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posted by wantadog
Chapter 1; Humans and Demons and Abominations.


Buzz. Buzz. Buzz.
Odessa blearily opened her eyes, that damn buzzing was going to drive her crazy! She sat up, expecting to see Arlon sitting in his throne, grinning from ear to ear at his power over her, but all she saw was a small meadow, a tiny pond, a few trees scattered around, and…metal bars? What was going on? If she was in the wilderness, there wouldn’t be metal bars. That means she must be…
A roar sounded to her left and her head snapped towards the sound. There, maybe 20 feet away, was a lion. The lion was small sejak any standard, but it was still very dangerous, at least to a human. Odessa smirked, her beauty alone would give it pause, but she thought she might give it a little lebih to worry about. She looked the beast in the eye, preparing to use a few demon tricks on it. She was shocked, however, to find that she couldn’t use any. Her powers were…gone. The lion roared even louder and began to advance. Odessa, for the first time in her life, felt fear. It was only a tingle, barely noticeable, but to her it felt like a tsunami crashing down on her. She was helpless. The lion charged her and she screamed, closing her eyes tight. After a minit of nothing, she opened them to find the lion was gone.
“Huh?”
“Hello there, Odessa.”
Odessa looked up to see an Incubus in the air, staring at her. “Zaebos? Is that you?”
Zaebos flipped upside down and grinned at her. “Why yes it is. anda seem to be in a bad way. Anything I can do to help?”
Odessa glared. She knew what his form of helping was and she wanted nothing to do with it. “Get your mind out of the gutter and get me out of this cage. I assume anda stopped time?”
“Yes, I did. anda should be nicer to those who are helping you. Look in the pond, your powers are gone.”
Odessa gulped and slowly walked over to the still pond. She peered over and looked at her face. It was her face, but something was missing. She was a succubus, her appearance should be able to mesmerize anyone, but the face she saw lacked any luster, any charm, any beauty. She spun around and glared at Zaebos.
“Come now, don’t give me that look. Now that you’re powerless, angry is very ugly on you.”
“SHUT UP!”
Zaebos chuckled and grabbed her arm, dragging her out of the cage. “Ya ya, fine. Just tell me when to let time start, but don’t take too long, stopping time is against the rules, as anda very well know.”
Odessa glared at him. “Just start time as soon as I leave the Zoo.”
Zaebos saluted. “As anda wish, your stoniness.”
Odessa turned her back on him and started walking towards the exit. It turned out that the buzzing she heard was the motor to a small children’s toy. She was near the exit when time suddenly started. She cursed, but that was as far as she got before being bowled over. “OW! Damn that Zaebos…”
“Zaebos?”
Odessa looked over to see a man staring at her. The man had a rather handsome face, blue piercing eyes, and was staring, rather pointedly, at her breasts.
“Never seen boobs before?”
The man jerked his gaze up. He blushed. “Uh, sorry about that. That’s an…interesting outift.” He said, trying, and failing, to avoid looking at the strange woman’s figure. Odessa looked around. She was indeed standing out. Her clothing wasn’t exactly skin tight, but it still left very little to the imagination. She would have already had everyone else drooling from the mouth already, but all she could do now was impress one person?
“I know this, why are anda still here?”
The man looked at her, slightly put off sejak her aggressive attitude. “I only wanted to make sure that anda were all right.”
“Well, I am, so no need for a human like anda to worry.”
The man’s expression turned to one of confusion. “Human? anda aren’t human yourself?”
Odessa snorted. “No, I am a demon, so leave before I decide to end your pitiful existence.”
“It seems to me that anda are the one who is the lebih pitiable of the two of us.” Odessa’s mouth dropped. To think this man would be stupid enough to insult a demon.
“So anda think I am weak? Is that it?”
“Strength has nothing to do with it. I pity anda because anda are so close-minded. You’re constantly putting down humans, is there a reason? What exactly makes demons better?”
“They’re stronger, faster, smarter, they are superior.”
His expression didn’t change. “Prove it then.”
Odessa looked him in the eyes for the first time. “What do anda mean, anda want to fight?”
He smiled at her. “Yes, I do. I would Cinta to see these demon powers of yours.”
Odessa looked away, irritated that she couldn’t just kill the man. “When I get my powers back, anda will experience them in all their fury.”


