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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#2]

Narrators POV

An old man in a jubah, berjubah walked into the neighborhood in which Olivia lived. Everyone stared at him as he walked around.

Olivia's POV

I smiled brightly as I dived into the ocean, "wait up!!!" Oliver laughed as my five brothers ran after me with surfboards, buggy boards, buckets for picking up sea shells, and dad brought out our special maid sandcastle buckets. They were big and made the best structures ever!!! Plus our family is known for our sand castles/structures. I smiled and dived down, feeling the salty cold water against my skin, it's the best feeling ever. When I got up to the surface my family wasn't there, I got out of the ocean and looked around. Then a man in a jubah, berjubah came up to me, "Can I help you?" I asked slightly shaking a bit. Not because of the cold feeling anda feel when the air blows on anda after getting out of any body of water, but because of the fear I was feeling. He walked up closer to me, I dived into the water, and swam out to sea. Then I saw a fin, a yu, ikan jerung fin, I screamed and swam back to shore. I was lucky I lived, I ran to my house but let out a loud scream when the man grabbed me. My family came outside and went pale, mom got the phone and called 911 but the last thing I saw and heard before the man knocked me out was, "Olivia!!!!!!!" And my parents and brothers running after me.

Narrators POV

The man came to the rough and tough city, where biker gangs, criminal activity, and the houses looked like total shit (pardon my language... but it's true) the sound of Motosikal rumbled around. But the old man soon came to a school, he walked into the school.

Jason's POV

I walked into class, "mr Johnson?" The teacher asked me, "Yeah?" I asked. "It's 4th period" she berkata angrily. "Yeah so what?" I asked and sat down, "you're loosing your education!" The teacher berkata glaring at me. "Yeah so what?" I asked again, "why were anda in so late?" The teacher asked me. "My Alarm clock didn't go off, I had to take my motorcycle to the shop, I had to get my hair done, and I had to get lebih clothes so I can look cool" I chuckled. "That's all lebih important than school?" The teacher asks, I nodded yes. "Who's he?" Cole asked, I turned around to see an old man in a cloak. "How did anda get in?" The teacher asked, the man walked up to me, "what do anda want?" I asked him glaring at me. "Even when he glares he's hot" Justine sighed dreamily, I flashed a smile before turning to the guy again who then knocked me out.

Narrators POV

The old man walked to a huge huge mansion where anda could hear screaming, the old man snuck through the back door.

Tatiana's POV

"I berkata I wanted a pony!!!!!!" I screamed angrily, "honey we looked for a pony" dad berkata to me. "Then why don't I have one?" I asked angrily, "the places where they sell ponies are going through a rough winter and they can't be brought to us" mom said, I let out a scream. Then a guy in a black jubah, berjubah walked into the room. "Who are you?" I asked him angrily, "security!!!" Dad screamed, but he knocked me out and vanished before the security guards came.

Narrators POV

The man in the jubah, berjubah came to the neighborhood where Cathy lived, the sound of loud screaming echoed through the neighborhood.

Cathy's POV

I ran after my cousin who was visiting, he had taken my bag of candy!!!! I screamed and screamed at him running and running. "Cathy stop being so loud!" Dad called, "then make Donny give me back my candy!" I called angrily. Dad came down, Donny gulped and gave me my Kandi back. "Thank you" I berkata but glared at Donny. "Now be quiet" dad said, but literally 3 saat Donny took my hair brush and I was screaming and running. But then Donny and I stopped, there stood a man in a black cloak. "dad?!!!" I screamed, "no figure it out yourself!" He called. Then mom came back from work, she saw what was happening, she let out a scream. Then the man grabbed me "mom! Dad!" I cried. The last thing I heard before being knocked out was "Cathy!!!!!"

Narrators POV

The man in the jubah, berjubah came to the town where Xander lived.

Xander's POV

I groaned in annoyance when My sisters let out a loud squeal from the room seterusnya to mine. It's hard being the only guy in the family, I looked at a picture of my dad and I. He and I went hiking in the woods, that was the hari before he headed into the army. Then 4 months later he was killed in while in battle, I felt some tears fall down my cheeks. He died when I was 6 and it was on my 6th birthday too, but ever since dad died it was just my mom, my sisters and me. Then there was a knock on my door, I opened it to see a man in a cloak. "Uhhh hello" I said, mom came running up quickly. Mom knows when we're in trouble. She let out a scream, the saat I look at the guy I was knocked out.

