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This is a persuasive essay I had to write for my English class, I telah diposkan a forum asking for opinions on addressing the reader. I know it's a dangerous thing to do, but I thought it would be okay to do here. Opinions are great, I would Cinta to here anything anda have to say. Also, if I made any mistakes (i.e. spelling, grammar, puncuation) please point them out so I can fix them, thanks:D



Do anda remember that feeling you'd get on the last hari of school? Remember how excited you'd be to finally get to do those summer things like ride bikes with your friends, stay up all night planning pranks, and...
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Not long lalu people believed that in the future we would work less,have lebih free time,and be lebih relaxed.But sadly this has not happened.Today we work harder,work longer hours,and are lebih stressed than 10 years ago.We walk faster,talk faster,and sleep less than sebelumnya generations.And although we are obsessed with machines which save us time,we have less free time than our parents and grandparents had.But what is this doing to our health?An American journalist James Gleick in a new book,Faster:the acceleration of just about everything,says that people who live in cities are suffering from...
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posted by ZekiYuro
Here are some lebih texts from people.
1.Writing and then sending a funny e-mail atau text message to my friends.And of course,imagining their faces when they read it.

2.I really like driving at night when there's no traffic,listening to my favourite music.I feel completely free.

3.Staying in katil on Sunday morning and Membaca the newspaper.Then getting up very late and having my dog for a walk.

4.I enjoy going to the jym and really getting tired then taking a long hot pancuran, pancuran mandian followed sejak a nice hot cup of tea.There's nothing better.

5.Turning off my computer at the end of the day.Leaving work,and getting into my car to go home!It's the best moment of the day.I Cinta it!
 Edgar Allen Poe - #1
Edgar Allen Poe - #1
Okay, so this is a countdown of my most kegemaran authors of all time. It goes from igood #10 to magnficient #1.

I am also so happy for myself because this is technically my first work of Penulisan that I will soon publish.....

Alright, here it is;

1. Edgar Allen Poe - He has had a rough life filled with death, grief, abandonment, and misery, and his ways to cope with these difficult emotions were his magnificent stories and peoms that we enjoy to this day. Also, he and I can relate...
2. Stephen King - He has this enigmatic personality that makes anda wonder and puzzle, and he's a bit of an oddball...
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Hannah met Jamie in the summer of 2004.It was Hannah's 21st birthday and she and her Friends went to a club.They wanted to dance,but they didn't like the Muzik so Hannah went to speak to the DJ."This Muzik is awful,",she said."Could anda play something else?"The DJ looked at her and said,"Don't worry,I have the perfect song for you."

2 minit later he said:''The seterusnya song is sejak Coldplay.It's called Yellow and it's for a beautiful girl who's dancing over there."Hannah knew that the song was for her because she was wearing a yellow dress.When Hannah and her Friends left the club,the DJ was waiting...
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Okay, this is chapter 2... enjoy :)

Duncan and Gwen were taking a stroll through the forest

Duncan: So how's it going with anda and Courtney?
Gwen: Horrible, whatever I do I hurt her and she just hates me even more!
Duncan: Well, it's not so fun being in the hero's team either.
Gwen: Oh... I just don't get it I've done so many good things and... and Courtney and anda weren't dating at the time
Duncan: Cheer up, Gwen anda have me
Gwen: Yeah I guess so

Duncan and Gwen go back to their cabins

Gwen confessional: At least I can try to fix things with Courtney no matter how many times I... fail (Gwen starts...
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DOVEWING PVO
Dovewing listened to Squirrelflight name those who are going to the gathering:
"Bumblestripe, Ivypool, Toadstep, Cinderheart, Brackenfur, Millie, Lionblaze, Leafpool, Jayfeather, Bramblestar, I, Seedpaw, Lilypaw, Molepaw, Amberpaw, Dewpaw, Snowpaw, Molepaw, Cherrypaw, Blossomfall, Dovewing, Sandstorm, Whitewing & Hazeltail." Squirrelflight finished.
"Yay!" Amberpaw ran across the clearing toward Dovewing, her mentor.
Toadstep and Ivypool appeared sejak her side.
Dewpaw and Snowpaw raced after Amberpaw.
"We're goin' to our first gathering." They pranced around.
"Alright, be sensible...
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posted by GreenLight24
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Author's Note: Well hello faithful readers and Kekasih of Penulisan alike! This is the sequel to the story "Blacktie." on this club. So, if u haven't read it, go ahead a check it out, as this requires some prior knowledge. If u have read it, then awesome! Revenge is a dish best served in a tuxedo! lol.

The nighttime air was calm and the sky was dyed with a deep and reflective blue-black shade. Blacktie was still giddy over the successful trial run of his mental recall technology. He brushed himself off lightly and straightened his bow tie as he began to walk down Meredith jalan towards his final...
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posted by peacebaby7
This is for those who have just begun writing, atau for those who need helpful advice. I hope this artikel helps you.

1) Spelling and Grammar

Spelling and grammar is the first thing anda worry about. If there are many spelling/grammatical errors, the story doesn't flow very well. anda don't have to be an expert, but anda at least should have a dictionary nearby and know the basic rules of grammar. You'll pick up on lebih the lebih anda write.