Arlon sat in his chair, awaiting word. He straightened up when he saw Zaebos fly through the door. “Any word?”
“She’s fine, a little pissed, but fine.”
Arlon heaved a sigh of relief. “that’s good, I suppose, but how long will she last in the human world?”
Zaebos picked dirt from his sleeve, lazily saying, “She has a place to stay. She already made a friend, but that’s not what really worries anda is it?”
Arlon looked at him, his gaze cold. “No, it isn’t. Let’s go Zaebos. It’s time to get to work, before she comes back and kills us.”
Zaebos smiled as Arlon stood. “Casting her out was a smart move. Who knows when she would have acted on her plan, eh? Well, it doesn’t really matter. She’s gonna die in only a few days anyway.”
Arlon glanced at him. “You are heartless. anda tunjuk no mercy, even to your sister?”
Zaebos took to the sky. “None, but remember, she isn’t my sister sejak blood.”
posted by Problematic129
Chapter 12
    One messed up sleepover
    “So should I go with raspberry, raspberi yellow, atau remedy green?” Sage asks.
    “Sweetie, were doing nails not a Trix commercial,” I tell her.
    Sage sticks her tongue out at me. “Bite me, the one with brown hair.”
    “Cherry head!”
    Meredith rolls her eyes, but still comes to sit closer to us as Talia’s giving her the obsessed ‘let’s be Friends glance’.
    “So your one of Pamela’s friends!”...
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Penulisan Tip #1: Put off editing

Each of us works at Penulisan on two levels:a creative, unconscious level and a critical, conscious level.

The unconscious produces creative and powerful words and images. It makes surprising and original connections. It shuts down if the critical "editor" part of your mind goes to work too soon.If your High School English teacher's voice runs through your mind as anda write, if anda worry about spelling, grammar, atau how to sell your book while anda write, anda are Penulisan with a dull pencil.

There are many buku written on how to unlock your unconscious and let the writing...
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posted by dragonsmemory
(Dear Reader,
The story anda are about to read is another Eden book. "The Guardian of Eden" is part of the Encounter series. Please keep in mind that some parts may be spoilers for other Eden Chronicles books.
The following story was originally written spring 2011 under the tajuk "Hirach." It has since been changed. I hope anda all enjoy this tale from Eden.
Jo)
A Fantasi NOVEL


PROLOGUE
THE FIRST GUARDIAN

Centuries ago, when humans began to exploitthe dragons' Knowledge and power for themselves, something had to be done. A special meeting of Parliament was called to address the problem. The king, who,...
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posted by rory2011
David couldn't take all his pain since Jack has been taken to jail from three years lalu ,witch made him very ill ,David now in 47 and almost to 48 years old ,but he looks older because of his illness ,he refused to face people after what Jack did ,all the people in the country knows who's David miller is ,he's the father of the most dangerous criminal in the country, Jack got crazy in jail ,because of a lot of things happening and happened to him
Jack was getting tortured every night ,which made him crazy and pushed him kill three of the cops and two prisoners ,plus he tried to escape so many...
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posted by alicia386
I am pretty sure everyone in the world has at least one phobia. I found two but I didn't go through the whole thing. This senarai is only half of what I found. Shocking!

