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Angel was so excited, her best best Friends were coming for her birthday sleepover at five o clock! Time crept slowly to ten past five and still not a single soul in sight! Suddenly her little sister Summer shouted “Ha Ha they're not coming they hate anda so much!” Angel ran upstairs weeping and charged desperately into her sister Friday's room.


“Was Summer being mean to anda again?” asked Friday
“Yes, she berkata that my Friends weren't coming because they hate me and that's not true!”
“Don't worry its only because she is jealous about anda having the best sleepover ever”said Friday
Suddenly Angel heard a knock at the door “I'll get it!” she called out. As soon as she opened the door Yvonne started Singing happy birthday and was holding a large oval shaped present neatly wrapped up in sparkly purple paper. Angel and Yvonne hugged and while they were doing so Tillie appeared holding a square box covered in 'Happy Birthday' paper. They were all catching up on gossip when the loceng rang “That must be Aliona!” shouted Yvonne and they all ran to the door. “Hello people!” Aliona shouted in her excited American voice.
“I hope you've all remembered your swimming costumes because after teh we're going for a swim in the lake!” exclaimed Angel
“Right time for the presents!” Bidadari mum marigold shouted. First of all Angel opened Tillie's present which was a short book and a bunga craft set. Then she opened Aliona's, which was an art box with pencils and charcoal all neatly in pelangi, rainbow order.
“Oh thank anda Aliona! I have been wanting this for ages!”
“Your pleasure” berkata Aliona feeling pleased that Angel had liked her gift.
“Mine seterusnya mine next!” shouted Yvonne. Yvonne's gift turned out to be a massive tub of sequins, beads and lots of arty things.
“Oh thanks Yvonne!”

After their magnificent party teh the girls went to the lake near Angel's house. “I'll be first in!” Aliona shouted. So Aliona jumped in the lake and screamed at the temperature. The others were too scared so they just left Aliona in there. “I'll try and touch the bottom then” Aliona said. Aliona ducked down sticking her feet in the air and sticking an arm up over the bahagian, atas of the water, waving. A few saat later Angel, Tillie and Yvonne heard some splashing and saw some bubbles where Aliona had gone down. “She must of reached the bottom!” Tillie shouted excitedly. A number of saat passed and still no sign of Aliona!
“Where is she?” asked Angel

They waited.
“It's been over nine minit now!” Tillie shouted, almost in tears.
“What are we going to do?” asked Yvonne who was the smartest of the lot. It was bad news if she couldn't even think of an idea. “We can't exactly tell Angel's Mum, she'll go ballistic!”
“And so will Aliona's parents! They'll never want to see us again!” Things were looking very bad for the girls and they still didn't know what to do.
“Right I'm going in!” cried Yvonne “What? We cant just stand here and do nothing!”
“Y...v..v..v..vonne's right” stammered Tillie who was in tears now “We have to help A..A..Aliona!”
“Right” Yvonne declared “It was nice knowing anda guys!” she hugged both of them and jumped in. Tillie and Angel burst into floods of tears. It was bad enough losing one best friend let alone two!
“Yvonne shouldn't of followed Aliona down there, it could be dangerous!” exclaimed Angel (The
worrier of the group). It was getting dark and the two girls who were still dry were very very worried! It had been over 11 minit since Yvonne had jumped in and 18 since Aliona had disappeared! “Lets go inside and get Mum!” Angel suddenly decided after lots of pondering. “She'll know what to do!”
“But what if they come back up?!” Angel cried “I'll stay here!”

So Tillie went pelting back towards the house, faster and faster, when she saw a hooded figure in the distance. For a perpecahan, berpecah saat she thought it was Angel's Mum but no, it couldn't have been. For Angel's Mum didn't have fiery red hair. Angel's Mum wasn't that tall. Tillie slipped out a small scream. Her legs had frozen. She didn't know why, she didn't know how. The hooded figure turned. It had a chalky white face. Tillie felt her hati, tengah-tengah freeze.
posted by stopbullying
The Stalker
Chapter 1

