all yours" she said
looking warily at the sword in her hand. After they were
done with introductions Calypso said "their camp is
around my place and Percy was all tied up but don't
worry hes fine and told me to bring you guys to the camp
so if you all join hands I can bring you close to my
house and you could get Percy." We all joined hands and
we all were transported to the back of a house as I
peeked around the corner I saw Percy tied up against a
tree with two guards that were empusas and the three
gorgons Medusa, Euryale, and Stheno a boy that had black
hair and green eyes like Percy, Will stood talking to
the empusa. She pulled back and Calypso pulled them
inside and dressed them like waitresses and waiters and
the girls did their hair in a braid down their backs and
they put hats on and flower in their faces and they all
went out serving people and her and Calypso went over to
where Percy was and Calypso said to Will "can my
assistant and me help you with Percy by feeding him"
"sure but only if your assistant isn't Annabeth and she
can speak Greek" she spoke in greek with an accent to
Will and he cocked his head it was working thanks to
Greek class. "Is that Greek?" Will asked Calypso "yes it
is she said 'hi my name is Bella and what is yours'"
"fine go ahead and feed him for all I care he hasn't had
a meal for at lest a week" she could tell now how Percy
wasn't as strong because he barely spoke anything to her
or Calypso all he did was look up. She gave him water
singing something like "don't worry Percy we will get
you out of here" he must have understood because he was
smiling. The next few hours was a blur and then when she
could finally sleep she passed out right as she hit the
pillows. She woke up early to find Calypso shaking her
and saying "we need to make breakfast for them I have to
or they will kill Percy" "why do we have to go with
them?" I asked her "yeah" she replied after they were
done making breakfast she went over to the tree Percy
was tied up at to find all the boys tied with him except
for Geric who was hanging down from the tree. I walked
up to Percy and gave him a drink of water "oh and while
your at it can you give all them water and untie them"
she heard Will say from behind her and she said yes in
greek she finished untying everyone and putting them in
a forest truck that must have been rented today she went
to go and untie Percy. She sat be him untying him from
the tree "fine Calypso you and that girl can guard the
guys today and tonight" she herd Will say she helped
Percy up and supported him over to the group of boys and
helped him into the truck.
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Leo
Annabeth was doing great she tricked Will but the guys got caught
because they were trying to get Percy out when all the monsters were
asleep but he accidentally fell on Will and so they ended up like
Percy tied to a tree but he was lucky he wasn't tied up like Geric
was. He was also glad he wasn't Percy hungry and has to sleep away
from water and for him he has to be dunked in water and tied.
Annabeth helped Percy in but way nicer than him and the others he
couldn't help but smile and laugh at this one Calypso and Annabeth
sat in the back and Annabeth let Percy lay his head on her bag. "So
why are you sweeter to Percy than us?" I asked Annabeth "because hes
hurt more"she said in an accent and acted like she had trouble with
the words then Percy sat up quickly and said "do you hear that Will?"
"hear what Percy" Will asked and turned around "water" Percy said
with excitement in his voice "yes I do and were not supposed to be
near water" a flash of blue lightened up the day even more and Percy
disappeared and was on the street in front of the car.
Leo
Annabeth was doing great she tricked Will but the guys got caught
because they were trying to get Percy out when all the monsters were
asleep but he accidentally fell on Will and so they ended up like
Percy tied to a tree but he was lucky he wasn't tied up like Geric
was. He was also glad he wasn't Percy hungry and has to sleep away
from water and for him he has to be dunked in water and tied.
Annabeth helped Percy in but way nicer than him and the others he
couldn't help but smile and laugh at this one Calypso and Annabeth
sat in the back and Annabeth let Percy lay his head on her bag. "So
why are you sweeter to Percy than us?" I asked Annabeth "because hes
hurt more"she said in an accent and acted like she had trouble with
the words then Percy sat up quickly and said "do you hear that Will?"
"hear what Percy" Will asked and turned around "water" Percy said
with excitement in his voice "yes I do and were not supposed to be
near water" a flash of blue lightened up the day even more and Percy
disappeared and was on the street in front of the car.
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Leo
Percy looked
weak but then his sword appeared on him and armor and he looked
stronger and Will jumped out of the vehicle and said "Percy get back
in the car or I will have to kill you" "no Will you will not kill
Perseus the defeater of Kronos he turned down being a god and he has
saved Olympus more then two times you will not kill him" Zeus said
and appeared out of nowhere and then one by one all the gods were
here and Poseidon by Percys side and then he and all of the seven
including Grover and Geric were behind Percy. They all had their
armor on "I challenge Percy to Will" a voice said and he was in an
arena with everyone in the stands and he was sitting by Poseidon.
Then Will had a light on him "the blessing of the all titans"
Poseidon said. and then Percy was glowing to "wow the blessing of all
gods" he heard Annabeth say "this will not end well" he said to
Annabeth.