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posted by coriann
Chap 1
They say the woods had magical powers, atau that there were creatures possessing the woods that caused strange things to happen in the neighboring town. But myths may be able to fool the 19th century, maybe even the 20th century, but the 21st century? You’ve got to be kidding me. With the kind of first class technology that can map out entire areas through every nook and cranny, and that can create a program that can entangle the entire world in its web. The 21st century was 1st class, un-gullible and not easily fooled, too wrapped up in our own little bubble of a world that we created for ourselves, that we forget the dangerous place of death and misery that this world really is.

For hundreds of years no human had touched Greenwood Forest. But with it’s lush fields, tall shady trees, excellent soil and abundance in water, Greenwood forest had caught the eyes of 21st century housing development planners, and soon a little town was to be constructed there. And that was the place that Eleanor and Brandon Dyson and their kids 17year old Brandy, 19 tahun old Cadence, 11 tahun old Carly and 8 bulan old Caylee were going to be moving to. After all with the new baby and everything the family needed lebih space, and Mr. Dyson had gotten a job there.

They drove down the dusty old road for what seemed like forever, with nothing surrounding them but dead rumput and murky grey skies. There was a grey sky yeah, but somehow, stupidly enough, there was no rain. The long electricity lines made a pretty sight as birds used them for a nest and huge epiphytes grew onto them hanging on with their long and pretty roots. Soon they could see the forest ahead of them, It was so beautiful and lush and green. And as they entered, the sky automatically turned bright blue and the clouds opened up, white and cottony and pretty. The road here was brand new.

“You know, there are a lot of stories about these woods” berkata Mr. Dyson “One of the reasons why they took so long to build on it.”
“Oh come on Brandon, let’s not scare the kids”
“I’m not scarin’ them hun just trying to make this drive a little lebih interesting that’s all”
Eleanor rolled her eyes, and then Brandon continued “They say the forest is filled with malevolent creatures, and not the good kind either, I’m talking about spirits that live inside of the trees so that they can watch anda at night, spirits of children who died in horrible ways when they were only babies, they say their feet turn backwards and they wear big straw hats over their heads to hide the fact that they have no face, every once in a while, they like to call other kids so they can drag them into the forest to sertai them in play forever. One a the popular rumors is that if anda go deep enough into these woods anda see a pretty lady, and anda know what she does to you? She leads anda deeper and deeper inside the woods and then she…” then all of a sudden the car started to shake and tumble, then Mr. Dyson pulled over.

“Looks like we popped a tire” he said. The teenagers gave a fed up sigh while Carly just had on a worried look. Mom looked pretty fed up herself, leaning her head out the window with a tired look on her face, then all of a sudden, for what seemed to make no logical sense, Caylee burst out in an uncontrollable fit of laughter. brandy just stared at her; this usually humored him, but not this time, not after what seemed like a 1000 jam drive to the end of the world. Yes, he was cranky. He looked at his sisters. Cadence had instinctively pulled out her phone and started texting wildly, while Carly was playing with her ponies. He rolled his eyes, and then he checked his phone. 0 messages, 0 calls. He shrugged, and then he opened the door of the car.

“Where are anda going?” asked Cadence
“I dunno” he smirked. She just shook her head. Ironically enough, even though brandy was named after his father, he looked absolutely nothing like him; he had his mother’s Bright blonde hair except with hints of brown and her crystal blue eyes. He even got his curious and slightly laid back, hands off attitude from his mom. His sisters were feisty, fiery and forceful like their dad, and they had his deep black-brown hair and green-brown eyes except with a hint of blue. They were exiting and alive and interested, while brandy lived in Brandon universe.

His white sneakers hit the ground. He was wearing bright blue jeans and a hot red sweater. His hair was combed up in something like a Justin Beiber hairdo. He started to walk. He looked back; he could see his father trying to fix the white hatch back. He turned his head away from the car and into the forest.

