This is a peminat fiction written sejak Charlotte, a friend of mine. We both went to Eternal Twilight, the convention, and she entered the peminat fic competition with this story and got into the final. Thought I would post it here xD
We were standing in the clearing, near the reservation. It was spring and one of Forks few sunny days. There wasn’t a awan in the sky. The rays of light sparkled on the rumput and the scent of Bunga hung thick in the air. Now was the moment, I thought. Far enough from the house so dad wouldn’t here me…
Plucking up my courage I turned and Jake was standing closer than I had expected. My senses were usually so sharp; I could hear a twig falling from miles away. I was sure he could here my hati, tengah-tengah beating faster. What was wrong with me? Jacob was just a friend, my very best friend, but nevertheless just a friend.
But lately…
I had never noticed before how many different Warna his russet bulu had in the sun atau how beautiful his dark eyes were. The way his laughter made my hati, tengah-tengah glow and his smile made me want to sing. How I felt unsure when he wasn’t sejak my side and hours felt like days when he had to leave to go on patrol.
He looked up and I saw the quizzical look on his face. As always he was on his guard, worried I wasn’t perfectly alright. Slowly, I put my hand on his face. If I weren’t half vampire I was sure it would be shaking. I felt his hot breath on the palm of my hand and sighed. I saw the surprise on his face as he heard what I was telling him. Not telling but showing. Not words but colors, bright and shiny, everything that was Jacob, his smile, his laugh, imej of us together, running side sejak side, racing, having fun. Even in years to come I could never forgot that moment of pure bliss. I looked into his eyes, leaned ke hadapan and felt his lips on mine.
"Nessie..?"
"Yes?"
"You’re my gravity… anda know that?"
I laughed.
Mom had told me how much she loved dad. I had never understood. Now I knew.
We were standing in the clearing, near the reservation. It was spring and one of Forks few sunny days. There wasn’t a awan in the sky. The rays of light sparkled on the rumput and the scent of Bunga hung thick in the air. Now was the moment, I thought. Far enough from the house so dad wouldn’t here me…
Plucking up my courage I turned and Jake was standing closer than I had expected. My senses were usually so sharp; I could hear a twig falling from miles away. I was sure he could here my hati, tengah-tengah beating faster. What was wrong with me? Jacob was just a friend, my very best friend, but nevertheless just a friend.
But lately…
I had never noticed before how many different Warna his russet bulu had in the sun atau how beautiful his dark eyes were. The way his laughter made my hati, tengah-tengah glow and his smile made me want to sing. How I felt unsure when he wasn’t sejak my side and hours felt like days when he had to leave to go on patrol.
He looked up and I saw the quizzical look on his face. As always he was on his guard, worried I wasn’t perfectly alright. Slowly, I put my hand on his face. If I weren’t half vampire I was sure it would be shaking. I felt his hot breath on the palm of my hand and sighed. I saw the surprise on his face as he heard what I was telling him. Not telling but showing. Not words but colors, bright and shiny, everything that was Jacob, his smile, his laugh, imej of us together, running side sejak side, racing, having fun. Even in years to come I could never forgot that moment of pure bliss. I looked into his eyes, leaned ke hadapan and felt his lips on mine.
"Nessie..?"
"Yes?"
"You’re my gravity… anda know that?"
I laughed.
Mom had told me how much she loved dad. I had never understood. Now I knew.
one eager look from anda and sejak hati, tengah-tengah starts to soar.
i dont know how it could be. that i would Cinta anda more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side sejak side.i want all of anda forever.no less time will ever do
anda say how can anda ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long lalu when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of anda and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me sejak the hand and lead me anywhere.with anda my time is yours to share. i Cinta you
bella
i dont know how it could be. that i would Cinta anda more
a taste of time right here in my hands words cant describe
what my eyes can.
side sejak side.i want all of anda forever.no less time will ever do
anda say how can anda ask me to take your life.oh edward that was long lalu when
i looked into your eyes.
its apart of anda and always will be.without you.i am incomplete
so take me sejak the hand and lead me anywhere.with anda my time is yours to share. i Cinta you
bella
Okay beacause I am a huge Twilight peminat I have joined this club. I fell in Cinta after the first 3 chapters of Tiwilight and I am still in the process of Membaca the books. If anda could please at least say in the beginning of your artikel that it is concerning X books. That would help me out soooo much because I only have a limited amount of time I can read because of school and homework. The mentioning of things that I have not read yet is making me want to read the buku so much lebih and it has caused me to get in trouble at school for Membaca when I shouldn't be. Thank anda so VERY much.
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were emas and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend atau girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in Cinta and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would Cinta edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the buku yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank anda for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please komen of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in Cinta and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would Cinta edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the buku yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank anda for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please komen of wat u think of my article...=þ
YOu know what my friend Adriana I got her this awesome Chritmas preasent it is a Twilight shrit that I got a the Willowbrick Mall (Also Adriana is obsesed with Twlight)
thanks for Membaca im really new at this as some of guys can tell