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posted by monLOVEbrucas
poem 1

The step that I took
The fear in my eyes
That electric feel that ran through my body
It got me where I am today.
It made me who I am because I am with you.
It got me to realize that things do come true,
And fairy tales aren’t always dreams.
anda and your self make me smile when I sleep at night.
And when I think about it, it always feels so right to be here with you.

poem 2

And in the end I followed my hati, tengah-tengah but tore his all apart.
I mean where we going to last.
Was it lust atau Cinta we were feeling?
I take his hand and Ciuman it goodbye
All I see is tears in his eyes.
How can I turn and walk away
How can I live with myself?
When I am putting him through so much pain?
I made him believe that we were meant to be
I made him believe that together forever him and me.
I know what his thinking
I know what I have to do.
I have to choose him over my self
I have to stay with this boy
Who in the end I could never love
But life is pain.
added by khfan12
Broken wings;
sitting there crying,
is an Angel dying,
clutching her broken wing,
whilst trying to piece together her broken ring,
why has she been chosen for this fate,
this angel, does got not appreciate?
her heavenly tears flowing,
as she can feel her life is going,
her hati, tengah-tengah is hurting,
she feels she hasn't done enough for gods earnings,
drip drop, drip drop,
her tears come to a sudden stop,
shes telah diberi up on her halo,
shes telah diberi up on her wings,
if this is gods will,
she will force herself to fulfill,
in life and death this is what she choose to follow,
and now she will wait until tomorrow,
she knows what...
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posted by _Blackhearts_xx
Black roses;
They became the Ros that where once red,
They became this Black when my hati, tengah-tengah bled,
They Represent my Sorrows,
They represent the path my hati, tengah-tengah follows,
Black roses;
the symbol of my heart,
this is what it became, once i fell apart


Black roses,
there's a beauty hidden in this Darkened rose,
as it Stands innocently Maintaining its pose,
A beauty that Attracts those who have gone astray,
it frees them of thier hearts pain,
Black roses;
So beautiful anda are,
Your as raidient as a shining star

Razor blade roses,
free me of your grip,
as your sharp ends are causing my skin to split,
Theres nothing like this pain,
but for this moment, i will let the blood rain,
the beauty pours from its core,
Spreading eagerly across its Petal covered floors,
Pain becomes pleasure,
As this rose is tempting me with its beauty,
free me from your grip,
and let the blades slip



i hpoe anda like them (:
I had to do this for creative writing, and since this site is severely lacking, I figured I'd give it a shot.

For my Creative Penulisan Class

The Faith Healer

He berkata to her, “I can cure you.”
Wide eyed and desperate, she believed him. She had been to doctors, and hospitals, and oncologists galore. And his hands were soft, and his eyes inviting. She trembled in his embrace as he tried to soothe her aching fears.
“I’m tired of waiting,” she breathed, her chest rattling with effort.
He kissed her forehead and stroked her hair, holding onto her as if his own life depended on it. She pulled her...
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posted by mars15
What i believe that i know

I don’t care what they think
I don’t care what the world thinks
I will be who I want to be
I will do whatever I want

I know that I’m alone.
I know that I will be at the bottom.
But I believe that even down
I will raise my head up high!
Nobody will stop me –
To do atau to say
What I believe that I know!

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Game with life

Life is the hardest game
And if anda are weak, you’re going to lose
But if anda face the problems and be strong
You will win
But anda will just win yourself
Cause life is always the winner
And life will always win over you...
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posted by rockzsanders
Ok, for my english class earlier this year, I had to write a 10 paragraph story about a person who meets a genie, makes a wish, and it goes horribly wrong. Hope anda like it!
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My name is Sadie Castro. I’m a 16-year-old girl at Upper Crest High School. I thought being the most popular girl in school was everything. Boys, people always wanting to hang out with you, BOYS!! God, was I ever wrong. Three weeks lalu was the worst time of my life…
    I was always what people called your “Typical Nerd.” anda know, glasses, braces, weird hair and clothes. On Friday nights,...
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posted by Cinders
 Larry the labu
Larry the Pumpkin
The labu Poem
I shall call it the labu Poem
Because it is short and fat, like Larry
Who also looks like a pumpkin

When I was a junior in high school, I tried to gather together 365 poems together so I could make a calender. Actually, my target was at least four hundred, so I could weed out the bad ones. I Lost the introduction that I wrote for my teacher, but these poems are based on Rawak thoughts I'd have at one point atau another throughout the day. Most are funny, some are not. Generally, it's kind of how I like to see life. Happy, amusing, but very precious. So I present to anda the Unfinished...
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Source: Me and paint.
posted by Booyahboy
I wrote this poem, its not very gd, but i wanted some criticism, so i figured...well, here goes



Skeletal Kiss

Kisses from a skeleton.
A hand that cannot touch.
A nose that can't pick up the scent
Of perfumed skin, as such.