2) Know Your Topic

First and foremost, after spelling and grammar, anda must know what you're Penulisan about. And I don't just mean a topic in general. For example,...
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posted by axemnas
Role playing atau Rping as most of the community calls it. Almost everyone's done it one way atau another whether they realize it atau not. Remember those days when you'd pretend anda were a movie character atau a prince/princess atau a pirate atau whatever. anda were role playing in a since. Now days when anda hear the word role playing anda probably think things like War Craft, bintang Craft, Nights and Dragons, Toontown, etc..
Something you've probably never figured however, is rping in relation to writing. Writing, that's all rping basically is. It's just Penulisan a collaborative story from different points...
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Chapter Three: "Dark Destiny"

Some time later, after almost everyone has returned to school after break…

A young man and an older man sat across from one another in the comfortable back of a long black limousine, the world rolling sejak unheeded beyond the darkly tinted glass. It was daylight outside, meaning they would rather be sleeping than traveling about, but they had much to do and were not wasting any time. Despite the apparent age difference between the two vampires, it was the younger one who obviously was the figure of greatest power, which was apparent from the way the older one addressed...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Three

Mason stared off at the window. Was this new emotion joy atau sadness? He couldn't tell. When anda think about it, his life isn't all that complicated. He could be in a worse situation like having to remodel the house after a natural disaster hit. Instead he was a millionaire with girl problems. His father offered to have "the talk" with him but he refused. Cassidy had came sejak this morning. She asked him out on a tarikh and he berkata sure. He couldn't believe he berkata that. 

There was something interesting about Cassidy. She had long black hair and zamrud, emerald green eyes. She could be funny...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 19






Sitting on the porch in the late evening for BJ was her only time to get fresh air and some decent time away from Cayden. In the mid-summer it was warm and pleasant outside at night but tonight it was unusually chilly. BJ wrapped her arms around herself feeling a chill run through her body. The air felt thick but it wasn’t humid it was…tense. The sky was preparing for a storm. A rumble of thunder rattled around her making her jump. She couldn’t understand why she was so jumpy, storms never bothered her but there was just something she was sensing that wasn’t right. Another...
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Summertime, June, 16th, 1934
Detectives surrounding the area of the lake. A dead body was found. A young girl's body. The young girl was Anna Hawkes, nine years old, blond hair, green eyes. My best friend.......ex best friend. Let's just say, this little girl did not play nice with me and left me forgotten. She's lucky. Lucky, lucky, lucky, lucky. The detectives found her and not me. Well, I'm sorta used to it since I've always known to be forgotten and alone. Now, I'm dead, forgotten, alone, wet, and sunk deep into the water. How did Little Miss Anna Hawkes die? Hehe, me of course. She drowned...
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Chapter one
Okay this is a really Rawak stroy but I was bored and I couldn't get this idea out of my head. In my opinion it is really badly written so sorry.

“Okay Class, anda have the rest of the period to finish this quiz. This is the last grade before your midterm so work well, and remembers what we studied,” berkata my Mr. Grazing, my math teacher. He was the kind of teacher kids pick on and make fun of behind his back. I hate math, so I don’t care for him as a teacher much. He usually wears a sweater vest and weird 1950 glasses that squeeze his nose at the tip.

I stared at the Chapter...
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posted by StarStorm
The Fay
The fay is a menyeberang, cross between a demon and an angle.
They are very very powerful and are now hunted, but
a fay can take the form of any living organism, so the few that are left are in hiding. And this is the story of one human who finds out that all the myths and legends about angles and demons are all very very true.



Suizanna Gentry is a average girl. She lives in a small apartment with her mom and dad, she has two Kucing and a overexcited
dog. She goes to a good school. Makes average grades. Has
four best friends. And is plain. But one hari she wakes
up to hear her parents arguing with...
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posted by CullenProperty
"I'd like a room please," Nick tells the front meja clerk. The old lady give both of us a look over and dompet, beg tangan her lips then rolls her eyes.
"ID please," she tells us, "both of you," she looks at me.
"Mine's in the car, I'll be right back," I tell Nick, smiling at the lady.
I come back and the lady is defeated, she really didn't think I had one, but I showed her! She gives my drivers license back with a roll of the eyes and watches me as Nick fills out the paperwork.
"What's the license plate, Grace?" he asks.
My mouth drops and my eyes nearly fall out of my head. I turn around so the lady...
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posted by tayandkris4evr
I woke up feeling groggy. My eyes were swollen from crying, and my head felt like it'd been hit with a sledge hammer a couple of times. Niki's head was on my shoulder, his blonde hair was dry now, and his eyes were also swollen and pink.
I slowly put Niki's head on a soft trash bag then I scooted out from the hollow tree's cover. Standing there in the forest made me realize something. It made me realize that sometimes Death brings sadness and sometimes it brings a reason, a meaning, atau a story. Niki berkata that he'd burned the tree... with his hands. But, I'm not sure if that's true at all....
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posted by June4
A family who lives on a boat
Doesn’t want land but water to float.
Sometimes afraid to sink down
Of many holes they have around.
All what’s left is hope and faith.
A girl on the bot is very sick,
But the thoughtless father’s brain never gave a kick.
Never thought about what would happen,
That’s why they’re Lost with a big reason.
All what’s left is 35 feet of rope and faith.
Believing in your heart,
There is a big feeling where to start
Never give it up nor never have enough.
anda know what anda want,
anda know some things that anda can’t have.
All what’s left is hope and faith.
posted by WritingBookWorm
So, one of my New’s Years Resolutions this tahun it to write more. So, I decided to make this:

The goal is to write something every day.

Starting on the 31st of January, every hari there is a vague word, idea, object, question, statement atau anything. anda can take it anyway anda want.

Then each hari anda should write what it tells anda too atau something inspired sejak it. Whether it be a poem, a small scene, a character description, journal entry, short story atau even just one really well crafted sentence.

Even if the prompt confuses you, atau anda have no ideas just write something! It’s a great exercise...
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