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is this any good? it's a poem i wrote.

I Must Dreaming

I must be pretending,
I must be dreaming,
I saw him bleed,
I heard him breathe,
We all live,
We all die,
But that doesn’t justify,
It’s not the same,
It’s not so different,
It must be a dream,
It’s only in my mind,
Leave it all behind,
But then he dies.

I fear him,
But I Cinta him,
I hate to see that die,
I can’t say goodbye,
I must be dreaming,
I tell myself it’s not real,
But I don’t believe,
Because I know what anda did,
anda took his life.

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Theia said:

This poem is not original, anda copied it from the Evanescence song 'I must be dreaming'. link

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lilred96 said:

Cinta it got any more?so sad but so much soul to it Cinta it Cinta it Cinta it!!!!

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Channyfan1 said:

tz amazing, hun. Oober job!

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LabraLege said:

sorry, but that sounds cliche

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that's fine

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AvaMarch said:

This is really pretty, i Cinta it! :)

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deathroman13 said:

really good :)

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18seuferer said:

Your poem is the best poem in history. It IS really hard to make a poem. I can't do that, you're the best poem maker ever.

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LOL thanks

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cassie-1-2-3 said:

It's alright for a school assignment.

It doesn't look like much effort was put into it. It can be developed into something good. Just keep Membaca it over and over and if anda think of something that can be better, do it.

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kk thaks 4 the Nasihat

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goddessoflife said:

Whoa...that was...amazing!

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