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posted by Problematic129
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Summary:
Three years lalu devastating news hit the Loreans, there eighteen tahun old daughter was found dead in the lake. For years police tried to find her killer, but never got anywhere. Soon, everyone gave up, even her parents. But not Destiny, everyday she would try to find police reports similar to her sister. Destiny is no ordinary girl, she has visions and can see things that no one else can, and lately she's been having dreams of her sister about her sister. When it looks like all hope is lost, a young detective comes to her aid, together they uncover the secrets and tidak dijawab soalan to her sister's death. But the lebih closer they get to solving the case, the lebih dangerous their lives become.
Prologue
All I remembered was running, atau at least, that’s all that mattered at the moment. I was being chased, my predator a few feet from me. Why did I have to be so dumb to walk alone on a creepy night like this?
    All I wanted to see was my sister Destiny, it was her that kept me going. She was my little fourteen tahun old sister and she needed me.
    If I hadn’t taken Destiny away from our parents to live with me, she would have to suffer the shouting and yelling that you’d often hear in my parent’s house.
    “Help!” I yelled to no avail, this was a deserted grassland no one came to, except victims and killers.
    Which I’d soon be.
    I ran into the woods nearby, my breath becoming louder. My muscles screamed and ached, I felt like I couldn’t run no more, but I had too.
    And it was just my luck that I tripped over a small rock and fell, I heard a small crunch. I think I’ve broken my ankle, it burns, but right now all I feel is panic and fear. What do I do?! My killer could be here any second, I have to hide!
    I looked around quickly, but all I saw was trees, but they’d have to do. Despite the protesting ankle, I climbed up the pokok as quietly and carefully as I could. sejak the time I was close enough to get a good view of the ground, but high enough to be obscured sejak the leaves, my ankle had this searing pain, but it felt dull enough to ignore. I stayed still and everything was silent for a full moment. But then I heard the sound of foot crunching and leaves, and I saw my killer walk past the tree. All I could see was there head, nothing else, not one single identification of who they were.
    They were all dressed in black, and either that was a black topi, cap atau hat on the person’s head, atau my killer had black hair. But right now I was too disoriented to tell the difference.
    After a few minutes, I carefully got off my tree, and limped in the other direction. After a while I left the woods, I was on some side walk. Yes! Almost there!
    I was just going to step on the street, when something hard collided with my head. But I couldn’t process anything after that except the intense pain in my head, my vision swam, I couldn’t comprehend anything.
    Was I being carried?
    It felt like hours, but was possibly minutes, when my mind started to work again. I blanked for a second, but then I noticed I had a blindfold on, I tried to pry it off, but I was weak. I felt this weird like movement, even though I was sitting, then I realized that we were in a car. Yes! Driving in a car! But my joy at my brightness was short lived, when the car came to an abrupt stop. My head started to thud against my skull, as another intense pain came, but I managed to keep my insanity intact.
    I felt hands, going to my hands, and tying something there. I didn’t know what, but it was pretty hard, my hands ached at the weight of it. Then I was being pushed out of the car and dragged to only god knows where.
    Then my blindfold was off and I was faced to one of the most beautiful lakes I’ve ever seen, with an amazing waterfall. It was then I understood, at least I’d get die somewhere beautiful.
    It was the last thing I saw before I was pushed into the lake, I felt the panicky feeling grip me again as I tried to swim up, but something was holding me down. So I looked down and my eyes widened, my hands were chained together, and the chains led to a very looking heavy weight.
    I couldn’t get out, I was going to drown.
    Destiny! I thought, thinking of my loyal sister, who’d be there to protect her from mom and dad’s infamous fighting, to help her with her homework, to hold her in there arms. Our parents couldn’t, they never did with me, always too pre-occupied. Please, protect her.
    My throat was on fire, my nose felt ready to explode, and my eyes started to burn. I fought and I screamed in the water, being the stubborn person that I was. But that wouldn’t help me not now.
    I kept on moving and fighting until I altogether stopped, and I died. I’ve must’ve looked crazy, I knew I would look crazy. The determined look in my eyes mixed with the emptiness, the last thing on my mind was of my sister.
    
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posted by 1999jacko
5 years ago
Leo stood at the edge of the plane as 3 men stood watching him intently.They were chanting over and over"Take on the life of Survival. Even though he was 8 he still knew they would set the bomb and push him off sooner atau later. Leo turned around and tried to keep his gaze on the men, but he was to scared of them to do it. They had trained him for 4 years about the skills of survival and how to fight but the still scared him to death. As Leo turned back to the door the men stopped chanting, they moved as one being and picked up the bomb together setting it to 10 seconds, they then...
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posted by hgfan5602
There's a possibility
That if we believe in our souls
Then the doubt that we will fail
Will melt away

We must believe
There's no better time to do this
And we shall never give up
Because a helpless creature is dying

We shall help the creature
And if we come together and sing
All hope will become stronger and stronger
Like a candle building flame

We shall care for it
We shall be its shoulder to lean on
We shall never give up hope
If it dies, I die with it

It shall survive
If we give up all our hope
Nothing ever shall be alive again

The hope still blazes
Inside of each and every one of us,
And we believe that we will
Defeat our obstacle

There will be nothing to fight us
After we look inside ourselves
And find our strength