Ablutophobia – fear of bathing, washing, atau cleaning
Achluophobia – fear of darkness
Acrophobia – fear of heights
Agoraphobia, Agoraphobia Without History of Panic Disorder – fear of places atau events where escape is impossible atau when help is unavailable. Fear of open spaces atau of being in public places. Fear of leaving a selamat, peti deposit keselamatan place.
Agraphobia – fear of sexual abuse.
Agrizoophobia – fear of wild animals
Agyrophobia –The...
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posted by vampirefreak_26
My alarm went off telling me that my nightmare aka combat training with Dimitri was about to begin in a half hour. Although I wanted to go back to sleep like any other normal person in the neighborhood, I came out of bed, dressed and went downstairs to eat something light. I knew the consequences if I wasn’t on time, Dimitri would give me one hell of an keldai whooping training and I would be the one who would get the post punches. Dimitri was one of my father’s best fighters and God knows how many battles he’d won, the guy was fast as hell. I could only guess what kind of training he would...
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posted by Problematic129
*I've gotten the first six chapters done, still working on it and Remember me. Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 1
    Friends and my dream guy
    One thing anda need to know about me, is I am not normal. I tend to do things differently, right now, I am sitting on my bed, rifling through my awesome ipod in my kegemaran Warna green, orange, and yellow.
    If anda have an ick face on, I’ll tunjuk anda my kegemaran finger. I happen to like these colors, there eye popping, different. A color that most people breeze past to...
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posted by hgfan5602
It's sad
It's the truth
Fighting through what it is
But I'll be stronger

I've gone through
Mounds of pain
I've been through
The deepest waters

Nobody can change my past
It's the truth, and it changed me
Sad to even hear the truth
Sad to...say the truth

Reality's always sad
And no one's gonna escape it.
It's how I became who I am today
It's how I didn't brag.

Why does this have to happen?
Why did it have to end?
Why does the world have to be so confusing?
Why did the fun have to end?

The world's just a crazy place
And no one's gonna stop that thought
Cause I'm broken for good...
Because of...the truth.
posted by dragonsmemory
In Eden, there are many different races. As a whoe, they are called Kinds. Each Kind has a capital city, sends its rulers to the Ruling Council, and contributes its own history to that of Eden. In this article, I will be discussing the Ruling Council and draconian politics, as both are difficult to understand.

THE RULING COUNCIL
The Ruling Council is comprised of the leaders of each Kind (except demons) in Eden. The Council meets at the summit of Councilpeak, located in the hati, tengah-tengah of the Broadplain area. There is a single road spiraling up the mountain, as well as a landing ledge on the south...
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the first part: link

SECOND CHAPTER
Paul Dock was bent with the nose that pratically touch the floor. He studying the crime scene, as usual. He isn't convinced that the assassin is Elvira Gorrige. It would be too obvius. He doesn't find nothing intresting on the stage, so he goes behind of that.
-Can i help anda sir, are anda sick?- asks a female voice, seeing the detective with the nose on the floor.
-Oh, no thank anda i'm good, i'm detective Dock, i was looking for something here.- balas Dock with a smile on his face
-may i ask anda some soalan mrs...-
-Samantha White- jawapan the girl -And of...
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 My terrifying enemy, Cat.
My terrifying enemy, Cat.
(Okay, so this is one of my weirder entries, but I just thought what it would be like for that yarn. This big thing pouncing on anda and stuff, anyway, here it is.)

So, today I was just lounging in the sewing room when this big orange thing swiped a paw at me and caused me to roll out of the basket. The thing swiped at me yet again and I remembered what my parents were talking about one night. "That cat thing almost rolled me completely out of shape and into a completely flat string!"
"That must have been horrifying, honey!" My dad had replied. I wasn't paying much attention to the conversation...
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I got utama and put the files in a drawer under my bed, it would be better if my mom didn't find them. My phone vibrated, taking it out of my pocket, I looked at the screen, “Texted as soon as I could, what's wrong?”
I sighed and sat on the edge of my bed.
“Just found out something about anda guys. Need to talk. Meet me in the woods behind my house tonight.”

That night was cloudy and cold, so I grabbed my jaket and headed out back. My mom wasn't home, so I didn't have to sneak out. I could hear Brett before I could see him, odd. “Julie, what's up? What's going on?” He was standing...
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posted by Problematic129
Just a little uplifting, includes pictures that's funny, and things that I hope makes anda smile.
Because smiling and laughing are very healthy to your hati, tengah-tengah and your emotional being, if your down get happy.
Life sometimes gets hard, and when I smile I usually feel better, so if your feeling down this will be a great help to.
We all have problems, atau something that sets us off our course. Life was never meant to be easy, we just have to accept that and take that step forward. Let go of all our fears, because there’s nothing to be afraid of.    
    Your...
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posted by wantadog
The Succubus, Prologue!
Downsized


