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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow stood Membaca the task he had been given. It had come from the general of the battalions and recruiting so he couldn't object. He read the scrawled out message again:

Task #1: Thursday, August 3 ****
Recruit 003579-Dains

anda are to lapor to the prison-holds this afternoon for your task of executing the captured victims from the villages of Dains and of the Bellator boy captured one hari after. Failure to comply will result in serious penalty including but not restricted to:
Demotion
Reassigned
Imprisoned
Death

Talow swallowed as he pushed open the large doors, behind were the prison-holds. The air held a stench of sweat and blood that lingered in one's throat. He forced himself not to gag as he walked towards the three soldiers standing around a large desk. The meja was occupied sejak a large man who was giving one boy the death stare.
“You brought this upon yourself, failure to follow the rules has its consequences.” The man's fingers were inched towards a drawer in the desk, the boy in soalan watched silently. “Do anda remember what it was anda did?” The man sat forward, a wicked grin on his face. The boy was sweating but made no alih to wipe his brow. “Speak!” He jolted and like a machine began to talk.
“I refused to follow my battalion into battle, leaving my brothers to the mercy of the Bellators.” His mouth clamped shut when he was done.
“Exactly.” The man at the meja had a look in his eye like a savage beast with its prey pinned under it. “And anda know why I have to punish anda for this. If everyone started abandoning mission we would have Lost years ago. Is that what anda want! To be ruled sejak self-loving Bellators! Well do you?” The man's face had turned red with rage as he leaned across the meja to shout in the traitor's face.
“No...I...um..” He was silenced sejak the man as he stood and gripped him sejak the throat.
“I new anda were a tikus the hari anda were recruited.” He dropped him to the ground. “Take him away, I'll deal with him later.” Two of the soldiers who had been standing behind the boy now came ke hadapan and grabbed him sejak the arms. His shouts and pleading could be heard as he was dragged down the hall. Talow watched them leave and was having saat thoughts about this when the man noticed him.
“Quit cowering and get over here before I do the same to you.” Talow obeyed and stood before the man, handing his paper over. The man read it and sank back into his chair.
“So, anda got the guts to do this atau are anda going to chicken out like most of them?” Talow didn't say a word as the man walked around the meja and lead him down the same hall the soldiers had vanished down. Talow could see people locked behind bars, dirty and sad-looking as he passed keeping close to the officer. When they reach cell 23 Talow could see the villagers from Dains watching him as the door was unlocked. They backed into the corner as the officer entered the cell and grabbed a thin man with bloody nails and a bruise on his cheek. He dropped him in-front of Talow.
“Your choice. We can do this the quick way atau we can drag it out.” He pulled from his tali pinggang a small gun and a club with nails poking out of it. Talow looked from the weapons to the man who was watching the floor, not meeting his eyes. Talow picked the gun, checking how many rounds it had left. One. Just enough to finish the job. He saw the officer watching him, waiting for him to pull the trigger and end this mans life in full view of the others. Talow knew this man which made all so much harder. As he aimed the gun and steadied his shaking finger on the trigger Talow was about to bury the bullet in the man's head when a shout from down the hall forced him to jerk his hand and shoot the floor seterusnya to the man. The officer spun on his heel and stormed down the small ahllway, stopping at a cell containing one person. The boy who had attacked Talow in the clearing. The man berkata something to him before he started walking back to his meja to fins another bullet.

Talow took this opportunity to run down the hall and stop at the cell.
“Why did anda do that?” He asked the boy behind the bars. The boy leaned casually against the wall, examining his nails.
“Do what?”
“Stop me from shooting that villager.” Talow was growing impatient knowing that his time was running out.
“I know anda don't like killing, it's written all over your face.” The boy came closer. “You want to get out of here?” Talow nodded eagerly. “Next chance anda get out of this place find the main road until anda reach a place with two alley ways. Take the second, it'll lead anda the jungle.” Talow made a mental note of what he was told.
“Why are anda helping me?”
“Think of it as a favour.” Talow took a step back from him and started to turn away.
“Thank you...um..” He didn't even know his name to thank him properly.
“Name's Raza, now get out of here.” Raza shooed him away as the officer started coming back down the hall.

