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chapter one
"oh please mum ellie is my best friend please let here stay" renesmee begged
"nessie this life just isnt a place for a little girl to be"i hated it but it was true i even called her nessie. she looked at the floor her long black eyelashes cating a shadow on her cheeks, her long bronze hair falling on her face.
"ask our dad" i berkata sighing pushing the soalan on to someone else i couldnt stand hurting here.
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"nessie anda cleaned your room write sheel be her in 5 miniutes i can here the car" the tyres rubbed against the gravil path emmett and jasper had laid so ellie and her mum hannah wouldnt get Lost on the way to the house.
"nessie that baju has a stain go change it"
i shouted over my shoulder whilst i fluttered around trying to clean the front room.
edwards arms caught me.
"stop paniking the house looks fine we always have seth and the Serigala Jadian round enclouding sue and anda go shopping in the local stores full of humans anda can do this" he whispered into my hair.
there was two taps on the door as ellies mums delicate hands.
i ran to the door with nessie sejak my side.
"hey mrs barkley we will drop ellie utama if you'd like?" i offered as edward came to my side.
"that would be great if anda could how old is this house its beautifull" she told me looking up at are cottage.
i smiled "edwards mother esme made it with the help of edwards brothers and of corse some lebih men. they made it for a presant for my birthday and wedding presant".
"wow !... anyway i will go let the girls play.
i shut the door after ellie had stepped in the house and waved goodbye.
chapeter 2
we went to the clearing with a gazebo already set up bye jasper and emmett for if it rained (witch it did)
we sat on the blankets and pillows we had braught as we watched rosalie and emmett play with nessie and ellie they loved it because emmett swung them round and round they squeled as he spun them to the floor then bringing them up before they crashed.
then we heard it. they were running.running to us. not stopping. we all stopped. froze. it was to late to run. to late to hide only time to waite. it was to late ellie was now in the secret we had no way to stop are secret becoming hers aswell...
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every seconf i get older every saat i die a bit lebih no angkasa for unhappiness no time to wait the sunshines when u smile so make every scond a smiling one anda are my sun anda are my stars anda are my moon anda are my world the key to my hati, tengah-tengah rests in your smile.
the poum i had written for nessie on her 5th birthday.But the thought poissened my mind the thought of the faces of the people stood infront of me slowly smothered the memory of my daughters smile of edwards face of emmett of rosalie my mind trailed through the members of my family now in danger.
we stood there Frozen still until the youngest one stepped ke hadapan probably a teenager when she was changed. her long straight white hair curled into ringletts so the purpil underneath slithered through looking very much like the poisson i saw leaking like black ink over the pictuers of my family,but leacking through her hair soacking up until it reached her routs. her ruby red eyes focussed on mine hers was playfull her eyes matched her face she was very much still a child.
her long pupil jubah, berjubah swept to the floor lose and to big whilst her corset and trousers fit like a saat layer of purpil skin.
"i call dibs on the human" she sang skipping towards us everyone croached ready to attack pushing ellie and nessie to the middle.
she stopped in the middle of her dance towards us her face froze a smile playing on her lips.
"you dont honestly wish to fight me...do you" she chalanged playing with her hair.Edward hissed when she looked at nessie as did everyone else i put up my shield ready for the attak but not one of us moved to chalange us. she crackled and burst into laughter not even anda emmett even anda are going to turn down a fight. Her piercing eyes turned to his face he stood his ground but did not alih towards her he simply moved his arm and with a slight movment in his wrist pushed rosalie behind him.she burst into another giggle fit once again becoming the child but this time evey one of her gaurds roared with laughter. that was when it finally hit me with a bump that the altarlas were here and they would leave and none of us would not one vampire who has chalanged the altarlas had survived lebih than an hour. we were doomed but this time we were killing the Serigala and ellie's family and charlie renee everyone everyone we have ever nown atau loved will not live to see the light of hari again the only way they will live longer then an jam was if we managed to keep ivory the beautifull teeanager infront of me bizzy for longer.
CHAPETER 4
the altarlas story
chapter one
"oh please mum ellie is my best friend please let here stay" renesmee begged
"nessie this life just isnt a place for a little girl to be"i hated it but it was true i even called her nessie. she looked at the floor her long black eyelashes cating a shadow on her cheeks, her long bronze hair falling on her face.
"ask our dad" i berkata sighing pushing the soalan on to someone else i couldnt stand hurting here.
******
"nessie anda cleaned your room write sheel be her in 5 miniutes i can here the car" the tyres rubbed against the gravil path emmett and jasper had laid so ellie and her mum hannah wouldnt get Lost on the way to the house.
"nessie that baju has a stain go change it"
i shouted over my shoulder whilst i fluttered around trying to clean the front room.
edwards arms caught me.
"stop paniking the house looks fine we always have seth and the Serigala Jadian round enclouding sue and anda go shopping in the local stores full of humans anda can do this" he whispered into my hair.
there was two taps on the door as ellies mums delicate hands.
i ran to the door with nessie sejak my side.
"hey mrs barkley we will drop ellie utama if you'd like?" i offered as edward came to my side.
"that would be great if anda could how old is this house its beautifull" she told me looking up at are cottage.
i smiled "edwards mother esme made it with the help of edwards brothers and of corse some lebih men. they made it for a presant for my birthday and wedding presant".
