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Prologue
The Life of Amelia Grace



Mia Grace’s alarm clock rang shrilly in her ear that morning. Groaning, she rolled over, pounded the snooze button down and buried her face in the covers. She was barely able to get another few extra minit of sleep before somebody ripped the covers off of her and a cheerful voice rang out, “Come on, Mia, you’re never going to get into eleventh grade sejak sleeping all day!”
“That’d be an easy way to do it,” mumbled Mia, rubbing her eyes and stretching. When she opened her eyes a black haired man was looming over her, a stupid grin on his face.
“Geez,...
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 Baby Stroller
Baby Stroller
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"IDIOT!" the King screeched. Toyo flinched as if the King had struck him.
"DO anda KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE?" he continued to yell angrily.
"The Vampire Society figured out that Aiko was at X Aacademy," Toyo berkata quietly. "So I sent her away."
"Without the protection of other vampires," the King hissed. "Suppose they find out where she is now. Who will protect her? She's as good as dead now!" The King sighed irritably and strode towards the door.
"Inform the Society that I will not be available for the seterusnya year," he berkata coldly. "And this time, don't mess it up." The King strode out of the...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 16






A loud noise woke Bone from his sleep. Becoming lebih alert he felt a sharp pain in his neck from laying his head over after falling asleep on his kedai couch.
Opening one dry eye he could see Jax rustling around the kedai benches and he appeared to have his shotgun strapped to his back and somehow he got some old work boots over his injured foot.
He looked like he was prepared for battle.
“The hell anda doin’ preparin’ for war?” he said.
“No, goin’ huntin’. Koda hunting”
Bone was wide awake now.
“You are not going to kill my nephew,” he berkata forcefully stopping Jax in...
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posted by bunnibunnibaby
Jade Adams was making her way utama when she saw him. The dark haired kid everyone had been talking about earlier today was walking in the same direction she was. "Hey! You're the new kid in school right?" "Hn?" The boy turned around to face Jade, making her hati, tengah-tengah skip a beat. He had to be one of the most strikingly beautiful people she had ever seen. He was pale, with onyx colored eyes, and jet black hair that hung over his eyes slightly. "H-hi. I'm Jade..." the poor girl was at a loss for words when he flashed his dazzling smile at her. "Hey, I'm Victor." She blushed slightly and readjusted her Slipknot tee over her black skinny jeans. "Soo... what road do anda turn onto to get home?" "I turn onto Salem road, what about you?" Victor looked over at her again, scratching his head awkwardly. "Me too! Wanna walk utama together?" "Sure!" The blonde girl started walking ahead, leaving Victor o follow. "So, how do anda like it here?"
posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 11

The dry hot air inside the garaj was almost unbearable and the smell of motor oil and tires wasn’t helping. Bone usually did not drink a can of bir while in his kedai but there were no customers and it was just too damn hot to do anything.

Dropping himself onto his kedai sofa, kerusi panjang and cracked open his Miller Light; he closed his eyes to try and ignore the stuffy heat.
He remembered calling Koda’s house and left a message when no one answered. It was odd for no one to be utama but he shrugged it off.
Taking a long swig he didn’t realize how tired he felt from the heat as he started to...
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posted by Claudia4599
    We had been training for this moment since the apocalypse.

    Two years lalu a killer disease criss crossed the world. This disease killed people almost instantly. The people who were diagnosed died in a few horribly painful hours. Only a handful people survived. My twin sister, Victoria and I were one of those few people. Sadly, even our parents died of this disease. We were only twelve when it happened and I remember our parents begging on their deathbeds that we get the vaccine. The doctors would only give us the vaccine, not our parents.

    We...
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posted by sawfan13
The man quietly entered the apartment of his girlfriend. He so badly wanted her back into his arms. His obsession. His love. His target. He entered her bedroom, as she rested in. He crept over to her, stroking her long black hair as she slept. A shadow that was not his appeared. He backed away from the woman, as the shadow was a man. A man with dark wild hair. A man that growled like a lion, but yet somewhat like a wolf.

Someone came in. He was touching Lilith. I walked over to him. I looked at him and said,"What are anda doing here? Leave my Queen alone." "Look, man. I don't want any trouble....
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posted by HouseMindFreak
1st chapter: link

2nd chapter: link

3rd chapter: link

4th chapter: link



Chapter 5

Koda rode through the desert for what seemed like hours. The sun was starting to set in the West, making the sky bright orange and pink. If he wasn’t so worked up over everything he would stop to enjoy the sunset but his mind was too preoccupied.

The wind started to get chilly and sky was getting darker so he decided he’d gone far enough and should stop for a rest.
Standing sejak his bike he scanned the landscape looking for anything that could be used as shelter. The landscape was mostly dirt and weeds, nothing to...
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posted by jacob_lover5253
I really thought he was going to Ciuman me. Boy, was I wrong. I swear he was moving closer and closer but then suddenly he was on his feet pulling me up. I frowned but then put on a fake smile so he wouldn’t realize. ‘I really liked him but if I told him…’ I sighed as I thought to myself. We picked our stuff back up and I slipped hos shoes on and he didn’t complain. Nick carried my baju and shorts and handed me his short to throw on over my bathing suit. I smiled and gratefully put it on.

My mind was racing. Racing fast. Did he really just give me his shirt!? I wanted to jump up and...
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"He was soooo cute!" I told my firends. sad thing is, I can't even remember what he looks like. But something feels special about him. Something makes me feel like I shouldn't care....