Sweet nothings from a skeleton,
Inspired sejak sightless eye.
Words tainted, sejak the rotted lips
Through which they must pass by.

Embraces from a skeleton.
The fault of broken heart,
Which used to rest in marrow cage
But now is gone, in part.

Cinta comes not from a skeleton,
From death, from lack of life.
It only lives in memory
Which lives through after life.




Ok, be honest, What do anda guys think?
posted by Little_Cullen
Hi everyone this is a poem I wrote the other day, I think it's supposed to have some hidden meaning, like, anda know, money can't buy happiness and if anda try to buy it your being ripped off... atau something... To be honest I don't really remember what I was thinking when I wrote it. Anyways, what do anda think?

A Bag Of Happiness

I skip on down to the market,
With my pocket full of of magic beans,
I hand them to the vendor,
“A bag of happiness, please.”

He passes me over a drawstring bag,
Made of velvet, inky black,
I thank him with a friendly smile,
He smiles eerily back.

I hurry utama and pull the string,
Glad nobody was near,
But my face fell as I looked inside,
The little bag was bare.
A little motavational poem I found link. Enjoy. ;P



At age 4, success is...not peeing in your pants.
___At age 12, success is...having friends.
____At age 16, success is...having a driver's license.
_______At age 20, success is...having sex.
________At age 35, success is...having money.
________At age 50, success is...having money.
_______At age 60, success is...having sex.
_____At age 70, success is...having a driver's license.
___At age 75, success is...having friends.
At age 90, success is...not peeing in your pants.
posted by blisslikethis
so, here are a couple lebih old poems i dug up and decided to post. the first is one that came out of a period of intense creativity (ah if only i had the time nowadays). the saat was a creative Penulisan assignment that i never got around to finishing, so i apologize if the end is a bit abrupt. once again, any feedback is greatly appreciated :).

stargazing

i dream in broad daylight
of an old front porch swing
where i sit cradling my guitar
singing anda a song
while your paintbrush splashes sunbeams
across my upturned face

paint drips
in pelangi, rainbow rivulets
down your sun-kissed skin
your eyes are filled with...
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"when ever I try 2 forget u. U Never let me Happen 2 forget U ! I dont know why U always do - Let me always Remind U !" I Remember, U make me SMILE when ever I m CRY. I Remember, U make me CRAZY when ever new think's I TRY!" I see ur smile in my MIRROR. I listen ur words in my EAR. Please just leave me alone for FOREVER !" U just think about Ur self , Ur life ! U just think about ur work, Ur Pride ! What about me I m Nowhere & u also just dont CARE !! " I still Remember that hari when U say " I have to go !" I say " Please dont go , I Need U !" & u say "My country Need me lebih than...
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added by MajorDork74
Sophia was not like ordinary children. She did not run as fast, nor dress the same, atau even live in the same kind of house. In fact, Sophia was never a child inside from the age of five. On the eve of her fifth birthday, she had gone to bed, as weary and happy as ever, but, unlike most children of age five, she did not have peaceful dreams of Rama-rama and Pari-pari all in a meadow together. In truth, she had a terrible nightmare, one that should not come to children of that age.
She dreamt of a bus, not a school bus, atau one that people use to get off and on again and again, but a black, shiny...
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posted by edward-lover456
shadows in the night
every one keeps telling me i'll be alright
I tell myself i'll never be the same
as long as i know his name
he made me fall in love
we never have to fight
he makes me fell alright
he is a merpati the sign of love
to feel the love
it fits like a sarung tangan
Cinta send from above
shadows in the night
we never fight
people tell me i'll be alright
i no i won't untell he comes back to me
that will set me free
we can be
the showdows in the night
he came back to me
posted by Lila856
(k so this is a story my friend emailed me!! CAUTION: SOME MAY FIND IT OFFENSIVE)

I had been with my girlfriend for a year, but when I left my job at the bank, we broke up. I was okay with that, we had never connected, atau maybe just never had the time to as my job was 12 hours a day.

After leaving my old life - my job, girlfriend and utama in Los Angeles, I moved to a smaller town in California.

I struggled to carry all my luggage into the building my apartment was in, after getting out of the cab. When I stepped into the elevator, I saw her. I saw her like the men in the Filem see the women...
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added by roxy_cutegirl