    It was a cool, winter night. It wasn’t too cold outside and I thought after work I would go out for a walk and take advantage of the nice weather. It was four-thirty in the evening. I got off of work at 7:00. It should be a little sejuk sejak then.
Work was boring and nobody really came in. Only one person did and he was weird looking. He had ripped shorts, a short shirt, and worn out shoes on. I looked at him suspiciously because the whole time he was in there I caught him looking at me. This was weird especially since I was only 18 and he was like...
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posted by BeSafe
Is it possible to fall in Cinta with someone you’ve never met
Your only knowledge stemming from information you’ve seen atau read
Before I knew of his existence I would have stated no
Yet the first time I saw him my hati, tengah-tengah begged to never let go
It isn’t rational
atau logical
Though Cinta rarely is
I can’t make my hati, tengah-tengah stop wishing that I held his
And I know it's stupid and silly to believe
In some kind of fairy tale
The perfect prince for me
But every time I see that smile
I can’t help but feel
That one hari we could share
A Cinta that is real
posted by khfan12
 this is aqua
this is aqua
“You can’t catch me!” Chavez shouted. “Yes I can!” I yelled. I started to run faster. It was a great feeling. The wind in my face. “I can’t believe that people don’t like it out here….” My thoughts were interrupted sejak a voice. “Aqua!” Chavez…. I ran farther into the forest and stopped dead in my tracks. A few feet away, was Chavez, being wrestled to the ground sejak men in black suits. “Aqua run!” Chavez yelled when he saw me. I couldn’t move. I was Frozen with fear. One of the guys in black started to run towards me. “Run!” Chavez repeated, right before they...
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posted by Rockster
I'm Penulisan two novels, I know what most people think (WHY!) but i've decided to do one hand written and work upon it at school, where one of my teachers is happy to look at and talk to me about the errors that I've done. Whereas the other novel I'm working on the computer which i would like people to read it and discuss whats good and bad about it. Anyway, I've copied and pasted this novel that I've begun from an animal crossing forum and here it is.


Chapter 1: The Frowning Mirror

The heat swarmed around me, wrapping me with comfort and content. I knew that this feeling that conflicted with...
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added by FreeAwesomeness
Source: If anda want to draw her, please do. Remember, she is my own character. Please give me credit. 'Last
added by amutokitty
anda may ask who and what is Mary Sue and a Gary Stu?

Well my follow peminat popper a Mary Sue and Gary Stu is a written atau drawn mistake, lie atau fake.

Why are they supposedly a lie atau a fraud?

Silly you! They're a lie and,or a fraud because they're perfect, no flaws, no issues, and no worries. Basically everything a human isn't atau can't naturally have.

Mary Sue- Is a female who is beautifully, smart, sexy, strong, independent, sentimental, generous, slim but curvy at the same time,and yada yada. She's basically the perfect woman with no flaws and a sex symbol that tops over all other sex symbols....
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posted by edwardsca
    I was sitting at my meja at school, Penulisan my Krismas list. It was hard to think of lebih than three things, so I wrote down a gift card to itunes, some movies, and a new pair of nike shoes. I'm trying to think of something, and my teacher berkata "Emily it wouldn't be wise to ask for money for a present". When I went utama I was still thinking about my Krismas list, but then my little sister came up to my face "Sissy, sissy, anda should ask for a super big princess kit'. Then makan malam, majlis makan malam came, we had roasted chicken. My older brother Eric was bragging about making the basketball...
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The Sun today is a yellow dwarf star.It is fueled sejak thermonuclear reactions near its center that convert hydrogen to helium.The Sun has existed in its present state for about for billion six hundred million years and is thousands of times larger than the Earth.

By studying other stars,astronomers can predict what the rest of the Sun's life will be like.About 5 billion years from now,the core of the Sun will shrink and become hotter.The surface temperature will fall.The higher temperature of the center will increase the rate of thermonuclear reactions.The outer regions of the Sun will expand...
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posted by House_Of_Night_
hiyah =), Hope yuuh guys enjoy this, just as much as i've enjoyed Penulisan it. Please, rate and komen =).. And i'm totally sorry if this was way to long lOl.. xOox








Hung

‘Life as we know it, is Changing.'



Chapter One.

‘Look Lily. I totally wouldn’t freak out.’ Marci said.
‘Don’t freak out? ’ I asked, shocked.
‘Yeah, Marci. Don’t freak out? Lily future husband and father to her children, hasn’t dumped his girlfriend yet! So plan B I think!’
‘Thanks for the observation, Gemma and Plan B? No. Look its been over six months now.’ I explained and stormed off. Wanting to get...
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PG13. I don't like this chapter... Kind of rushed.

Chapter 3

It has been a week since my detention, and the arrival of Megan. Jake hasn't been lebih happy, now that he had a girlfriend. Brianna and Lilia have been on me lebih than ever now. They don't know when atau how to stop. I was getting really annoyed.