Talow found the entrance to HQ easy enough, it was getting out that would cause some problems. He waited around until he saw someone he knew.
“Nico, Cyle!”
“Hey Talow, what's up?” They stopped to talk to him, moving to a dinding where they wouldn't be in the way.
“I was wondering if anda guys could get the guards to open the doors since you've both got lebih seniority then me. I think I dropped something outside when we were coming back.” Cyle and Nico exchanged looks, not quite believing his story but they helped him anyway. When Talow was far enough away, he started to follow the directions Raza had telah diberi him, sure enough he found himself at the edge of the jungle. All he had to do was dive in there and he'd be utama free, but should he? Talow looked back at the city noticing the line of men coming down the main road. He still held the plans under his jaket and he knew they were looking for him. Were they after the plans? Did they know he had escaped? All thinking came to late as UFS soldiers found him. Maybe if he talked to them they would see it from his point of view. He had the plans, all he had to do was tunjuk them.
posted by alicia386
Crime: Dectetive Story




Chapter 6: Two Missing People Makes A Certain Someone Happy

      Simone Rivers wore her blue strapless dress which made her look taller. She was already tall but she needed that extra height. She had her long blonde hair curled and wore the black wedges she recently bought. The whole outfits was around a seven hundred dollars but she wouldn't mention that to her cheap dad. She looked dazzling atau at least that is what all the boys thought when they whistled when she walked by. She took pleasure on having their attention. Nothing could stop her now. She felt powerful...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and Fantasi :)~

Chapter 27
        Creepy doesn’t even begin to describe
    “The drowning man? Seriously creepy, considering how she died.” Jess said, shivering. “They’ve got to be the number one suspects now.”
    “It probably wasn’t all of them, just a few, atau maybe even one.” Cadence said. “Think is, Dorothy was loved sejak everyone, and in that vision everyone wanted to be her favorite, what gives?”
    “What?”
    “Who would...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 10
    The smell of young Cinta in the morning
    You’d all be happy to know that I never buried a certain Meredith Baxter, but I did accidentally hit her during our lovely game of bola tampar fifteen times.
    “Hey JONES! Watch it!” She yelled furiously at me.
    “Oh sorry, I didn’t give a had enough smack,” I shrug as I put on my most innocent face.
    Meredith glared at me but berkata nothing more.
    Don’t anda just Cinta the feeling of having the last word?...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Eight

IF ONLY I COULD HAVE MULTIPLE LIVES atau LIVE FOREVER. -Erica

      I was rudely thrown in a miniature room. He didn't say much when he lugged me here. Although, I could sense others nearby but when I looked there were no ghost atau anyone near. I had finally gotten rid of the feeling to only have it come back again. This time I saw who it was. "Erica?" A shimmery figure exposed itself to me. A little surprise but not as surprise as Erica who was now flickering on and off like a light bulb.
      "Who are anda and why did anda attack me?" This Erica was not the one I remembered from...
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Chapter Twelve
 
      "This just in," announced anchorman Douglass. "Some new insight on the Dalton murder case has just been revealed. Not only have they discovered the real killer they also have a CD of the killer admitting to the crime. Although, they will not go public with the names and other crucial details we still keep faith for the Dalton parents as they go through this awful time. Back to anda Joe."
      Dakota stared her tv with astonishment. She had just leave the jailhouse and arrived utama to find her parents watching the news. Not only was she surprised, she was also impressed...
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posted by hgfan5602
I've had the time of my life
We were comin and goin
But I told myself,
Kid, things are gonna be alright.