I would never of thought I'd be waiting sejak the phone. Most of the time i just think "Well if a guy doesn't want this, he can't have it." But something is amking me feel like I want him lebih than anyone else. Something is drawing me towards him. something makes me feel like if anyone's hati, tengah-tengah will be broken it'll be mine. And I just met him! Wait....I don't even know his name!


While Luna was worried about that....
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The familiar obnoxious ring tone woke me up that morning. I was still groggy when I managed to slam my hand on it and grab it like a claw like in those games in the arcades.
"Hello?" I mumbled.
"Jamie, do anda know what hari it is?" My best friend Delilah asked anxiously on the other line. It sounded like I forgot something like I always did..
"Ummm Saturday?" I asked, not quite sure what was going on.
"Very funny, it's the total drama island cast auditions today HELLOO!!"
"That's today?!?!"
I shot out of bed, turing my phone's speaker on to catch the words, "They're allowing eight new teens into...
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Part 1

Alexis walked side sejak side withElyon, who had been waiting patiently outside the door for her to get ready. Her shoes slapped off the ground and her long pinifor swayed sejak her knees, she wrapped her long arms around her upper body feeling the chill of the large building.
"You will get used to it," Elyon murmered peering in the classroom as they past them."It's normlly warmer at night, but thats in the main building, not here I'm afraid," she saidrubbing at her own goosebumps. "We arent alloeed to wear anything else butthe uniform, against pollicy...though they get to wear-" she stopped...
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Okay so I am really bored, so I thought I would develop this wierd dream I have been having.

One mind can change the world, one life can save another. One girl will save us all. This is the prophecy we were telah diberi long ago, and this is the story of the Girl it belongs to.

She sat on a large dinding that was high enough to overlook the park on the other side of it, her legs swung freely and her hands sat crossed on her lap. It was the middle of summer and all the other teenagers and children were in the large park, enjoying the hot sun.But the girl stayed were she was, smiling at the fun that evryone...
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Introduction

Matthew

Her eyes hypnotize me, and I’m completely hooked on her smile. Who knew she’d be the girl I would fall for? I’ve fallen completely in Cinta with her. It’s hard to imagine her in someone else’s arms. I’m admitting to myself now, that I’m in Cinta with Casey, and that I’m extremely jealous of Carl.

Casey

I Cinta how golden his hair is, I Cinta how I could just spend forever in his eyes, I think I could even Cinta him? He’s beautiful and travels in a completely different social circle, and yet he’s standing here becoming the light of my life. I’m trying to wrap...
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posted by mitchie19
I got bored in the laptop so I opened MS Word and start typing whatever. Then I come to this.
Plus I like Penulisan stories, so enjoy.
Note: Fan-made


I woke up in the middle of the night, feeling heavy and uneasy.
My mind rushed through the memories. I pushed myself back to sleep not remembering any parts happened earlier. Bonnie. Bonnie, I thought. She had been killed sejak Katherine. Oh, God. She can’t be! She can’t be dead! My fingers harden the bantal so I could hardly breathe. I felt moisture rushing to the surface of my eyes. I shouted, nor pouted. Though, no one can here me. Jeremy’s out...
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My name is Michael Gavin I'm 14 live in Upland CA, and I have wings. I'm not exactly sure how it happened but it did. My childhood was normal, like really normal no wings at that time and I was popular-ish. Until, I hit puberty as my mom says my dad was killed in a car accident and it was just me and mom. Then things got weird I was hit sejak a car and was sent to the hospital obviously. I spent two months in that little white room, Membaca my Percy Jackson books, completely unaware of what the nurses were talking about outside my door as I read The Last Olympian for the zillionth time. My mom...
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tarikh Night *sequel*
Chapter Three: makan malam, majlis makan malam Time Trauma
By: moolah
    Haley groaned as she heard knocking on the back window. She was on bahagian, atas and barely had her bra and pakaian dalam wanita, undies on. She quickly pecked Sean on the cheek and put on her yellow tunic on. She put on her gray skinny jeans on then. She ran her hand threw her hair and hopped out of the car. Luke was standing there in his clothes with Ian on his hip. “Are anda guys doing something I shouldn’t know about?” Haley smiled and said, “Yeah, probably. Now, what is it?” Luke raised his left eyebrow and berkata simply,...
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HIII I KNOW KNOW ONE READS THESE, BUT I LIKE Penulisan THEM =) SOOO HERE WE GO.

Mr Grey took us down a big endless corridoor, where our dorms would be.
"Boys one this side, girls on the other. At this school we believe that closeness brings power, so anda will both be sharing dorms, with three other students. Of your own sex of course.,"he stopped at one of the doors, the girl side."Ahhh, this will be your dorm Miss Stirling,". I looked at the door, there was a shiny number pate on it, 912. "The students have a hari off today, so it should give anda enough time to learn your timetable," he clicked...
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posted by lindizzle215
Today my brother Joey and I were going to drive down to our family camp that we help with every year, we still do but were all teenagers so were counselors now.

"Cam lets go I want to get there at a desist hour." Joey said
"Fine, I'll be there in a minute." I berkata back while sitting on my suit case tiring to zip it up.
"Need some help?" Duke asked leaning against the door frame.
"Yes, please." I berkata
He came over, zipped my bags up and took some down stairs. I grabbed my other bags and ran down stairs. I put my bags down and berkata goodbye to everyone and that I would see them all in a few days....
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