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posted by Cinders
 Larry the labu
Larry the Pumpkin
The labu Poem
I shall call it the labu Poem
Because it is short and fat, like Larry
Who also looks like a pumpkin

When I was a junior in high school, I tried to gather together 365 poems together so I could make a calender. Actually, my target was at least four hundred, so I could weed out the bad ones. I Lost the introduction that I wrote for my teacher, but these poems are based on Rawak thoughts I'd have at one point atau another throughout the day. Most are funny, some are not. Generally, it's kind of how I like to see life. Happy, amusing, but very precious. So I present to anda the Unfinished...
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posted by edward-lover456
The Golden Tear part seven
please tell me if anda want me to continue in the comments! enjoy!
I waited and waited and I thought the hole thing was a prank
but then Kyle finally can in the room and berkata "I'm sorry Eva there
was a million paschen's anda must of thought I stud anda up" I said
"yeah I kinda did but it's okay your here now" and then my mom
and Molly and David walked back into the room. Molly berkata "Mama
Eva we got anda an ice cream!" and David berkata "yeah if grandma didn't
eat it all" and Mom berkata "ha ha very funny the only thing missing is
the cherries David and Molly" David berkata "Mama Eva...
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Source: Me and paint.
posted by HaleyDewit
Four months gone, but still so vivid
Feels as though I actually lived it
Can’t get it out of my mind
Though God knows I’ve tried
Save my poor soul
You slip back into my head at any unguarded moment
For anda to come back is all I ever wanted
I long to be seterusnya to you
But that won’t do me no good
Save my poor soul

And now I can’t breathe
Oxygen left along with you
Fear’s coming over me
Because I can’t seem to get through

Hear my silent cries
Help me face the night
Show me how to be strong
And save my poor soul
Decrease my suffering
Give me strength to begin again
Light find my way back home
And save my...
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posted by HaleyDewit
Out of your mind
You wave with your scepter
Completely blind
‘Cause anda think you’re so much better
You say we should fall off our high horses
But when I do I’ll take anda down with me

Started the feud
But anda still play innocent
Your bitchy attitude
Is not gonna get anda any credit
You say you’re the one being picked on
But you’re not getting any sympathy

If manipulation was a crime
You’d be sentenced for a lifetime
I’d make sure anda wouldn’t make it through the day
If hypocrisy was an award
You could use it as a substitute heart
But know anda won’t always get your way

You’re making it hard...
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posted by HaleyDewit
When anda bleed anda can start dying
You can finally stop denying
There's no reason for anda to keep on trying
Just admit that you've been lying
You better find a place to play hide and seek
'Cause the things I'll do will make anda weak
Remember all the things that anda have said
'Cause I can't get the revenge out of my head
Soon you'll be dead

One hari I'm coming back
I'm getting ready for the attack
I'll fight anda like before
You won't hurt me anymore
You better start to run and find a place
'Cause a lying jalang, perempuan jalang like anda has no saving grace
Remember all the things that anda have done
'Cause my revenge will give...
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posted by HaleyDewit
This is my first rap song. It's about my co-worker. It's not very nice. Also, somewhere there's the line 'i don't mind being the hottest chick around' I usually don't say those kinds of things. She just really pissed me off.

Talking shit like a twit
That’s all anda can do
But when it comes down to it
Nothing gets through to you
You’re all big talk
But anda got no game
And this poor me crap
Is really fucking lame
Who the hell are you
To play victimized
We’ve all got issues, bitch
But I guess yours are worse than mine
If you’d be the honest person
You claim to be
You wouldn’t talk third
person singular...
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posted by HaleyDewit
anda use the word slut when anda don’t know what it means
Maybe anda should ask your mom when she drops down to her knees
And maybe I’m a bitch, but at least I’m one with style
I don’t need to pick a fight, unlike link
You write everything in anugerah and anda can scarcely spell your name
You hurt the ones I Cinta and for that I’ll make anda pay
And anda can ignore this, anda can keep going on
But don’t start crying when anda end up all alone

You can laugh this off
You can call my bluff
But it’s one for all and all for one
You can throw with rocks, anda can try to play dirty
But if anda get to my friends,...
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posted by AnaHallam
Never before in the short time Cassie had spent on this earth, had the desire to escape burned so brightly within her. The damp soil clung to her delicate toes as she scampered through the wild, untamed grass. Such that it was miles high. atau so it appeared to her tiny form and limitless imagination. In truth the rumput merely tickled her knees as it reached up towards the sky in a desperate attempt to grasp just a single ray of sunlight. Not a blade prevailed.

The sky remained as dark as ever, the sun was not coming today. It rarely did in winter; it simply shrouded itself in rainclouds and...
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posted by Booyahboy
I wrote this poem, its not very gd, but i wanted some criticism, so i figured...well, here goes

Skeletal Kiss

Kisses from a skeleton.
A hand that cannot touch.
A nose that can't pick up the scent
Of perfumed skin, as such.

Sweet nothings from a skeleton,
Inspired sejak sightless eye.
Words tainted, sejak the rotted lips
Through which they must pass by.

Embraces from a skeleton.
The fault of broken heart,
Which used to rest in marrow cage
But now is gone, in part.

Cinta comes not from a skeleton,
From death, from lack of life.
It only lives in memory
Which lives through after life.

Ok, be honest, What do anda guys think?
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I stumbled upon link a while lalu and decided that some of the points I made in a very long-winded komen on her poem were valid for the population of writers here on Fanpop, especially but not only beginning writers and those just venturing into the fascinating world of the written word.

I advised dear greek to use lebih concrete imej in her puisi to better express her mostly abstract ideas. (And greek, I hope anda do not mind me using anda as an example. If anda do, please let your offense be known). She had written a lovely poem and titled it "My Life" and while the concept was genuine and...
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