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what do anda think of this poem?

this is my first but just tell like it is. if anda hate it just tell me.

every time i look at anda i makes me want too cry.

every time i look at anda it makes me want too scream.

every time i look at anda it makes me want too die.

every time i look at anda it makes me think of anda and her lastnight.

so what do anda think should i wright more?

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dustfinger said:

this is not a poem. its a song. make it a song. i like it so far.

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ok thanks for answering ;)

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Mela1994 said:

i like it, u should write more!!! :D

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do anda think people would read it?

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i would read it so yeah i think people would read it :)

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sweet_n_silly said:

like dustfinger I think it would be a good song. It's pretty darn good too. there's some spelling issues though. anda definately should write more.

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if u do decide to make it into a song, I could maybe write the Muzik if u want

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peterslover said:

Awesome☺ Like they said, make it into a song☺
seterusnya line could be:
every time I look at anda I want to say goodbye

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TwilightSagaLdy said:

yeah its lebih of a song and its pretty good!!! and i think anda should finish Penulisan it! i like it!!! =)

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