Penulisan Article: Broken Dreams Chapter 9

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posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

Tia had told me that he obviously liked black, so she'd chosen the scary baju singkat, halter bahagian, atas and skinny jeans with black peep-toed heels. Tia had gone overboard. I looked like a freaking goth.

I thought I was dressed way out of my league, but Tia berkata I wasn't. It was difficult to believe her.

Still, I dropped a plate when I was in the dapur on Saturday evening when he knocked on the door. I almost twisted my ankle in my hurry to open the door. I threw it open, and I almost cried in relief when it was him and I hadn't almost injured myself for nothing.

He looked stunned when he saw what I was wearing, and I silently cursed Tia. Then, he said, "You look nice."

My hati, tengah-tengah sang with the small compliment, and I was almost worshipping Tia at that moment.

"Thanks," I said. "Let's get going."
"Sure," he smiled, and my hati, tengah-tengah skipped a beat.

Shaun

She opened the door, and I was stunned for a few seconds. I hadn't seen her for almost two days, I had felt as if I was disappearing very painfully.

I shook this thought away; it was entirely irrational.

I told her, a bit of an understatement, really, "You look nice." 'Idiot, I cursed myself. Nice? That's all I can come up with?
"Thanks," she said. "Let's get going."

I wasn't sure what I berkata next, but I knew that whatever she wanted to do, I'd want to do it too, as long as I was with her.

I stopped breathing when she smiled and took my hand, leading me to my car.

I had to remind myself to breathe while we were driving.

As I'd started the car, I found myself very attentive to her every word.

So irrational. What was happening to me?

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_madz_ oh, this is so good! i can't wait for the next one :)

harold Would you be willing to do us a favor and edit each article to add two links: the first, a link to chapter 1 and the second, a link to the next chapter? Either that, or create a table of contents article, and put a link to that in each chapter. That might actually be better, I don't know. Reading this at the moment requires us to use the Fanpop search each time we finish a chapter, and that means there's a bunch of steps we have to do in between each chapter, just to read the whole story. Some way of navigating easily between chapters would really help.

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Liepe *sighs* love, ain't it wonderfull? Anyways, great stories!

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Warna OF MY LIFE

posted by FalliNgSparks

Here I spread the Warna of my life

They sound like a tune of fife

They always closed me in a dark room

I put on my headphones, enjoyed & played the boom

It's so boring to just see the sky

Today I decided I'll go and fly

Eveyones mind is full of depressions

But mine is full of imaginations

I changed the dark night into shining sequins

And the heap into beautiful fragrance

I don't want anda to make my hair a mess

Cause I'm wearing the tiara to be a princess

My passion, my obsession, my desire

Don't interfere in between atau I'll blow anda up with flames of fire

Anatomy Of Story - Televisyen Edition: The Complete Film Courage Series with John Truby

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how to write a book

posted by e2mma2weasle3

If You're Penulisan Fiction

1.Figure out what anda want to write about atau what type of book anda want to write. For some people, ideas come naturally, but for others, it's a difficult step. If you’re having trouble, figure out what kind of buku anda like. Do anda read a lot of Stephen King? Write a horror book. Have anda been hooked on Eoin Colfer ever since the saat grade? Write a story about elves and technology. If anda try to write a book that anda would enjoy reading, Penulisan it will be lebih fun and easy.

2. Know the elements of a good novel.

-The setting. The setting of a story is its time...

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my first story

posted by twilight-rocks9

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We’re finally out of the house and coughing I looked at my ivory skin marked with ashes I looked at jose same thing. “jose do anda have the money and your clothes?” I ask “yes do anda have the Makanan and your clothes?” my little brother asked I can explain the bags we wanted to run away because our parents were splitting up.“Of course oh my goodness look at Domingos’ house” I say. It is also on api, kebakaran we see one person stumble out “jose we need to see who that is.” I say. He already was running to see who it is. “Thank goodness we...

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weird pencils

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Called To Greatness

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Forbidden Woods

posted by coriann

Chap 1
They say the woods had magical powers, atau that there were creatures possessing the woods that caused strange things to happen in the neighboring town. But myths may be able to fool the 19th century, maybe even the 20th century, but the 21st century? You’ve got to be kidding me. With the kind of first class technology that can map out entire areas through every nook and cranny, and that can create a program that can entangle the entire world in its web. The 21st century was 1st class, un-gullible and not easily fooled, too wrapped up in our own little bubble of a world that we created...

wallanu

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Penulisan

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He might disappear

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Rawak

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Blue Skys

posted by dragonwriter

I wake up. It's early in the morning. A cool wind blows sejak my face whispering sounds i don't understand. I look up at the sky and notice that it is a light blue color and it makes me feel that there is no problems in the world. Looking around i get a different story.

