The Return of Queen Chrysalis #1 - Non-Brony Reviews

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Dad: *Mowing the lawn*
Leonard: *Stops his car near Lewis' dad, and gets out* Mr. Lee? I want to talk to you.
Dad: *Turns off the lawnmower, and runs away*
Leonard: *Flies, and lands in front of Lewis' dad* I don't think so. anda try to run away from an officer again, you'll be arrested. anda haven't broken the law, but your son wants to be with us. If being a cop is what he wants, anda let him have it. Understand?
Dad: I'll kill that worthless bastard.
Leonard: That's it. You're under arrest.
Lewis: *Watching from inside the house*

My dad threatened to kill me, and that was enough for Leonard,...

,"so do anda wanna go?" pelangi, rainbow Dash asked. Fluttershy gave a confused look ,"where?" Dash facehoof'd at her Friends soalan ,"to the asylum..." ,"oh um sure" and with that the two trotted their way out of ponyville and towards Mare bukit where the asylum was. ,"what was up with anda earlier?" RD questioned her shy friend and Flutters took in a deep breath ,"I knew somepony who got sent to it..." Rainbow's eye widened ,"are they still alive?" she asked interested in the moment. ,"yes, i won't say where they are now though" Dash just shrugged not caring much about that part. a few minit and...

Our story begins with the birth of a young keledai, colt in Cloudsdale. Carameldip paced outside the hospital room awaiting the news. There was a scream of effort and the crying of an infant, than the nurse walked out of the room and looked at Carameldip, who bit his lip in worry. The nurse raised her head and smiled “it’s a boy. Would anda like to see it?” Carameldip nodded and stepped into the room, inside he saw his wife Chocolatecrunch holding a sleeping green keledai, colt in her arms. caramel sat sejak his wife and she asked “what should we call it?” and he responded with “I don’t know… well...

At the gym, Richard was waiting for Rick.

Richard: *sees Rick*
Rick: Hello James. Do anda have the money?
Richard: Yeah. All $64,000.
Rick: *takes money* Ah, excellent. I knew I could count on you, and Ian. Where is Ian anyway?
Richard: I don't know.
Rick: *Pushes chest against Richard's chest* You're not wired, are you?
Richard: No. I'll go get Ian, and we'll meet back here, 2 AM. If you're not here, we take the money back.
Rick: Understandable.

Richard left, but he didn't go to get John. He went to Jeff's house.

Richard: *Slowly walks towards entrance* Let's see what you're up to Jeffery. *Looks...