Narrators POV

Now the man came to the village Lexi lives in, people looked at him suspiciously.

Lexis POV

my friends, Jane, Nevaeh, and Anna were over at the house for a sleep over. "I brought snacks" mom berkata coming in with chips and humus, fruit, pretzels, cotton candy, cookies, and crackers. "Thanks mom" I berkata smiling at her. "No problem honey" mim berkata and walked out. "So do anda still have a crush on Felix?" Jane asked me, I nodded yes, "then why don't anda talk to him?" Nevaeh asked me. "You know I'm nervous and can get shy when I even go close to him " I sighed. "We'll help anda out with that nervousness and shyness" Anna berkata smiling, "thanks" I berkata smiling. Then there was a knock on the door, thinking it was mom, I called "Come in!" But it wasn't mom It was a man in a cloak. He walked towards me, I was afraid. I scooted back, but then i was knocked out.

Narrators POV

The man in the jubah, berjubah came to the Big beautiful house in the country where Cameron's dad and mom bought so they could go and preform in the country performance.

Cameron's POV

I smiled brightly as I took dance lessons from my teacher. I had finished Singing lessons so I'm doing my dance lessons. "excellent Cameron" mr Francisco berkata smiling, I smiled back. Mom and dad then came in, "now lets practice on the stage" mom berkata smiling. I gulped a big, I'm very afraid to go on stage anda know and I can't do anything about it. Mom and dad took me on a stage with no one there, they put Muzik on but I was too scared to do anything. Mom and dad came on stage with me. I hugged them crying, "I can't do it!!" I sobbed. "It'll be Okay" mom berkata smiling at me, then a man in a jubah, berjubah came on stage. He threw my parents away from me and knocked me out

Narrators POV

"Last house" the man in the jubah, berjubah berkata as he came to a school, Asher's school.

Asher's POV

I smiled as I solved the hard math problem on the board, "you never fail to impress me Asher" mr Franchise berkata smiling. I nodded happily, but couldn't help but think about that girl at the pool. She always visits the pool, even in the winter with an indoor pool. Then the api, kebakaran alarm went off and I dihidu, smelt smoke. Everyone walked out, but before I got to the door I was knocked out sejak some guy in a cloak
posted by ivanaoshea
Please don't mind if i have somewhere a mistake, english isn't my mother language.
i wrote better stories but only this is on english
i hope anda will like it.




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So I don't know if I'm even goiing to continue this atau not. But could anda do me a favour and give it a read?

Run, musn't stop running. Can't look back, it's too late now, he's going to chatch up any minute. She was going to get caught, she's going to die.

4 days earlier.

Fear.Pain.Death.Alexis Baker was having another one of her nightmares, ones that she could hardly remember the hari after, but the pain and misery allways got left behind. Allways. A cold sweat covered her face and her whole body was shaking, her hands clenched and her feet twitched. She began to call out, muble words that were...
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"This outta work," she beamed, grabbing the straight iron and the hair brush and took a lock of my long blonde hair.

"How long is this...
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This is a story that I wrote for a Penulisan contest at school. It's called My Sweet Release... Here it is:

My Sweet Release

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When I was nine months old, I was a normal housecat; carefree, jubilant, peaceful. I still lived with my mother, as she took care of her latest litter. There were...
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posted by viju
Hmmmmm…. (This is a story) aha... (Of husband wife)
I’m not like them
Hmmmmm..... aha aha
That’s the way I am
La la la la la
I’m not like them
La la la la la
That’s the way I am

Be calm, why you’re screamin
Why anda cry, when anda see me hangin
With some, one else, why I feel
Like something burning

Stay back, why you’re comin
After me, now you’re feelin
Jealous, ain’t I feel
When anda were with those bitchy babes when I was seeing you

With somebody else,
Like everyone else
All were watching your back
When anda were flat
With those slut girls
You Cinta to hang with them…….

Tell me…..

(Chorus)
Why...
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Chapter Six

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OK, so this is a short story I had to write for English class. Plaese tell me what anda think about it- I hope anda like it.



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    “It’s retro- purple is so not stellar… and so is sleeping in, FYI,” Erin replied with a smug smile.
    “No-...
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The sound of an engine,
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