Son of Neptune fanfictions The Son of Neptune (my version)

Piper123 posted on Jan 24, 2011 at 02:32AM
I do not own and never will own PJO or HOO give all credit to RR

Main Characters
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Jason son of Jupiter
Percy son of Posiedon(DUH)
Bobby son of Trivia
Gwendolyn daughter of Mercury
Dakota daughter of Mars
Hazel daughter of Minevera
Annabeth daughter of Athena
Reyna daughter of Persephone
Rachel the Oracle at CHB
Piper daughter of Aprodite
Leo son of Hepeastus

Now a preveiw

(Percy) chapter 1

I woke up at the beach with 2 girls one with blond hair and grey eyes she looked familier.The other had chocolate brown hair and blue eyes she was holding a sword at my throat and demanded
"Where is he and who are you".
Now that I thought about it I didnt know.
"Answer me"!
The other girl just stared at me like I was the most horrible thing on earth.
"I dont know I dont remember anything before right now and I dont know where or who 'he' is"
The girl with brown hair looked dissapointed I would have felt sorry for her if I knew who she was.
"We should take him to see Lupa".
the blond one said. The other nodded.
"Lets go"


Please tell me if I should continue.
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~Piper123
last edited on Jan 24, 2011 at 03:31AM
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hampir setahun yang lalu PJhero02 said…
big smile
yes continue!!!!! and idk if you were saying that the girl looks like annabeth but if u were she has grey eyes not blue. :) can't wait for the rest!!
hampir setahun yang lalu Piper123 said…
changed it thanks
hampir setahun yang lalu Piper123 said…
Chapter 2
(Renyna)

So a new kid shows up here right after Jason dissaperes. Mysteryies Mysteries.I bet Hazel new what to do she always did.So first one side of me is saying Trust Him! Trust Him! The other side says danger! danger!I felt better about letting Lupa deal with this.We reached the house when the new kid(we still didnt know his name)asked
"Who are you two".
"Im Hazel"hazel said.
"Daghter of Minevera goddess of wisdom".
"And Im Reyna daughter of Proserpina".
"Dont you mean Athena and Persephone?" he asked
"No the greek gods died and the Romans took their place" Hazel said.
Just then Lupa came out and the new kid yelped.
He reached for something in his pocket. A pen? He uncaped it and it grew into a 3ft. long bronze sword bronze not gold.
"Whe-where did you get that"Hazel stamerd.
"Same answer as always I dont know" He said
"Come inside" said Lupa.
I forgot she was here Hazel and I bowed.The new guy followed our example.
"Come we have much to talk about"
So we followed her inside
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Still chapter 2

(Annabeth)

I woke up got out of bed,dressed myself and joined my cabin for breakfast.I did the usaul stuff scraped some food off my plate into the brazier,sat at my table and hoped Percy was okay at the Roman camp.After breakfast I decieded that I would need to check on the Argo 2. So I went into the woods greeted Juniper and left to check the bunker 9 for Leo. I was halfway there when a pure black pegasus Percy's pegasus swooped down.
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Too short tell me what you think and if you want more ~~~Piper123

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hampir setahun yang lalu PJhero02 said…
big smile
good job! i liked it!! i luv blackjack! he's a pretty awesome pegasus!!!
hampir setahun yang lalu Blackjack167 said…
smirk
I loved it but......
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....... Make it longer 'cause I can type that in 30 minits maby less
hampir setahun yang lalu NicoDiAngelo4 said…
Really really good!! U should most definatelycontinue that!!!
hampir setahun yang lalu theonlyexeption said…
It is really good. Post soon!
hampir setahun yang lalu Huntress100 said…
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i loved it post some more!!!!!
hampir setahun yang lalu dezzypoo said…
post sooon