He knew forests were dangerous and whatever, he thought. But that was just talk, he had never experienced it himself, and what if they were wrong? If they were right then he would just die...and what would be the problem with that? Yes, as anda can probably tell brandy was a very apathetic young man, not caring about his own life atau where it took him, just simply going with the flow. He was bored and was simply curing his boredom.

He took one step into the forest over a big twig, and then all of a sudden some long hanging vines blew behind him and sort of shoved him into the forest, he fell on his hands. “Ah!” He got up, dusted off his hands and then continued walking. Then he heard moans coming from the trees. He looked around, looking for deformed children, then sighed. It was only just the breeze. He stifled a laugh.

He looked down; the ground was so full of bright brown fallen leaves that he couldn’t see the ground. Then he looked ahead at the deep brown, thick pokok in front of him and surely enough, a young lady peeked out.
He smiled, finally something about his Fantasi that could actually be true. I mean, any sensible boy would have thought back at his father’s story and realized that it was dangerous, but he was desperate, so so desperate, and she was so so beautiful, so beautiful. He walked over a twig and it cracked. He reached out his hand to grab her soft, beautiful luscious body when suddenly he could hear his dad calling him from the distance. "Brandy" he heard. He moved back his hand, gave her a sad stare and ran away. Her breasts were blooming beautifully, filling up the bahagian, atas part of her baby doll white and brown dress, the bahagian, atas was white highlighting her bosoms and the bottom was nature brown. “She had curly blonde hair, kind of like a princess, and her eyes were brighter than the sky over the forest” he explained to his sister when they got to the house and had already unpacked and everything.
“Why do anda always talk out all your disgusting girl fantasies to me Brandy? for the last time, I don’t care!”
“But she was real, I swear!”
“Well, if she’s so real then why didn’t anda try to help her? Go run after her atau something”
brandy sighed “I could hear Dad calling my name and plus I didn’t want to get too deep down in those woods. I have horrible navigation senses”
“Oh wow, so anda loved her so much that anda didn’t care she was in the forest all alone? anda could have told Dad atau Mom”
“I…I didn’t think she needed help, she looked…fine” he chuckled
Carly rolled her eyes. He laughed and gave her a friendly nudge and then walked away. She laughed too “You need to find yourself a real girlfriend!” she shouted after him, and then she smiled, she loved her brother; him and her were very very close ever since he could remember, even though half of it was arguments.
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posted by coriann
Chapter 4
After four weeks of being best friends, brandy couldn’t take it anymore and asked her to be his girlfriend. Why not? I mean after all, she’d already asked him for a “fun kiss” and he’d already snuggled her at a movie because “he was cold”. And she in turn put her head on his shoulder because she was “cold too” and he did rub her legs a bit to help her “get some warmth”. They’d already slow danced at utama because they were tired of listening to fast music. And she loved him, he knew it, and it was just as goddamned obvious that he loved her. So one afternoon...
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posted by sweetpuddin6969
Hiya, the names Aurora Faye Boudreaux. I've been thinking about how the worlds changing. I figured my life story could be of some intrest.

So i begin......

The dampen grass, cool on my skin sends shivers down my spine. I never liked the cold. The moon tonight was full and bright shimmering down upon me. I could point out every star. It's what i Cinta most about living out here. Mire is a little country town in South Louisiana i've grown up in my whole life. It's very peaceful and everyone knows one another. I live on the outskirts of town so the night is dark and peaceful. All my 20 years of...
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posted by coriann
Chapter3
It was during the August vacation that brandy and his family had moved to Greenwood. His sisters were not too happy about it, they missed their friends. And Cadence had to say goodbye to her boyfriend, but brandy had nothing and no one to say goodbye to, so he didn’t care. He spent most of his days locked up in his room, and then when he went to school, he was tortured sejak the kids. The teachers didn’t like him much either, because he was absent minded and frankly, came across quite dim witted. He never handed up homework assignments and he always got really low in his classes because...
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posted by coriann
Chap2
That very same day, brandy went out into the yard. There was a patch of forest behind the house. He peered out at it. Could it be that his girl…the Cinta of his life was still there? He felt like a real perv for reaching out to her body, but he saw the expression on her face and she did not look afraid, she looked like if she was welcoming him, urging him on, and she was smiling as bright as the sun, her body seemed to be emanating light. Yes he wanted her true…but she wanted him, she did, she really did. And even if she didn’t, this was his time to find out.

