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Penulisan Treatments That Sell sejak Dr. Ken Atchity via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by para-scence
What kind of sick, twisted individual created the idea of dodgeball? Apparently it seemed like such a great idea to put child against child, and have them whip balls at each other. And it doesn't matter that gym teachers say "no hitting people in the face," because despite that, that's exactly what they're aiming for.

I was just happy I was out most of the game. I was able to sit out on the sidelines, with all the kids who were furious they were out. and avoid a panic attack.

I saw Jezreel again.

She was ducking behind a kid, who seemed to not mind her using him as a body guard. I almost laughed...
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Chapter Fifteen

Later that hari and after makan malam, majlis makan malam and playing games with Mama and Sean, Mac knew that after Sean leaves their utama to go back to his own house and once Jamie cleans them up, put them in their pajamas, and read them a story atau two, then she can ask her mother about that odd thing she saw that hari between her mom and the man who hangs out with them any chance he got.

It was coming closer and closer. After Sean had left, four of the Thomas family is heading into their ‘getting ready for bed’ routine which means taking a bath, taking sure that the kids had brushed their teeth, used...
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What New Screenwriters Struggle With The Most - Daniel Calvisi via FilmCourage.com.
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added by melikhan
*Note; This is a variation of RachelGal97’s Endless Pain. Same names; just a different plot. Please komen and tell me if anda like and what’s your kegemaran part*

Endless Pain: Chapter Two

Selena and her mother had sat on the katil while Selena told the whole story.

“And just last night I dreamed that he had… that he had…”

“He had been what?” her mom asked with utter most curiosity; for she knew her daughter, and anything could happen.

“He had been killed!” Selena shouted. “And it felt so real! As if I saw it with my own eyes!” The tears slowly came again, but they passed....
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posted by marissa
 "She wore very little make up and looked exhausted, as if she’d just woken up and remembered she had to go work."
"She wore very little make up and looked exhausted, as if she’d just woken up and remembered she had to go work."
Chapter Two:

Jean:

Jean got on the bus a few hours later, dressed in her brown Tim Hortons uniform, earphones in her ears as she fiddled with her iPod. Benny spotted her as soon as she got on. Without a saat thought, he stood up and sat in the empty kerusi, tempat duduk seterusnya to her.

Jean was young, sixteen, maybe seventeen, and tall. Her dark hair was pulled up neatly behind her head. She wore very little make up and looked exhausted, as if she’d just woken up and remembered she had to go work.

Jean looked over at Benny and gave him a half-hearted smile, before turning back to her music.

“Hello,” berkata Benny,...
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posted by Epismatic
The inky sky pours in gradually,

Silver stars mingle casually,

api, kebakaran has left a stain on this land,

Trace the blackened ground with one hand,

Been a while, but I remember,

sejak waning light, a glowing ember

Fades out in silence, into dust,

Until the breeze will leave it crushed.

My frame, a statue, barely breathing,

As the wisps of smoke are leaving,

Now, my muscles start to thaw,

And heat from ashes leaves them raw,

I catch myself before my landing,

For as long as I've been standing,

I've stared out at a ruined nation,

Now I walk with trepidation.
posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (4): Lately



I thought I Lost anda before anda even left me.

That’s the message that your cloudy gaze sent me,

And now it’s become a glistening bubble of a memory.

Is it possible anda regret me?

Is it possible that I’m empty?

Why else would I awake to find no one here except me?

Won’t anyone accept me?

My true face, not the stunning mask of the beautiful, bereft me?

Haunted riches; is it worth being wealthy?

The creeping outside my doors; they’re gonna get me.

And once they finish chopping me up, they’re gonna set me,

Ablaze, and then they’ll just forget me.


A lebih grim tone and disorganized format were intentional for this one. Funny enough, the tajuk was the hardest part here. Trying to sum up this poem in just a word was difficult, but I think I found a good fit.
posted by ejenk1025
Chapter 1

As I slowly walk toward the road I can't help but to think "What have I gotten myself into?" I know I shouldn't have done what I did. Is this where I was suppose to end up? Is this destiny. If it is... I don't believe. I just wish I could take it all back. I'm sorry. I'm sorry is all I could say. I shouldve never listened to her. My mother. Don't let this be the end. I won't give up. Please. Then I hear a soft scream but as I approach closer It grows louder. I start to shake inside but I manage to keep walking. I'm sorry. I shouldve let him go. It was stupid. I shouldve let that night...
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posted by Bluekait
All characters from the buku and Filem are copyrighted. They have been used for this fanfiction.

