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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. sejak no means am I forcing anda to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless anda truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before anda start posting. It can be as little as a bio, atau as big as an entire artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no lebih than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he atau she is in, can pull out another trick out of his atau her hat.
4. If anda absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his atau her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely Rawak and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when anda have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the seterusnya hari you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own atau is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the baru-baru ini outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, atau claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If anda must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, atau so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if anda do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot atau stabbed in the heart, then pop up minit later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull atau flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to atau dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to atau dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created sejak you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing atau potential character is a Mary Sue, atau if anda suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, anda can take link. If anda want, anda can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case anda were curious, which anda probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all anda want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, sejak no means do anda have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
Sorry this is a short one.


He glanced at the clock. She's supposed to be here sejak now... His hand reached out to grab his cup. The warmth of the coffee released the tension in his body, letting his mind relax and not worry. As soon as the loceng on the bar door rang, the tension raced back when he saw her. Her red hair hair swung back and forth on her back as she went to get a drink. She turned her head to Nye and smiled. His green eyes grew tense; but he managed a wave.As she came back with a nice cold bir in her hand, the boys body stiffened with fear. She grabbed the chair, pulled it out; and...
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 Alex AKA the Distraction
Alex AKA the Distraction
(well part two enjoy)

They walk in to the back of the stage and whisper in hush tones
"you know the plan so get ready" stated Alex before walking to the door heading to the stage
"well lets go brain" Ajax berkata jokingly before climbing onto the ceiling his black cloths blending in with the shadows
"right then pinky" Kane laughs straighting his tie and walking to sertai the other people dancing.

Climbing through the vent was not his style but sometime anda gotta do what anda gotta do so he continued crawling through it. Looking through the vents he saw the people dancing, Singing wasn't what he'd...
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posted by SilverWings13
When Nic dropped his arms, Bentley nearly tripped getting to the bed. Aryess blinked several times in the bright light and looked up to her boyfriend. She grinned meekly as their eyes met for the first time in months.

Alek's struggled for air as his hati, tengah-tengah kick-started. It took a moment for his breathing to return to normal, and sejak then, Tara had rushed over to him and thrown her arms around his neck. She sobbed with relief into his shoulder, and he shut his eyes , wrapping his arms around her torso. 

3 months later...

"Guess this is it."
"Not necessarily," she disagreed. 
"Italy's a long way from...
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posted by GlitterPuff
 Rose-Skull Civvies
Rose-Skull Civvies
OKAY! If any of anda have ever watched Torchwood on BBC America atau Netflix atau wherever, anda will scream bloody murder when anda realize what episode she's from!

Name: Unknown

Alias: Rose-Skull

Appearance: Medium length black hair, fair skin, about 5 feet 7 inches, silver colored eyes (sometimes with red), a small tattoo of a demon on her wrist

Personality: She’s very nice to people she’s about to kill and acts sweet and trustworthy. Any other time, she is bitchy, mean, sarcastic, and rude.

Civvies: Black wide neck crop top, black jeans with grey suspenders hanging, black knee high high heeled...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
Ashley and the young beetle stood at the dinding as they both waited for her to recover from what she had saw. "You ok?" He asked, looking at her. She shook her head yes gently letting go of his arms.
"Do anda know where to look of my sister?" She asked, and the boy smirk.
"Come over here." he said, moving to the table. Ashley followed, the boy when on one side of the meja, jadual and Ashley stayed on the other. He pointed to an area that was circled off in red mark.
"How do anda she's here."
"I followed her there." He replied.
"So anda have a plan on rescuing Kaya?" She asked.
"Of course I do." He replied, with...
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posted by GlitterPuff
Name: Terpsichore Morison

Sex: Female

Age: 15

Appearance: Long merah jambu hair, blue eyes, fair skin, tall, skinny, wears Membaca glasses when needed

Personality: Sweet as candy, very paranoid about people (cause she thinks they’ll kill her), a little spacey, and shy around new people

Civvies: A blue tank top, gray sweater, jeggings, sport sneakers, small backpack, and an assortment of bracelets and earrings

Weapons: A handheld gun (usually in bra atau her bag)

