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Should there be a romance in the story I'm writing?

I'm Penulisan a story and I don't know if I should add a little romance. I feel like it'd be a bit too predictable to do it between to two main characters (the male protagonist is Milo, and Lina isnt a main character but she's still really impotant) but the only other character I could see being with Milo isn't really into romantic relationships. Plus I plan to kill her off. That might work, (especially since I named her after an Anime character who dies; the main character of the Anime was in Cinta with her.)

I still feel like it's predictable though, but what do anda think. I feel like I'd end up killing off the other person.
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Firewriter said:
Well, the huraian of the story is a little rough, but it sounds like it could be interesting. All stories have a climax and a resolution, and all the events leading up to the climax. (Which could be a lot.) Here is just an idea, anda could have Milo fall in Cinta with the character anda want to kill off. And eventually, when she dies, he gets really really sad and depressed and the other girl helps him atau something? Idk. Just an idea, but I hope it helps. I really do think anda should add some romance.
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That's what I would do if I added it
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Nric said:
A romances is often superfluous in stories. I don't think that this necessary.
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That's what I was thinking, too. But it could still work. I wasn't sure so wanted some help.
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