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posted by sadiebugz00
This is the first chapter of the novel I've been working on....




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TORN
Derek’s Perspective

I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind me of him. I feel bad having to wake him up, he usually has nightmares and rarely sleeps well, but I have to if I am to do my girlfriend’s willing. “Carter…” I whisper, “Wake up buddy!” He slowly opens his one eye and thumps his tail quietly. “That’s right! Today is a happy day!” Today is happy day… I think, trying to convince myself. What a lie. He slowly and unstably gets up onto his 3 grayish brown legs. His floppy ears perked up just the slightest little bit. He walks up to me and looks up as if he is trying to say, “Hey! What’s up? What are we gonna do today?”
His story always makes my eyes well. He has been abused his whole life, his first owner, he had a spoiled son who wanted to own and know everything. So, he naturally wanted a bow and Arrow as well as an instructor. However, the instructor was late to the first appointment so the man put him out of business. He never did come around to getting is son a new instructor, so I suppose that the 13-year-old-boy tried to teach himself. However, Carter must have been walking around the yard with him, and got in the way of an arrow. One eye left.
Another owner had one hari accidentally left Carter outside when they were about to leave for Phoenix, and ran over him with their car. 3 legs left.
I can only imagine the pain he has been through, and I know I’ll be adding to it sejak abandoning him.
“C’mon Carter,” I mutter as I drag myself down the ratty stairs in my old apartment and into my kitchen. I open the cream colored cabinet and got out the Cinnamon roti bakar Crunch. I open up my susu and fix my cereal.
I whistle 3 times to Carter, a trick that I taught him, so that he will fetch my computer for me. 3 minit later after staring at my overly-soggy cereal, I pull up Google Maps and try to decide where I should go to… abandon him. It should be pretty far away so I don’t see him on the side of the road one hari and pick him up…. I think. This place is perfect! I think. The Sonoran Desert… I think. Not too close, not too far! I then go onto Google cari and find out that coyotes live there!!!
Are coyotes related to wolves?? I think so… And I know that Serigala are related to dogs! So, sejak putting him in this desert with the coyotes, I might be placing him with his long Lost Great Aunt Susan!! That’d be great if I was reuniting him with family!! That’d be great! Now I don’t feel as bad having to drop him off there!! I think, finally convincing myself that I COULD leave Carter in good hands, hands that might just be his family! What a delightful thought.
I realize that Carter is watching me, and I’m suddenly worried that he knows what I’m planning. Then, I realize that he’s just staring at my Makanan and I had forgotten to feed him. I pull out his bag of dry kibble and pour it into his bowl that says “Bad to the Bone” with a little bone painted onto it. He happily ate his breakfast, unknowing of his fate-to-be…
Chapter 3


Young prodigy, do not wake into the universe anda were born in. anda belong with us, so do not wake. Let our fangs drain out your humanity and fill anda up with our sweet nectar. It will be your new blood.


Warren woke up in a hospital katil breathing heavily. He woke up alone, looking around feeling the I.V needles in him. He even felt the catheter, and it felt UNCOMFORTABLE! He felt weary, but didn't want to go back to sleep. Two beautiful women came in, one was a doctor and one was a nurse. The doctor came in, as Warren had kept his eyes open because of the small room. He still had the...
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“What are anda doing here?” I asked as he walked into my living room and stood beside Sophie. “Sophie wanted to visit, so here we are.” He replied. He put his arm around Sophie's waist which annoyed me. Sophie was my best friend and he was just someone who likes stalking girls. Remembering my mom's rule about being a good host, I closed the door and asked them if they wanted anything to drink. “Ya, I'll have a double mocha cappuccino.” Sophie said. I knew she was joking because she was having a hard time keeping a straight face. We looked at each other, then burst out laughing. “I...
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(Sorry if it's not that great. It's my first time Penulisan a story for fun and not for school)

“Mom! Phone!” Where was she? I slowly dragged myself off the leather couch, knocking my buku to the floor. I watched as my pencil rolled under the armchair. Oh well, I was done with it anyways. I grabbed the phone on the eighth ring, “Hello?''
“Julie, babe. I thought you'd never answer. It's been like what? Three hours since we last chatted?” It was my slime-ball of an ex-boyfriend, Ryan.
“Ya, sure. What ev.” I replied while examining the nail polish chipping off my nails. “I got to...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 5
    The school routine
    By the saat week, I was firmly in my school routine. Wake up, breakfast, school, limited fun time, sleep, repeat. We had an official Gal table, and I believe we have three new gal’s. Though anda can’t be sure, I only know the one we confirmed.
    Believe it atau not, Talia. Yep, crazy pants is with us now, though she’s still crazy she’s not insane anymore. In fact, the doctors were surprised she miraculously recovered. My theory? School changed her, it did to me.
    She...
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Chapter 2
    Honey, yenoh
    “Finally!” I yell as I run to the parking lot, and jump into the waiting arms of my lovely boyfriend, Ryler.
    “Well…someone missed me.” Ryler berkata smirking.
    “Shut up,” I say. “It was horrible, being away from anda and freedom, boundaries limits. Why did summer have to end?!”
    Ryler shrugs. “Everything comes to an end, come on, let’s get anda home. Where are the gal’s?”
    I smile. “Beth’s getting a ride from Grey,...
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posted by wantadog
Chapter 2: The Enemy revealed! Friendship atau Heartbreak?