Skills: None

Powers: None

Past: Terpsichore lived in a very harsh crime filled neighborhood in New York City. Everywhere she turned, there were guns,...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
The serigala, wolf charged at full speed to the trio. They all looked at each other not knowing whether it was headed for them atau was it just pasting through, but there was no time to figure that out. They separated making room for the monster. The serigala, wolf pasted but suddenly turned around. It howled and stood ground. The serigala, wolf was all black with grey eyes and a much lebih fuzzy tail than other wolfs. It howled once lebih moving from side to side, it stopped, stared of a bit then suddenly charged at Aisling. Aisling pulled out an Arrow and drew her bow, running side ways she shot at the wolf. It dodged, jumping...
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posted by MafiaYJ
 Time keeps running off with out her..
Time keeps running off with out her..
Woman eternal,
She cannot die,
And ever hari of her years,
She shall cry.
Woman out of time,
Who does not age,
Who harbors fear,
And harbors rage.
Angry daughter,
Along at last,
Time goes sejak slow,
But people go sejak fast.
Heavyhearted,
Wandering soul,
Awaiting death,
To take its toll.
A woman eternal,
May have no heart,
For it may end,
Before it may start.
Woman eternal,
Who cannot die,
Only one who calls on death,
And doesn't lie.

This is a poem about Babylon in case anda wouldn't tell..and now i'm babbling because my artikel needs to be longer..ugh. Anyway, I hope anda liked it. So tell me what anda think.
posted by khanna266
Name:Elliot Rodriguez
age:14
Alias:DemonStar
Species:Sky demon
Powers:controls the wind,flying,reads minds,and sorcery
civvies:nothing special
hero outfit:none
status:in a relationship(i'm goin to put him and Klei together)
Family:all dead
BG story:He ran away from his utama in mexico to find a new life that could be lebih succesful. Where he met Klei and fell in Cinta with her in Gotham city.He's been with the young justice members since he got together with Klei.
Hobbies:Plays guitar,listens to music,does martial arts and kickboxing,

Hope anda all like it.<3<3<3<3
please read lebih artikel-artikel sejak me please
 Klei and Elliot's dream wedding
Klei and Elliot's dream wedding
posted by Robin_Love
 Cat
Cat
Sorry for the bad ending


Her feet swung high above the floor from her kerusi, tempat duduk on the counter. He stood right beside her, mixing things in a bowl. The smell of cookies, biskut floated everywhere. She giggled when he put a dollop of frosting on her nose and he laughed when she tried to lick it off. He handed her a napkin, still laughing a little. She smiled and wiped it off as he pulled the now finished cookies, biskut from the oven.
“They smell yummy!”
“They have to cool before anda can eat any.”
She pouted at him, her cat ears pinning back.
“How long?”
Scott smiled at her patiently.
“At least 15 minutes.”...
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posted by khanna266
name:Victor Sohma-Lee
age:17
alias:Cancer(the zodiac)
civvies:black short hair,grey eyes fair skin,doesn't have specific civvies
Hero outfit: Black tux and black hat
personality:mysterious but very sweet he's very quiet,and loves to cause a bit of mischief e very now and then.powers:calls for help of the spirits,black magic,shoots poison darts from wrists,and can speak to demons
BG story:Victor is very troubled and has a hard time concentrating on things,He was sent to Earth with his sister Rei to prevent the evil from spreading all over the Earth he would like to cause some mischief and find a utama on Earth and areason to stay.He becomes best Friends with Daniel Star'gei.
 Victor just arriving to earth
Victor just arriving to earth
Name:August robins
Age:14
looks like:long white hair,red eyes,6"4,girly
civvies:pink shirt,short jeans,gray ankle boots,black knee highs,black bracelets and belt
Haero outfit;red hati, tengah-tengah shaped mask,pink mini dress with red hati, tengah-tengah and a red cape that turns into a whip
Alias:Cupid girl
Powers:hypnotizesany boy villian to fall in Cinta with her and potions
weapons:cape that turns into a whip
family:unknown
friends:becomes best Friends with Klei
BG:One hari when August was 5 she woke up not remembering anything but her name at a train station and when she woke up she noticed she had gotten powers and had white hair and red eyesshe got her powers from a mysterious tornado while she was knocked out

btw when she was born she was born with red hair and blue eyes.

she has a massive crush on all the boys and doesn't want to decide who she likes most She even berkata Batman and Superman were cute.
<3<3<3
please comment
 her civvies
her civvies
posted by GlitterPuff
 My Rene Drawing
My Rene Drawing
Rene sat on the edge of the buildings’ roof, looking down and the people below. In her hands, she held a white wire kot hanger. Slowly, she wrapped her fingers around the hook part, causing the whole hanger to glow a light yellow. The red head sighed as she let go of it, returning the hanger to its natural form. Rene stood up, walked off the building, landing on her feet at the bottom without a broken bone; and walked away.

