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Since a couple of people enjoyed my last poem, maybe they'll enjoy this one just as much.

Warning: Includes the cutting of skin

Throbbing

Glass shattered,
Blood was smeared.
A cut in my arm,
Was greatly feared.

I tried again,
It felt to right.
Until it hurt.
Just that one night.

My blood flowed,
My arm throbbed.
And when it stopped,
I cried and sobbed.

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really good! =)
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NarutoFangirl said:
This is awesome! But in the line "It felt to right" the wrong 'to' is used. The correct one would be TOO.
:) Well, it's good still
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