Things were hard,
Things were mighty difficult,
Things were strange,
But I kept my head through it all

Boy I survived...
And what a mess I've made
At least I made it through alive
Gosh, unexpectedly, it was the time of my life

When I thought
I could not text and party all night long
When I thought
No one's gonna keep me down

The strange life
The awesome life
Just comin and goin
It's weird how it is

One day, it's like "Awesome!"
And the seterusnya hari it's like "I wish I was dead"
Life's just always strange
But I've...
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Chapter Three

THE TRUE MYSTERY IS NOT WHAT HAPPENED IN YOUR LIFE BUT WHAY HAPPENED AFTER DEATH. ARE anda STILL ALIVE, DO anda TRANSFER INTO A NEW BODY, atau WHAT? -EMMA

      Sophie didn't arrive utama until late that evening. That was so like her. She was such a party girl that she assumed that she could tunjuk up whenever she pleased. I was getting tired of that. I really needed her today but she was too busy having fun and being social. I had spent the rest of the hari painting a new canvas of a stormy hari with wind, rain, and lightening. It turned out beautiful.
      Sophie came into the basement...
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posted by hgfan5602
I've been written
The painful truth,
Just two days ago,
When I was...betrayed.

He walked away from me
He threw me down in the sand
Like I was some little doll
Of little importance.

It was a scary thought
To think,
Of all those years...
When he took me in
Now he threw me down and that's that

I'm not a paper doll
So I will not be thrown down again
Cuz I am not a puppet
No one will control me with strings

I am invincible
I am an individual
No one shall make me suffer
Though I must cry sometimes....

Don't hayun, swing me sejak my head
Don't make me lose my mind
I don't want to destroy you
But I will, if anda destroy me.
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the komen-komen :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 4
    Something fishy
    I had the perfect excuse to go back to the station, after my parents rash behavior I would need to have an apology at the ready. I mean, if anda fight in the police station be glad anda weren’t arrested.
    I entered the police station, looking for anyone similar. I felt a tap on my shoulder and whirled around to find the boy I was looking for.
    Cadence.
    “Hello again, Destiny,”...
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hei readers as anda all know I usually begin with Abbie Preston my main character in this story but now I kinda wanted something diffrent so I began with the Gellar family and some of their relatives, this chapter is all them so I hope anda enjoy it just the same! ..two characters in this chapter are named after two of my most loyal readers usernames..
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Chapter (14):
"Thank anda so much for coming" berkata Laura Gellar to the last of the guests as the filed one sejak one out of the door, "Your welcome, Laura, and agian...
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posted by rory2011
chapter (4)


the Vampires took me with my sister and my brother ,they hit us on our head to pass out and when we woke up ,we found our self's in a dark nasty old room ,the room were empty ,the only thing I can see is the sun light crossing that small window
I looked around me Sofia and Jeremy were still sleeping on the floor ,I smelled something weird ,I feel dizzy ,I can't see very clear so I started knocking the room door strongly "help ,please somebody help me " ,I can feel my body hit the ground strongly ,I want to get up but I couldn't alih ,I couldn't even breath

all I see now is darkness...
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posted by Dhampires
No matter how much anda wish for lebih it happens like the jam glass time runs out and you'll lung for more.

With that time your ideas that others may know them as sweet they run out and leave people wanting more.

We song writers, novelists, story writers and poets will all leave our adience want so much more. The reason? It's because of our massive creatively, our unique style and tenchquie it's what drives us to a certain point as of where we'll keep our audience entertained. While inventors may lose their touch after contrast copies from the same old ideas being modefiyed we have our minds being put to the test sejak our viewers. After all they matter most their who we write for right?
I woke up cold, tired and sore. I moved a little and got a face full of sunshine, I reached for the curtains and for my quilt. I opened one eye a bit to find them, but when I looked I wasn't in my bed, atau even in my house. I was in the forest on the cold, hard ground. “What happened?” I berkata out loud. I stretched. “Ouch.” My back and shoulders were killing me, I touched my shoulder blade and winced. It was scratched and the skin was torn. I heaved myself off the ground and nearly fell back down. “What is going on?” I stood there for what felt like eternity, when I heard something....
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posted by rory2011
chapter (3)