“You called for me?” the young succubus, Odessa, knelt before her lord. She knew that she was about to be chewed out, but she didn’t care anymore, she would take whatever punishment he deemed fit, then leave his presence until her seterusnya one. Lord Arlon glared at her.
“You have some nerve, anda have repeatedly disobeyed me in the past, but now anda have gone too far. anda have broken one rule too many, and this one was a serious one.”
She kept her head bowed respectfully, but inwardly sneered at the fool. “You and I have differing opinions, my lord.”
Arlon...
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posted by hgfan5602
Once upon a dream
There was a world
Where everyone came together as one
Where they would sertai together and sing

Today
We share in the riches
We sertai together and sing
Of the amazing journey we've had
In our lives

No one would back away
In fear and cowardice,
No one would slink away
Everyone would be bold

We will be as one
On this beautiful earth,
While sharing our resources
We shall be together and sing

We are the world of destiny,
We are the people of the world,
And we do our very best,
To make this world brilliant

I have never seen a place
Where no one would
Be a traitor,
And they would hold hands and sing

We are...
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posted by IlovePatch97
Tell me darling why anda cry,
Your tears stain the katil anda lay upon
Could it be anda miss the ones anda clung to so tight,
Nothing but a scared little fawn
The flames burnt away your past and future,
The hate did nothing but balance your grief
What now? That’s presents question,
Something so fragile like a branch being clung to sejak a leaf
Where is your mother little dove?
What happened to those loving others who filled your empty nest?
How many word of the world can anda rhyme with love?
Perhaps someday we will know with, proper care and rest
When pursuing dreams take chances and strive for nothing less than best
Then only then can anda be sure you’ve completed life’s most demanding quest
posted by hgfan5602
Almighty eagle,
Soar, soar
Soar beyond your wildest dreams.....

There's no limit
On how much anda can soar
No one can
Break your wings and kill you

Soar for the skies,
Don't let the feelin go
Just soar, soar like never before
No one's gonna stop you
From believin

There wasn't a time
When nobody could never soar
But there was a time
When people never believed

And tomorrow
Isn't the hari to fall
And nobody's gonna push anda down
Oh almighty eagle

We're gonna be the powerful eagles
We're not gonna let anyone
Be our ruler,
We're not anyone's slave

Almighty eagle
Oh soar, soar towards the sky's height
And soar toward your dream
Let nothing keep anda away

Almighty eagle
Soar beyond your wildest dreams
And we're gonna fly tonight
Let nobody keep us down.
posted by Problematic129
*Sorry for the wait, writer's block showed it's ugly head. Thanks for all the komen-komen :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 3
    A strange vision
    “Was he hot?” My best friend Jessica asked. I groaned, of course that would be the first thing she asked.
    After that introduction, I drove straight to Jessica’s house, knowing she would rebel and not go to school, because she berkata and I quote ‘Monday doesn’t count as a school hari in my book’. Ever since the first hari of eighth grade, she hasn’t attended...
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posted by sadiebugz00
Life can be hard. Especially for me, Lily West, your almost-average 16-year-old girl. Most people think it's weird I'm bald. Others think I'm going to die. Then there's the occasional person who tries to take pity upon me. I'd rather they not, because some say it like I'm a helpless little penyu on its back. Sometimes I wish I die already, and sometimes I wish that I was a completely different person. Yes, it's tough having cancer. I just wish that they would respect me for a person instead of a helpless little bug.
posted by Dhampires
I ran fast my hati, tengah-tengah pounding hard against my chest, my breaths short causing my sheet to burn like api, kebakaran from the icy cold. I could only hear those pounding footsteps behind me I have to keep going, keep even an inches distance from him. I couldn't no I would not let him of all people catch me.

I ran faster and faster hard as I could I was tempted ti look back but was to afraid if I did he'd appear right behind me. "Brother! Save me please!" I crude out into the dark I got no reply back "Brian please come to me, I need anda I don't want to die brother! Save me!" I screamed out at the top...
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