“I don’t care! I am not wearing this!”
Odessa pouted. This fool thought he could force her to wear men’s clothing of all things? That looked horrible! If he thought he was gonna get her into this, he was mistaken!
He groaned. “It’s all I have that’ll fit you.”
“I don’t care! It’s hideous!”
“I thought anda didn’t like me?”
She looked at him, confused and angry. “What’s that supposed to mean?”
He smiled. “Well normally women only fret about their opinion when they want to impress someone.”
She blushed red....
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posted by Problematic129
Part 9!!!Wow, I made it all the way here, thanks for viewing and commenting! Anyways I do hope anda enjoyed the song I wrote, and thank anda for Membaca it. I don't have a song for this one however I do have a song senarai I'm going to give anda guys which is down there |, there really inspiring and good, hope anda think so. But first I have to say that I don't own none of these pics, nada, zilch, they all go to the rightful owners. I hope this inspires you, as it did me. Sorry no song today, but I was thinking of giving anda guys a song senarai so anda can check them out. Sounds nice? Enjoy!
posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 16
    Awkward, it’s not the first time
    It was very unpleasant to be kicked out of our special bakery do to our girl fight. Now, it wasn’t that bad, we were just pulling each other’s hair, though I did get a good kick on my side, and Ali’s going to have an ugly bruise on her cheek from my fist, but hey.
    No damage done to the love.
    We immediately went to the mall buying ourselves ice cream, and saying sorry over and over again, with a few nice shopping trips....
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posted by Problematic129
Yay! A part 3, because of your encouragement and all, I have decided to continue on my Inpsried series. This one is called beautiful truth :), first of all I don't own any of these pictures, I've found them on various tumblr's. Some pictures in particaulr is from the little reasons to smile tumblr and the learnlovelivelife tumblr, so anda should check them out, it's really nice. I own non of these pictures, this is just for inspiring my lovely people out there. komen what anda think! And peminat-peminat appreciated ;) Again I own none of these pictures :) I don't know if I'm supposed to post a genre, and what genre this is, so sorry.
I own nothing!
Enjoy!
posted by alicia386
June 18
Today was the first time I saw her. It was the annual festivals for them. It began today and ended June 25. I happen to be hiking today. I had heard myths and legends about how they fall from the skies to dance and celebrate among the humans,

Back to the girl. She had light blue eyes and a thick head of hair. The part of her that really caught my eyes were her Angel wings.

They had a noticeable sparkle to them. I was certainly Bewitched sejak her beauty the moment I saw her.. It was hard to get her image out of my head.

Eventually, I had to leave. Those Bidadari would pick up on my scent and...
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Garren struggled for breath as he woke up. Why anda ask? No reason, only that he found himself underwater.

Swimming up as fast as he could, he tried as hard as possible to not let go of his breath. Finally, he reached the surface.

As he broke the water's surface and gasped for air, he looked around his surroundings, nearly sighing with relief as he saw the simplicity of it.

It was a simple room. The walls and floor were made of stone, and nothing else was in the room other than 2 portals. A red one and a blue one.

Climbing out of the water onto the cold stone floor, Garren realized that nothing...
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Uggh....my head. What the hell happened?

Garren slowly opens his eyes, but there wasn't much to see. The room was dim, and the only light coming into the room was from a small candle. The light didn't go far, and many spots in the room were still darkened to a great extent. It looked like a medieval dungeon. He tries to move, only to realize his wrists and ankles are chained to the wall.

"What's going on?" Garren demands, speaking to no one in particular. Has he failed a test, and is now dying for it? He's about to repeat himself, when he sees something lying on the ground not too far from him...
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Chapter Two- Setting My Sights

If ghost could pass out from shock then that was actually what I was about to do. It isn't the greatest feeling in the world to realize that you're dead, that no one on Earth will be able to hear anda say anything ever again. Everyone thinks anda are dead. There was a silver lining in this tale of misfortune. Everyone thinks I'm dead which meant, most likely, everyone would be gossiping about my death. I might just get some jawapan on this untimely tragedy. I longed to know what happened to me. Why was I like this? I surely don't want to be a ghost forever although,...
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Chapter 16
    Code furnace
    “Pam, how many times have I told anda to not fake injuries to the nurse and sleep through the whole hari of school?”
    I scrunched my brow. “Over twenty times.”
    Adam scowled. “You missed a whole hari of school, and! anda made Beth too!”
    “Hey! Beth agreed with me!” I said, “her life, her choices.”
    Adam rolled his eyes. “You’ve been doing this since ninth grade Pam, just endure the pain of school with the rest of your...
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Chapter 14
    Football games and gym days
    “GO! GO! GO! GO!”
    I groaned. “Oh, come on guys, it’s just a stupid game!”
    “A stupid game!” Adam yelled, and Ryler nodded his head enthusiastically. “It’s football!”
    I roll my eyes. “So?”
    “So?” Adam mimicked. “This game is sacred! Awesome! It’s football!”
    “It’s also too long,” I whine. “I mean like, I Cinta it, I really do. But sitting around is torture,...
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As doctors rushed in and Mariah and Tiffany ran seterusnya to Kyle, James sat there, looking at his brother, remembering all that they'd gone through, fighting evil monsters that don't exist, fighting bad guys, everything, they survived it all. Except the human race, their own species. He was about to cry but looked up and saw Mariah and Tiffany, crying. He hugged them tight, like Kyle used to. "It'll be ok" he said. "But what are we going to do?" sobbed Mariah. "Live on." berkata James and hugged them tighter. Later that evening James went to Kyle's house and looked under his katil and found a box. He...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 3
    The interview
    Approximately two days and we were off. Ashlynn was excitedly working on the script and Sasha was helping with the budget that the teacher just wouldn’t help with. Even with Fern’s influence she still didn’t trust us, maybe a little bit more, but still not that much. We were still undecided about the whole interviewing thing-y so we’ve just been searching on the internet and getting some old released police records.
    “Okay, so the horror jam is looking pretty good,” Sasha mutters as she...
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