Hello Guys This Is A Song I Wrote ..... :) MY First Song Ever so Please Give Me Your Opinion Either Is Good atau Bad i Understand ... Thanks In Advance :)

[Verse 1]
Yeah
Its been so long
Since i rided through the storm
The night will come
Without anda hon'
In this 4 long corner home
All sejak my own
Dont get it wrong
I did the thing
And now im alone
Paying the price
I wish we could get aside
Till then i pray the god
U'll be alright...

[No Ref atm.. i couldnt come up with a good one :( :(]

[Verse 2]
I know its impossible
To get anda back
But your equal to my life
lebih important than this
lebih important than that
So i'llsing for anda girl
Till i pass
And leave my will to someone else
Till he finish the quest
Cuz u dont deserve
To be on your own
Simple as that
Cuz anda got my hati, tengah-tengah
And u aint giving it back....


[Verse 3]
anda leaving me alone
Laying down on this bed
Thinking of what we had
Im becoming even lebih sad
anda becoming mad
That's all that can be said
anda jsut droping me dead
So go ahead
Tell your new boy
Whats has been unsaid
How my blood is ceri, cherry red
How u killed my soul
Without letting me understand
The Ros i gave anda 2 years lalu
Now are back to my hand
Like im banned
This wasnt planned
My life now is like a dead poker hand
I need a friend
To put this shit
To an END..

And Of The Song :P ope U liked It :)