Blood everywhere. Bodies over bodies and not a living soul in sight. Who could have done this? My head starts to spin and my vision is going blurry. A creature appears from the wind that was flying sejak my head earlier.

This creature starts walking torwards me speaking in a language that I have never heard before. I go to reach for my gun and find a giant hole in my right leg. It continues to get closer and closer and is staring at me as if to be a hunter and I am it's prey.

Knowing that this is the end I look up at the sky. Beginning to close my eyes the last of my sights are focused ont he Blue Skys.

Song - Meteor

posted by viju

Shining down in eyes....

Do anda ever feel?
Like a melba toast
Breaking into pieces
With no way from sea to coast
Do anda ever feel
That you’re so ignorable
But inside do anda know
You’re inescapable
Do anda ever feel like
You’re under pressure
But inside you’re hati, tengah-tengah
There’s an aggression.

You need to hear
Mellifluous voice in your mind
And than

(Chorus)
Run like a Meteor
Through the sky
Through the space
Shining down in our eyes
Run like a Meteor
Piercing the wind
With lightening speed
Shining down in everybody’s eyes

(Verse – II)
Do anda ever feel like
You’re so irresistible
But really anda are
So capable
Do anda ever feel
That...

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Under the Sea

posted by lucius_malloy

Under the surface of the ever-moving ocean, it is calm.
There are hardly any sounds bouncing about the vast space, and the ones that are have been muted, many times over. The roaring of a ship’s engines, mighty as a lion, is only a faint humming sound, lebih felt than heard as it vibrates its way through your body.
You’re floating, floating in a mass of blue. The only thing anda can see is blue, blue, and blue – different shades, some lighter than others, some dark as a winter night in the North, but blue nonetheless. Now that anda think about it, it’s slightly disturbing – oppressive,...

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DREAM(Random Writing)

posted by dragonwriter

Sky turns black. Memory fades. through all of this tragedy fate has taken my memories from me. No other thoughts. hati, tengah-tengah pounding. Blood racing. No lebih time for thinking. Think quick and on my feet atau death will surely get its grasp on me. As my enemy approaches i draw my sword. Once the tip of the blade is out of the sheath i hear it hit the ground as i feel a warm liquid pouring out of my open chest as blood gushes out of the wound. As i struggle to take my last breath i wake up screaming relieved that it was just a DREAM.

Life Goes On

posted by MissMuffin38

It was just another day. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, and everyone was doing what they normally do. It was the start of the summer of 1939. In the middle of a war. It was selamat, peti deposit keselamatan here, most of the time. Everyone carried on like they always did, selling Buah on the market stalls, children drooling at the millions of different sweets on the shelves above them, and then running around, playing airplanes. Amongst all this was a house, with a family, that lived happily. Almost.

This family were the Nicholson family. They lived together in a big, fancy house, but not too fancy. The...

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i'm alone

posted by Thalia_huntress

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2....1 ready atau not here i come" i say. i hear my friend Annabel giggle. i go behind a pokok "found you" i said. "lunette!! Annabel!!" the owner of the orphanage called us. she was the most pahit woman ever all because her husban died in the war. we sraitened out atau dresses. "coming miss belle." we berkata in harmony. we rushed from the yard. "yes miss belle?" i said. "it's time for us to see if anybody wants anda brats now change into the nice dress we gave." she said. "ok miss" annabel said. miss belle didn't know but every one made fun of...

How Membaca methods have improved

posted by ZekiYuro

Membaca to oneself is a modern activity which was almost unknown to the scholars of the classical and medieval worlds,while during the fifteenth century the term 'reading' undoubtedly meant Membaca aloud.Only during the nineteenth century did silent Membaca become commonplace.

One should be wary,however,of assuming that silent Membaca came about simply because Membaca aloud was a distraction to others.Examinations of factors related to the historical development of silent Membaca have revealed that it became the usual mode of Membaca for most adults mainly because the tasks themselves changed...