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Alice comes back utama from her trading trip. She missed her family and wants to meet her Friends down in Underland. She recently heard that the Red Queen has passed away and Ilosovic Stayn has been released back into the Red Queen's castle. Looking through her bedroom window, Alice saw Nivens looking at her and pointing at his watch. She gets dressed and follows him into the rabbit hole. She remembers how to go through the tiny door and brought the upelkuchen. "Hello,...
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An memerang, otter strode silently down the dim hall.
His pelt was black as night and his eyes were as blue as the sky on a cloudless day.
He wore a black tunic, which came down a little past his knees.
From the way he walked to the sly glint in his eyes, it was clear that he was crafty, daring and fierce.
He was young, yes, but he was the most advanced in his classes.
He had won duels with experienced warriors, beat the best archers and had even stolen Makanan from behind the cook’s back.
The Wave Warriors would be lucky to have him in their army, if he stood up to their expectations. 
Would he?
He would...
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posted by MCF2000
Even though I was only a little kid-6 to be exact-I remembered that hari well. Who wouldn't?! For a kid being seperated from your parents to go to kindergarten was torture but being kiddnaped! I cried myself to sleep every night! I better get a alih on and start from the beginning before I tell anda the ending already! My name is Ani Mayloan and this is my story.
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I was so happy as I ran utama from the bus stop. For two reasons: 1 that hari was our last hari of school 2 it was the first hari the Wayhoo...
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posted by para-scence
Inspired sejak the song, "Room of Angels" sejak Akira Yamaoka on the Silent bukit 4 soundtrack. ;)

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Worthless. Useless. Despicable. Wretched.

These are the words my mother used to describe me. Each word was like a dagger through me. But I was thankful. She might've come up with that soon enough.

"There's nothing like a mother's love," they say. I wouldn't know. If it included fear, pain, hate, and resentment, then yes. There's nothing like it. Not in the the entire world. But I think they meant it was wonderful. Not terrible.

But it was over now. She was gone forever.

I was allowed to her funeral,...
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 My attempt to draw Danny....It is horrible
My attempt to draw Danny....It is horrible
Her scream was high pitched. The kind where anda get a shiver down your back. The kind when someone scrapes their nails on a chalk board. The kind where the person screaming is in utter pain. But gladly it wasn't all the way like that.

anda would think the water elementals would be lebih careful around the giant sea snake. It's one of the many creatures that live in our vally's lake. Some of the water elementals are even ikan atau sea snake shape shifters. Thats why I laughed when one of them screamed at the giant serpent.

Trixi yelled at me for my rude behavior and we ran towards the snake. From...
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posted by Takuya
I have always been amazed sejak animated Filem and comicbooks just because they both a great way to tell stories and the art usually looks amazing.

What i want to do is to create something that speaks to kids atau teens just like the Disney Filem and comicbooks did to me as a kid and thats why i´m trying to write a book and i´m going to try and get that published.

I really admire people who succed with Penulisan a book,drawing comics atau anything like that and i really hope that i can be one of them some day.
posted by sevendeadlysins
Normally, this style just isn't me, but I feel like I needed to release all of my wrath, turning it into sadness, eventually.

So, I'm not an Emo poem writer, but I just wanted to siarkan this piece I literally just wrote.

I am broken
There's no one left to fix me.
All hope is lost
There's so much I will never be.

I am broken
My world has been shattered.
All hope is lost
I am nothing, destroyed and battered.

I am broken
The world around me falls apart.
All hope is lost
There is no chance for a new start.

I am broken
I have been left here on my own.
All hope is lost
There's no one else; I am here alone.

I am broken
The pain is too much for me to bare.
All hope is lost
In the end, the others just don't care.

I was broken
No tears remain in my fearful eyes.
All hope is gone
My world ended with nothing but lies.
posted by 1-2vampire
basically, its what I used to be.

A sad and lonley sight
Sat at home, her chest feels tight
Her sadness wraps her in a ball
No friends, no confort, none at all
She's different but there's no help for that
They call her names that bring tears to her eyes
A freak, a loner, and now she cries
She wants to end it
All the pain
Just a friend, thats all she would wish to gain
Now the rain falls on her window pane
She stares outside, to keep her sane
Her feeling drive her mad sometimes
She thinks of this and now she sighs
No hope, no love, what shall she do?
She feels so lonely, but what about you?



My advice, is to...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Shaun

I watched two little girls playing, watching one in particular. She reminded me painfully of Serena. The little girl pulled her friend to her feet and ran towards a woman that I recognized.

It was her. At first I was sure I was halluncinating.

Her dark hair was a little longer than I had seen it last. She was wearing a black pencil skirt and a deep blue blouse. She looked happy as the girl ran up to her.

She hugged the little girl. Their hair was the same colour.

I watched numbly as Serena looked at the child with unfathomable Cinta as she told her something.

Serena looked up at me, pain and shock evident on her face.
posted by Cutebutcrazy--
anda couldn't and wouldn't,
ask for anything more.
Now all anda want,
is to be able to rest.
For your famliy to be happy.
anda wish anda could help them,
through the pain,
but anda can't,
anda can only watch,
from the sky.
anda can only watch them cry.
Hearts are now broken.
But your love,
is forever out spoken.
For twith out you,
there'd be no hope,
for those to come.
anda put the doctors one step closer,
to finding the cure.
anda may be just another person to them,
but to me your so much more.
Your one in a million,
your unequie.
I have just one lebih thing to say.
Plaese rest now.
Rest now and sleep.
May heven bring anda happiness and peace.