I have a dream,
That my little amazing creature
Will survive and get a new leg
It shall not die.
posted by SweetHoneyBunny
The sun was sitting on the horizon as the troops of UFS reached Nindell. The air hung heavy as they trudged through the streets swamped with garbage, crumbling buildings and the occasional body. Talow stuck close to the group as he heard gunshots firing from the distance. The walked until they had reached the far end of the city. Talow could see a large bukit with the jungle starting at the bahagian, atas and doors at the bottom. They marched up to these doors which opened to reveal a hidden building inside.
“Welcome to HQ.” Luca whispered in Talow's ear as he passed. Talow looked at the open area he...
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Chapter Nine

      Unless, Reese was working with Hazel. How else would Hazel be able to release Reese from jail for just an event like this. There was no other way. Dakota stopped at the door and tried smiling but it was so stained anda could tell it was fake. Reese didn't smile. She appeared sad. She wouldn't mumble a word. All she did was slowly stand up and prance on Dakota. She was able to hold Dakota down and lug her towards the bed. She handcuffed Dakota to Hazel's bed. It happened so quickly that Dakota wasn't able to put up much of a fight.
      "I am so sorry for this Dakota but...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and Fantasi :)~
Chapter 36
        An Angel in disguise
    I feel my blood run cold as I hear the door open and I quickly enter the room, the guys are on the phone, and I motion them to be quiet, not loud. Meredith nods and whispers into the phone, quickly, she sound hysterical and the door slamming shut makes us all jump, and the two girl’s start to whimper.
    I put a finger on my lips and they nod, clutching each other.
    I have to think of something, and fast. We...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the reviews, please don't copy and please read review*
Chapter 5
        Daredevil’s plus mall equals disaster
    The end of the hari was finally over, and I was shaking with enthusiasm. At first we were going to Lara’s house, but then we decided to go a mall (that I didn’t know existed until now) that was close to my house.
    “First things first, were going to the arcade.”
    “Arcade? anda guys always hog the games.” Corrie complained. “How about we eat first?”...
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posted by alicia386
The Big Three are Zeus, Hades, and Poisedon. anda never call the big three unless it is an extreme emergency. I knew the results if this didn't go well with them. I would most likely be zapped into a cockroach atau something odd like that. That is something that I didn't want to happen to me but we needed to stop Elysia before Earth was next. I grew very fond of this planet.

Gabriel and I were the sons of Zeus and w knew our father very well which was abnormal because Zeus hates demigods. He really hates them. I went to Mount Olympus alone while Gabriel stayed behind to become a spy for us. Gabriel...
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posted by Insight357
    “Kayden!” Sebastian-my band’s manager-had a look of dismay on his simple features. I couldn’t hear him, but I could read his lips. Anyone who knew me knew to get my attention before they spoke.
    “What?” I asked. Though I’d been deaf since I was five I knew how to speak as well as anyone with full hearing.    
    “You still haven’t made your set list,” he stated, his face screwed up into a frown. “The first performance is tomorrow night.”
    “I’ll have it finished...
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posted by rory2011
it's now worse than just nightmares ,Kat seeing her bad wraith in the real life ,and sometimes that driving to her cry ,cause she really want to end all these hallucinations but she doesn't know how

and Kat always having that dream ,when her wraith giving her a pisau in the dark and when the light turn on ,she's seeing the hari when her mother killed ,but this time she's the one who have to kill her mother not the swordsman ,she's fighting in her dreams to stop and to save her mother ,but that girl is very strong ,she's forcing her to kill ,and when Kat does ,she always wake up from the nightmare...
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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 8
Are anda a daredevil atau a murderer?
    After taking as many pictures as I could, from my trusty phone, I went back up stairs and walked out the door.
    My Friends were busy with their families, and my one had abandoned me, so I decided to go out. I went to the mall we visited recently, and went to the movie theater’s we sabotaged, thankfully it was still open and I paid for a movie (what movie I don’t know I just kind of zoned out at that part) and it didn’t matter what movie it was anyways...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and Fantasi :)~
Chapter 37
    The way a mind works
    The fall was painful, but not too painful. My arm throbbed a bit, but the nice lush soft green rumput made the fall less deadly. I managed to survive, and so did Meredith as she hugged me happily when we stood up. But we couldn’t have our moment for longer we needed to hurry.
    Meredith and I ran from the kabin into the woods, similar to the exact same woods that Dorothy once ran from. I felt chills as my feet pounded on the floor, feelings of the deceased...
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After Tiffany finished her story and all the others had, besides James. He sat there. Silently. "I'm sorry." he whispered, Angus put his hand on James' shoulder "It's not your fault, he chose to go, anda couldn't have stopped it even if anda were there, he wouldn't have let you." he said. James didnt reply. He just stared up at his brother and finally he couldn't hold back the tears, Angus was right, which only made James feel worse. He thought about all the times he had been, well not the 'best' brother in the world yo Kyle. But Kyle was still there for him, even if he wasn't there for Kyle....
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posted by hgfan5602
Tonight's the night...
Today's the day
We tunjuk all our strength

Tonight's the night...
No one's ever gonna keep me down
Again...
And I'm gonna go on,
And on.

Tonight's the night
We're gonna be determined
Have hope in our eyes
anda can see it inside
As we rev it across tonight

Tonight's the night
Tonight I'm gonna give it my best shot
And no one's gonna control me
Not tonight,
Oh not now,
And maybe not ever again.

Cause I have the feeling
That I'm powerful
That I'm givin it my all
And it's gonna be a shocker
When I power the stage tonight

Tonight's the night
And no one's gonna shove me down again,
Cuz tonight's my night.