Penulisan Article: Alone

Alone

posted by Grintforever

Alone!

There once was a girl who biked and ran
with her best friend who had a bright orange tan
But then one hari she when biking alone
and thats when she fell along way from home.

She lay still on the ground
not makeing a sound,and thats when she found
that she could not talk
let alone walk

As she slowly made her way home
she wished that she had a phone
so she could call for help
insted of put up with the pain that made her yelp.

She pushed her bike down the dusty track
with a sore haed and an acking back
Then she came to the place where her and her best friend met
just as the sun was begining to set

The seterusnya hari at school she was no where in sight
which gave her best frined a very big fright
but she was a utama tucked up in bed
with a sore leg and an acking head

Thats when she remebered what her best friend had berkata
about not going out bikeing alone
along way from home.

What do anda think?(I think it is very bad) and sorry of the spelling.

r260897 wow gud n nice

Grintforever THanks :)

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