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How can i possibly end my story?

My story is about a man, Edmund, who's mother and father die. He is then a foster child and moves in with a family. Their son, owen, locks Edmund in the attic. Edmund finds a secert wardrobe and finds the women of his dreams, Lace. Edmund gets out of the wardrobe after raping lace and going compltely and utterly insain. He dies from choking on blood. How can someone find Edmund when this story is in 1st person?

the wardrobe thing sounds way to much like Narnia for me...

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bubble_babe said:

Writ him as a ghost, and him waching over his body, then have some one come and find him

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yeah thats a really good idea!

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sapherequeen said:

To start, I Cinta your story :)
It's very interesting and sounds thrilling. I hope anda post it here, I'd Cinta to read it....

Now, do anda mean how someone could find Edmund's body? Well, I'd have one of the foster parents atau siblings (if any of them are there) find his body.

atau wait! anda could have the girl, lace suddenly appear on bahagian, atas of Edmund as he dies his horrendous death. anda could end the story sejak having Edmund describe the look on Lace's face. She could be starring down at him with an evil, horrifying glare and her eyes filled with hatred and vengeance. atau she could be simply looking down at him, the fact that she would be there may be scary enough.

I hope I helped....

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