Chapter 2 is up, please read and komen below. The chapters are getting longer now. I've got some ideas for later chapters, maybe something in Esme's point of view (we never really see her, thought it would be nice), I'm thinking of posting chapters weekly, some of them might be a bit late, I've got a lot on, but please look out for them. See anda all with Chapter 3 Soon
Edwards POV
"Alice where are we going, can't we just go utama with the others?" I said. All I wanted was to go utama to my Bella and make sure she was ok.
"Edward she will be fine. Bella is a eighteen tahun old woman, I'm sure she can look after herself for fifteen minutes. Now quit whining and stay out of my head,you're not supposed to see this and I need to think without having to translate something in my head to keep anda out."
Alice gave me one last look then hopped out of her Porshe 911 Turbo and began to skip to an big oak front door.
"Don't make a run for it either, I will see." She added in an undertone to me over her shoulder.
Alice was gone for nearly an jam before she returned with a black package in her hand. She slid in seterusnya to me and gracefully threw the package over her shoulder, so that it neatly landed foulded on the back seat.
"Right, we're done then, call your little girlie friend and tell us to meet us at the house, as I'm sure anda already know I have a surprise for her and she is going to Cinta it unless anda are finally willing to bet against me?" She smiled up at me.
How could someone so small be so annoying? She knew perfectly well that there was only one time I was willing to bet against her and even then I was worried that she would be right.
The wedding was only the first step and then Bella would do anything in her power (and believe me she could be very convincing when she wanted to) to become a vampire.
Hurry up Edward,call her, atau she will get there way after us and then the plan won't work. She needs to get there before us, then Emmett can distract her with something and then we walk in, anda go sit with her for a while, whilst I sort everything out. And finally surprise she loves it.
Alice's thought were even lebih annoying than her words. I dialled the number and waited for 7 rings, humans could be so slow sometimes.
"Hello?" Her soft, velvety voice answered. I couldn't wait to marry her and be able to call her mine.
"Hi honey, it's me," She knew this already though I could tell sejak the quickening of her breath. "Head on over to the house, Alice says she's got a surprise for you, unfortunatly I can't help anda she won't tell me what it is. Plus it will be just anda girls tonight, we're planning the bachalor party. Cinta you."
"Kay," she said, her voice was distracted "I'll head on over."
"Bel-" I started but the line was cut off.
Edward, what's wrong? sometimes I wish I could block out Alice's thoughts.
"Jacob." Was all I replied. I didn't know how I knew but I knew. He was there. I should have known that if I'd forbidden her to go to La Push, he would go to Forks.
Edwards POV
"Alice where are we going, can't we just go utama with the others?" I said. All I wanted was to go utama to my Bella and make sure she was ok.
"Edward she will be fine. Bella is a eighteen tahun old woman, I'm sure she can look after herself for fifteen minutes. Now quit whining and stay out of my head,you're not supposed to see this and I need to think without having to translate something in my head to keep anda out."
Alice gave me one last look then hopped out of her Porshe 911 Turbo and began to skip to an big oak front door.
"Don't make a run for it either, I will see." She added in an undertone to me over her shoulder.
Alice was gone for nearly an jam before she returned with a black package in her hand. She slid in seterusnya to me and gracefully threw the package over her shoulder, so that it neatly landed foulded on the back seat.
"Right, we're done then, call your little girlie friend and tell us to meet us at the house, as I'm sure anda already know I have a surprise for her and she is going to Cinta it unless anda are finally willing to bet against me?" She smiled up at me.
How could someone so small be so annoying? She knew perfectly well that there was only one time I was willing to bet against her and even then I was worried that she would be right.
The wedding was only the first step and then Bella would do anything in her power (and believe me she could be very convincing when she wanted to) to become a vampire.
Hurry up Edward,call her, atau she will get there way after us and then the plan won't work. She needs to get there before us, then Emmett can distract her with something and then we walk in, anda go sit with her for a while, whilst I sort everything out. And finally surprise she loves it.
Alice's thought were even lebih annoying than her words. I dialled the number and waited for 7 rings, humans could be so slow sometimes.
"Hello?" Her soft, velvety voice answered. I couldn't wait to marry her and be able to call her mine.
"Hi honey, it's me," She knew this already though I could tell sejak the quickening of her breath. "Head on over to the house, Alice says she's got a surprise for you, unfortunatly I can't help anda she won't tell me what it is. Plus it will be just anda girls tonight, we're planning the bachalor party. Cinta you."
"Kay," she said, her voice was distracted "I'll head on over."
"Bel-" I started but the line was cut off.
Edward, what's wrong? sometimes I wish I could block out Alice's thoughts.
"Jacob." Was all I replied. I didn't know how I knew but I knew. He was there. I should have known that if I'd forbidden her to go to La Push, he would go to Forks.