As she came down a small alley way, a shadow passed over her. Quickly, she turned; but saw nothing but the brick wall. Shrugging, she turned and continued walking. Moments...
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posted by MafiaYJ
Mafia sat on the meja, jadual at mount justice. No one had been there in ages, and she was unsure how this meja, jadual survived, let alone manages to hold her weight. She sighed, running a hand through her hair. She had only been a few times, and the last time she was, she met Atticus. Her mind mind wandered. Atticus. He was nice, and treated her well. And she respected him, and he thought her powers were... cool. No one had ever thought so before. And she had scared him with the snake thing. She personally thought it was cute.
Mafia looked at where the sofa should have been when she sat seterusnya to him. She...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Arson in Civies
Arson in Civies
Name: Arson
Alias: Hatter
Occupation: Hero..
Powers: He has the telepathic ability to make people believe they are insane atau to do anything he wants them to; expert with blades and weapons; plays on people's fear; flexibility
History: Arson is the son of Blade and Terror. He was raised with both parents, but with his father's ability to know fear. While Arson can not display someone's fear, he can make them go crazy in a world he creates in their minds. Arson was trained to fight and menanggung, bear weapons. He was taught never to fear the dark but befriend it. While he understands the world humans live in,...
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OOC: this will be a short part, and afther this there will be one lebih small part in this teme.

Twan sat in his room cleaning his gun as his celphone rang, he awserd it and heard a slitly panict voice on the other end.
Twan ?
Yes it is me Babs, somting wrong? Your voice soundes worryd.
It is pinguin he got Batman and robing capterd at the docks.
Thad fat bird never learns his lesson. He berkata whit a angry voice, but he soon callemd himself agien.
Oke stai were anda are i will be there in a sec.
Oke but pleas hurry i got no idee wat pinuin will do to them.

Babs was waiting in the jalan as a motercykel...
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posted by Robin_Love
Hands moved the hair out of her face and a smile came to her lips. She opened her eyes and the smile died from her face when she saw who it was. He just gave a little smile as he watched her sit up in bed. She ignored his presence and moved into the spacious closet to change.
“Well good morning to anda too.”
“What do anda want?”
“You already know.”
“I'll have your head on a platter.”
He laughed slightly and moved the hair out of his dark eyes.
“Would anda like me to say it?”
“No. Not that anda care.”
“True. What I want is you. Your power. That thing inside of anda that keeps you...
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"Or what, sissy? anda gonna stop me and the gang from messin' up the kid's face here?" The three other boys smirked as they knew they had the number advantage. But the girl also gave a tiny smirk. "Yeah, I think I will."

The pack laughed.

"You-you've got to be kidding! Hahaha!" Billy managed to get out as he laughed. "You and what army? Ahahahaha!" But she continued to give them a smirk. "Well..."

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As if on cue, a blur rushed out from behind a bush, its target Billy. Before he could even register what the blur was, the boy slammed his elbow into Billy's face, sending him to the dirt. The...
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If anda missed out..and I know the last one was "part 4" but I meant "part 3"

"Ahem.." A voice broke the vampire from his feeding and he turned with a annoyed look. "Damian, would anda please stop harassing my sister..?"
~~~

I felt my breath hitch, and a huge lump of razors stuck in my throat, and I fought forcefully to fight back tears. "D..ante..?"
"Blade.." He narrowed his gaze and gave a me soft smile.
"Yo..di..d.." I couldn't push it out. My brother made his way between me and Damian and gave a me a hug.

Was he this strong.. .before.. he di..left?

"It's a long story, Kiddo, but I'm back now,...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Eachen Story ( ee-kin ) (( i changed his name shhhh))

Villian Name: Vile

Age: 19

Appearance: dirty blonde hair and green eyes.

Relations: Lucas Story is his younger brother.

Powers/Skills: he has viles that he keeps with him that give him strength and power. Depending on his intake of the substance the lebih power he gains. Combat skills.

Personality: he is very self centered and only benefits himself, though he secretley has a hati, tengah-tengah he tries to take over that feeling sejak greed and power.

Villian suit: he wears army paint on his cheeks and has a black hooded jacket, with black pants and combat...
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