He took one easy step...
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posted by pugglelover2000
The car skidded off and Josie bumped up against something in the trunk,"OW!"She yelled.She heard Rachel and her Friends talking.She strained to listen.

"Um,Rachel anda know we could get in BIG trouble for this,right?"Haley asked."Why,are anda scared?"Rachel replied,then snorted."Um,no.I just don't want to get in trouble."Haley said."Yeah Rachel,this is,like,kidnapping."Destiny commented."UH!I should have known anda two would wimp out!"Rachel complained.

Finally,they came to a stop."Come on anda two and help me with her!"Rachel screamed.Then Josie heard doors slamming shut and gravel crunching...
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This is from a dream I had; and I just wrote that part so far. I'm probably going to continue, and add a part before this. Just a quick summary catch-up:

Phoenix lives in an apartment with her Mom, who was 14 when she had Phoenix. She doesn't have a connection with her dad anymore. She is 15. She is generally very happy, and has a good relationship with her mom. They are very tight on money. Phoenix's best friend is a girl named Mercedes, who is kind of out there, being the middle child and only girl out of five kids.

Lately, Phoenix has gotten very sick. She stays utama from school often. She...
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posted by pugglelover2000
Josie looked over and Laura was fine,"Then who are they laughing at?" she wondered.She looked around and then saw Rachel sprawled out in the middle of the rink,some of her Friends helping her up.

Rachel looked at Laura standing in the crowd of kids laughing."Watch were you're going loser,"Rachel kept going as she saw everyone was paying attention,"ouch,look what you've done to me,oh,it hurts!"Then she fake sniffled and added weakly as if she was dying in pain,"what did I ever do to you?"Then her crowd of girl Friends flashed Laura mean looks as they hurried to get to the bathroom to comfort...
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posted by emmett
Everyday
It hurts to see anda face
Or say your perfect name
It feels like I’m in disgrace
The pain inside of me
I feel it everyday
How can this be?

Chorus 1:
I’m falling to pieces
Bit sejak bit
I am such a mess
That I am feeling lebih and lebih less
Whole
Everyday, everyday
When we’re together
I don’t feel together
Everyday

I guess silence is the only cure
Never looking back
But finding out how very pure
You are everyday, everyday

Chorus 1

It’s 2am and I’m
Thinking bout anda again
Can’t anda tell that I’m not happy?
Happy without you
It’s 2am and I’m
Feeling like crying again
I hope anda know I ain’t...
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posted by para-scence
"Here's the way to the school," my grandmother said, handing me a map. "Are anda sure anda don't just want to wait for Foster to bring me the newspaper? I'm sure he wouldn't mind walking with you."

"But I would," I mumbled. She cocked her head slightly. Good; she didn't hear me. "I'll be fine," I assured her. She kissed my cheek as I left. I slowly made my way, making sure I was going in the right direction. I did not want to get lost. The last thing I needed was to tunjuk up on my first hari late.

It took only about twenty minit to get to school. It wasn't that big; much smaller than my old high...
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posted by para-scence
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Book cover :)
I got dressed and ready, but I didn't really want to go grocery shopping with that Foster guy. I didn't trust him.

He came over later, and knocked on the door.

"Ready to go?" he asked. I sighed, and looked to my grandmother. Why'd she have to commit me to this? She just smiled and handed me some grocery money and a senarai of things she needed. We walked out of the house, and down the sidewalk. "So, are anda visiting?" he asked.

"I hope not," I said. He smiled, but furrowed his eyebrows.

"How come? What about your parents?" I shook my head.

"They don't like me. So I left. Hopefully she'll let me stay."...
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