"wow !... anyway i will go let the girls play.
i shut the door after ellie had stepped in the house and waved goodbye.
chapeter 2
we went to the clearing with a gazebo already set up bye jasper and emmett for if it rained (witch it did)
we sat on the blankets and pillows we had braught as we watched rosalie and emmett play with nessie and ellie they loved it because emmett swung them round and round they squeled as he spun them to the floor then bringing them up before they crashed.
then we heard it. they were running.running to us. not stopping. we all stopped. froze. it was to late to run. to late to hide only time to waite. it was to late ellie was now in the secret we had no way to stop are secret becoming hers aswell...
******
every seconf i get older every saat i die a bit lebih no angkasa for unhappiness no time to wait the sunshines when u smile so make every scond a smiling one anda are my sun anda are my stars anda are my moon anda are my world the key to my hati, tengah-tengah rests in your smile.
the poum i had written for nessie on her 5th birthday.But the thought poissened my mind the thought of the faces of the people stood infront of me slowly smothered the memory of my daughters smile of edwards face of emmett of rosalie my mind trailed through the members of my family now in danger.
we stood there Frozen still until the youngest one stepped ke hadapan probably a teenager when she was changed. her long straight white hair curled into ringletts so the purpil underneath slithered through looking very much like the poisson i saw leaking like black ink over the pictuers of my family,but leacking through her hair soacking up until it reached her routs. her ruby red eyes focussed on mine hers was playfull her eyes matched her face she was very much still a child.
her long pupil jubah, berjubah swept to the floor lose and to big whilst her corset and trousers fit like a saat layer of purpil skin.
"i call dibs on the human" she sang skipping towards us everyone croached ready to attack pushing ellie and nessie to the middle.
she stopped in the middle of her dance towards us her face froze a smile playing on her lips.
"you dont honestly wish to fight me...do you" she chalanged playing with her hair.Edward hissed when she looked at nessie as did everyone else i put up my shield ready for the attak but not one of us moved to chalange us. she crackled and burst into laughter not even anda emmett even anda are going to turn down a fight. Her piercing eyes turned to his face he stood his ground but did not alih towards her he simply moved his arm and with a slight movment in his wrist pushed rosalie behind him.she burst into another giggle fit once again becoming the child but this time evey one of her gaurds roared with laughter. that was when it finally hit me with a bump that the altarlas were here and they would leave and none of us would not one vampire who has chalanged the altarlas had survived lebih than an hour. we were doomed but this time we were killing the Serigala and ellie's family and charlie renee everyone everyone we have ever nown atau loved will not live to see the light of hari again the only way they will live longer then an jam was if we managed to keep ivory the beautifull teeanager infront of me bizzy for longer.
CHAPETER 4
the altarlas story
10. Sing “Discovery Channel” sejak the Bloodhound Gang in your head whenever he is near.
9. Hotwire his Volvo and take it on a joyride.
8. Tell him the relationship he is having with Bella is practically paedophilia and he could be sent to jail for it.
7. Ask how Tanya is.
6. End every argument with “Bite me, Edward.”
5. Call him Romeo both behind his back and to his face.
4. Whenever he complains atau argues, reply with “What are anda gonna do Edward? Go to Italy?”
3. Tell him his hair isn’t bronze, it’s ginger, and he should stop denying himself – he’s a ranga.
2. Whenever he leaves a room atau says goodbye, get down on your knees and beg him not to go, not again.
And the Number One way to annoy Edward Cullen?
1. Take his silver cell phone and change the ringtone to “Like a Virgin” sejak Madonna.
Source: link
9. Hotwire his Volvo and take it on a joyride.
8. Tell him the relationship he is having with Bella is practically paedophilia and he could be sent to jail for it.
7. Ask how Tanya is.
6. End every argument with “Bite me, Edward.”
5. Call him Romeo both behind his back and to his face.
4. Whenever he complains atau argues, reply with “What are anda gonna do Edward? Go to Italy?”
3. Tell him his hair isn’t bronze, it’s ginger, and he should stop denying himself – he’s a ranga.
2. Whenever he leaves a room atau says goodbye, get down on your knees and beg him not to go, not again.
And the Number One way to annoy Edward Cullen?
1. Take his silver cell phone and change the ringtone to “Like a Virgin” sejak Madonna.
Source: link
10. Take her credit cards and shopping vouchers, hold them above your head and tell her to “jump for it”.
9. Tell her if she was just a few centimetres shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever anda can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When anda go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what anda will be doing in five minit every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. e-mel her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
Source: link
9. Tell her if she was just a few centimetres shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever anda can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When anda go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what anda will be doing in five minit every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. e-mel her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
Source: link
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hello fanfiction writers
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I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start Membaca them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D LOL and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what anda write :D*****
I feeling really bored right now, so i guess i thought about all of anda guys/girls :D
I want to congratulate anda all for making such awesome and great fanfiction. So it must be said, so everyone can read about you're fanfiction :-)
I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start Membaca them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D LOL and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what anda write :D*****
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How Can I Help You If You Keep Pushing Me Away!?
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im going to put an introduction to this one up today. it has to do with twilight and a band called Paramore(my two fav things-paramore and twilight)most of my Friends like my Penulisan but when i do post i would like some criticizing komen-komen for me to improve with.
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