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Emmett's POV
I tried to open my eyes, it worked for a minute. I saw her, my angel, the one that saved me. I tried to leave them opened but the pain got worse so I had to close them. After the pain subsisted I tried to speak, I heard screams, it was coming from me. The pain was getting worse now, it was starting at my hati, tengah-tengah and shooting all around my body. I was still screaming. "Father, Edward!" I heard someone call in an angelic voice. At that moment my hati, tengah-tengah began to pound against my rib cage. I thought it was going to break all my ribs. I heard a conversation going on over the pounding of my heart. "He began to scream louder than ever and his pulse is racing, I'm worried." A voice chimed.
I felt a hand on my arm then it was gone, then another voice answered, "His hati, tengah-tengah is dying, it is the most painful part of the transition, but it is almost over. I heard footsteps leave the room and another soft hand on my arm and an angelic voice told me it will all be over soon.
What did that mean? Was I going to die? I felt like it, the way my hati, tengah-tengah pounded against my chest. What was the whole conversation earlier about, the transition, hati, tengah-tengah dying? His has to be death, transitioning from life to death. The beautiful women, angel, who saved me from the menanggung, bear had to truly be an angel. If the last thing I saw before I die was her, I be happy.
Emmett's POV
I tried to open my eyes, it worked for a minute. I saw her, my angel, the one that saved me. I tried to leave them opened but the pain got worse so I had to close them. After the pain subsisted I tried to speak, I heard screams, it was coming from me. The pain was getting worse now, it was starting at my hati, tengah-tengah and shooting all around my body. I was still screaming. "Father, Edward!" I heard someone call in an angelic voice. At that moment my hati, tengah-tengah began to pound against my rib cage. I thought it was going to break all my ribs. I heard a conversation going on over the pounding of my heart. "He began to scream louder than ever and his pulse is racing, I'm worried." A voice chimed.
I felt a hand on my arm then it was gone, then another voice answered, "His hati, tengah-tengah is dying, it is the most painful part of the transition, but it is almost over. I heard footsteps leave the room and another soft hand on my arm and an angelic voice told me it will all be over soon.
What did that mean? Was I going to die? I felt like it, the way my hati, tengah-tengah pounded against my chest. What was the whole conversation earlier about, the transition, hati, tengah-tengah dying? His has to be death, transitioning from life to death. The beautiful women, angel, who saved me from the menanggung, bear had to truly be an angel. If the last thing I saw before I die was her, I be happy.
Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal Friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can anda imagine being shown up sejak someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after Membaca a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal Friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can anda imagine being shown up sejak someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after Membaca a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
meja and called 911. When the police and ambulans arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
meja and called 911. When the police and ambulans arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after Membaca all four buku I feel in Cinta with them. I wasn't a peminat of the Penulisan style atau the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in Cinta with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I Cinta the ending to Breaking Dawn. And Cinta New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my kegemaran author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to Cinta HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before Membaca Twilight...and just suddenly realized my Penulisan was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm Penulisan a vampire novel that I hope to siarkan in the near future.
But after Membaca all four buku I feel in Cinta with them. I wasn't a peminat of the Penulisan style atau the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in Cinta with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I Cinta the ending to Breaking Dawn. And Cinta New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my kegemaran author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to Cinta HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before Membaca Twilight...and just suddenly realized my Penulisan was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm Penulisan a vampire novel that I hope to siarkan in the near future.