I walked into the school, looking quite pissed. As usual all the girls came and told me how great I looked, although I knew that I look like crap.

"Yo Joshua... Why the crappy mad face?" asked Ken. He was never subtle.

"Nothing. Fuck anda and leave me alone." I told him.

"Eww.... I don't want it...
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Then it wasn’t my confession that gave him the big shock, Sara thought, He already knew the whole story that’s why he understood my acts.
Until now I don’t know how I dared to step in and ask your friend to introduce me to you. Though I’m not used to that, it felt so right.
“Sara” Emily called anda when anda were about to get into the car.
“Hi Emily, How are you?” anda answered joyfully with the prettiest smile I’ve ever seen.
“Fine” she berkata with her bright smile.
“You haven’t introduced me to your handsome boyfriend” anda berkata playfully and my hati, tengah-tengah beat faster than...
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posted by WileE-Quixote
ON STORMY CLOUDS
I’VE SEEN HIM SIT
THIS DARK Angel FAIR
WITH FOLDED AND SHIMMERING
GOSSAMER WINGS
AND MOON BEAMS IN HIS HAIR

WITH BURNING EYES
TO EARTH HE SLIDES
SEEKING TO FEEL THE GROUND
THEN SPREAD HIS
RAVEN FEATHERED WINGS
CASTING HIS MAGICK SHADOW ‘ROUND

THIS Bidadari TOUCH
IS A COMFORTS SONG
SOFT AS A VELVET CLOAK
AND WHEN HE REACHES
TO RIGHT THE WRONG
HIS WORDS ARE FEELINGS SPOKE

ON HOOF AND WING, I WATCHED HIM SAIL
MY DARK Angel FAIR
TO SOME ARCANE ABODE
WE KNOW NOT WHERE
TILL HIS seterusnya ASSIGNMENT
AND THE FUTURE HAS BEEN FORETOLD

FOR THE LAST FLIGHT
THIS DARK Angel TAKES
IS A PIED-PIPERS GATHERING
FOR ALL THE SOULS HE’S TOUCHED
LISTENING TO THE SHADOWY
SONGS THEY’LL NOW SING
19 December

It's been almost a tahun since Freak died. For a while, people always used to say to me, "I'm sorry." I hated that. I yelled at them, "Feel sorry for Freak! I'm still alive!"

They shouldn't feel sorry for me. Freak taught me what it meant to walk tall. He tought me that remembering is only an invention of the mind, and if anda try hard enough, anda can remember anything. I try to remember everything Freak told me; and sometimes, it works. Then it slips away.

For a while after Freak died, I went back to being the critter hiding out in Down Under. Then one day, it hit me, and hard. If I had died, I wouldn't want Freak to do what I was doing. I would want him to continue Freak The Mighty.

And that made all the difference.

I try to make Freak proud; maybe I'm even succeeding. I just know that Freak changed the way I saw things, and I owe him that much; to keep Freak The Mighty alive.

-Max-
Chapter Three

All throughout their patrol, it was all James could do to keep his attention (and eyes) on the task at hand. He was still going over the jam before patrol in his head, trying to make sense of it. Lily Evans, always the stoic one, afraid? It was hard to get his head around. Lily had always been the one to keep her head in the most panic-worthy of situations – like the time she found out that Remus is a werewolf.

It had been a particularly difficult full moon, the last one of their sixth tahun at Hogwarts. Wolf-Remus had been lebih vicious than usual and both James and Sirius were...
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posted by Okkkkk11111
This mermaid spell could work so be careful.you will need a cup of water and a lot of salt and also a necklace/bracelet the insructions are anda are going to put the salt in to the cup of water and anda put the necklace/bracelet in to the salty water and say this spell: Duyung Duyung here my plea I want a Mermaid tail and powers.mermaids Duyung this is my plea so make it come true. After anda say the say the spell anda put on the necklace/bracelet and thats it. But anda don't get to choose your mermaid tail and powers.
As an outcast, Adeena had always felt for the underdog because she saw herself in them. The queens daughters grew up in a palace. Normal french folks grew up in a village of some sort. But Adeena...Adeena grew up in village of caravans.Her father called a "tent city" because the poorest of folks could only to live there. But despite the stereotypes, she was still distanced from other children simply for being a gypsy.

"Ha..as if being a gypsy overrides every decent thing I've ever done" Adeena pondered, "If they changed the name of a rose, it would still smell as sweet. If they changed my culture,...
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