When we reached my utama mason was crying and reenesme was trying to comfort her little brother.Alice and esme were talking very fast so I only caught little bits and pieces of the conversation .But it seemed that we were going to have to wait till edward and jacob and the other boys came back.while esme and alice were disscussing the subject reenesme and i were trying to comfort mason.At the same time i was worriying about edward I noticed reenesme looked very deep in thought.Then alll of the sudden esme is calling me ,my daughter,and my son to come quickly.Whehn we got there alice looked like she would be crying if she could cry.When I asked her what was wrong all she managed to choke out was Edward.Imediatly I knew something very bad had happened.
Ok guys i correct all my writings i hope anda can understand them better!! please comment!!!
I didn't know how my life will be as vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from them is torturing my self.
I felt like I’m trapped without an exit
the only thing that keeps me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, now that they are not in lebih danger I feel lebih in peace.
But what will I should tell Charlie when the time to alih arrives?
How will he react to this, He will have too many soalan and how I suppose to explain it to him? I think that he already knows what we really are, but he is too scared to say it atau just think about it.
But what I really know right now is that we are selamat, peti deposit keselamatan and will start our Happy Ever After no matter what happen atau what people think about us.
I think
I didn't know how my life will be as vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from them is torturing my self.
I felt like I’m trapped without an exit
the only thing that keeps me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, now that they are not in lebih danger I feel lebih in peace.
But what will I should tell Charlie when the time to alih arrives?
How will he react to this, He will have too many soalan and how I suppose to explain it to him? I think that he already knows what we really are, but he is too scared to say it atau just think about it.
But what I really know right now is that we are selamat, peti deposit keselamatan and will start our Happy Ever After no matter what happen atau what people think about us.
I think
ok so this is a old song from the fiftys but i think it relates to how bella feels after edward leaves her in new moon so here it is
Why does the sun go on shining
Why does the sea rush to pantai
Don't they know it's the end of the world
'Cause anda don't Cinta me any lebih
Why do the birds go on Singing
Why do the stars glow above
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when I Lost your love
I wake up in the morning and I wonder
Why everything's the same as it was
I can't understand, no, I can't understand
How life goes on the way it does
Why does my hati, tengah-tengah go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when anda berkata goodbye
Why does my hati, tengah-tengah go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when anda berkata goodbye
Why does the sun go on shining
Why does the sea rush to pantai
Don't they know it's the end of the world
'Cause anda don't Cinta me any lebih
Why do the birds go on Singing
Why do the stars glow above
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when I Lost your love
I wake up in the morning and I wonder
Why everything's the same as it was
I can't understand, no, I can't understand
How life goes on the way it does
Why does my hati, tengah-tengah go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when anda berkata goodbye
Why does my hati, tengah-tengah go on beating
Why do these eyes of mine cry
Don't they know it's the end of the world
It ended when anda berkata goodbye
thanks for Membaca im really new at this as some of guys can tell
While I was trying to sleep I couldn't help feel excited about Breaking Dawn and remember the theories I read throughout the day. Then, I remembered the thing about dear Alice having Lost all memory of being human. This led me to believe (since her lover was a vamp. right? atau something like that.) that maybe Alice actualy wanted to become a vampire.
As a penalty atau something, she forgot her memory....
So, maybe this will happen to Bella.... But, I doubt it.
It was just a Rawak (and possibly a WAY off) theory, but I just wanted to share it with all of you.
^___^'
As a penalty atau something, she forgot her memory....
So, maybe this will happen to Bella.... But, I doubt it.
It was just a Rawak (and possibly a WAY off) theory, but I just wanted to share it with all of you.
^___^'
Twilight Fan-Fiction
Cake scene
~Bella's Point of view~
I felt my hati, tengah-tengah pumping,My lovely daughter was getting married to jake it's like my whole life was turned around,Renesmee with jake I so happy when I see Jacob with a suit he reminds me of my dance with him at my wedding
~Edward's point of view~
"Bella,I'm so happy our daughters getting married"
I saw Jacob walking towards us with a happy smile
~Jacob's point of view~
'Hey Bella,Edward I can't believe that it's me and renesmee's wedding"
I was so scared inside and happy on the outside,Everytime I see Nessie with the Beautiful Wedding gaun I feel so happy and exciting, I over Heard Edward calling my name over the loud. Music,I bet it won't be good........TO BE CONTINUED;)
Cake scene
~Bella's Point of view~
I felt my hati, tengah-tengah pumping,My lovely daughter was getting married to jake it's like my whole life was turned around,Renesmee with jake I so happy when I see Jacob with a suit he reminds me of my dance with him at my wedding
~Edward's point of view~
"Bella,I'm so happy our daughters getting married"
I saw Jacob walking towards us with a happy smile
~Jacob's point of view~
'Hey Bella,Edward I can't believe that it's me and renesmee's wedding"
I was so scared inside and happy on the outside,Everytime I see Nessie with the Beautiful Wedding gaun I feel so happy and exciting, I over Heard Edward calling my name over the loud. Music,I bet it won't be good........TO BE CONTINUED;)