    
"ok where are we ? " Jeremy berkata ,"I don't know ,it looks like we're in china "
"yea but there's nobody here ,the streets are empty"
I heard a weird scary voice ,"what was that sound ? " I berkata ,"it's my stomach ,I'm so hungry" Sofia berkata ,"ok let's try to find a restaurant atau a place that we could eat there "I berkata
we were walking around the city ,trying to find the restaurant ,I looked all over the thing that can give me a clue for the place that we're in but I couldn't understand anything ,it's like we're in everywhere ,there were houses took the shape...
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(Verse 1)
I am in Cinta with the guy whois sweet
till we meet It isn't possible

(Verse 1)

(Chorus)
We need to meet before we go under cover for each other We need to meet before we go undercover for each other

(Verse 2)
We haven't met yet
Still single hearted
thinkin' 'bout each other
Everyday

(Verse 2)

(Bridge)
Now & then everyday we need to meet each other goin' separate paths and ways to meet each other and go undercover

(Pre-Chorus)
We are going separate paths and ways sometime we need to meet in the middle and go undercover Now,

(Chorus)
We need to meet before we go under cover for each other We need to meet before we go undercover for each other

(Chorus)

We need to meet before we go undercover
posted by alicia386
Chapter Five

Mason met Olivia at his kegemaran restaurant. It was a perfect hari for a makan malam, majlis makan malam date. The sun was shinny, the clouds were extra white, and the rumput seemed greener then ever. If only she knew that this was a makan malam, majlis makan malam date. He signed the last autograph for today as Olivia sat across from him at their round table. Her hair was curly and in a ponytail. Then she wore a red dress with a thick, black tali pinggang in the middle. His saat impression of her was still the same, gorgeous. This tarikh was going pretty well but Cassidy dresses better. Mainly because Cassidy is rich but he didn't want to...
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posted by Problematic129
*First of all thanks for komen-komen :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 3
    Colorful styles and pictures to doom
    After that class I found out that Cali and I shared all the same classes. And hallelujah for that, because she’s been giving me Nasihat and tips throughout the beginning of the day, and I stuck to her like glue.
    The lebih I got to know I realized that she wasn’t all that perky, it’s just in the morning because she has too much coffee. sejak the time lunch rolled around I was practically shaking....
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posted by hgfan5602
Every weekend, I sleep late, like every normal teenager. Problem is, my annoying little brother wakes up at like what? 6:30 every morning? Yeah. And he dumps a bucket of water filled with ice in it on my face if I don't wake up at 6:30. What a nuisance. Otherwise, if I go hangout with my Friends before he gets up. he says, "Mrs. Mellark! Going out with your boyfriend?" Yeah, I like Peeta, as a matter of fact, if anda didn't know before. Personal opinion, you'll live with it. What a strange little kid. No idea where he learned what a boyfriend was, but fine. The major thing that makes me mad...
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Hi. My name is Jake Gartner, and right now, basically a huge mutant serpent is coming to menelan me whole, tear me to pieces of flesh, so I have no time to talk right now. Oh, um...you want to follow me? Sure, just accept that everyday will be the best of the thrills. Right now, we are not getting any help from the immortal world, so just know that we have a horrible system of magic right now, and we have an extremely low supply of weapons, thus, the chance that anda will get out of this mess is around eighty-six percent. (because of me, the master of war) Oh yeah, the serpent. Enough talk. (ROARS) Off to kill a mutant serpent!!! (stabs, deflects, cuts a gash in its head, dies) That's only our first one, trainee. Whatever your name is. seterusnya time, I invite anda to sertai with us on our battle. And it will be even lebih life-consuming, if anda know what that means.
Yo, everyone. Chase here. anda know, Jake's been Berlakon all strange lately like he's hiding something from me. And I don't like it. I don't see how anyone would. I thought we were a team. And I thought he berkata that I was just as great as he was. Now, this proves that he was totally lying. What a fraud. Okay, I found out something today that might be useful to the two of us. Well, that is, if Jake even wants to work with me. I saw his light on yesterday night. Face it, he's probably researching something about the mutant serpent. Am I right? Well, yes, I thought so. anda know, I am telepathic....
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